FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[:: Dress or Undress Ed ::]

A decent game.

^^Good Points^^
I thought that the drawings were good. Looked just like the character from the TV show. There were a bunch of different items to choose from in this game, which made this pretty fun.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seemed really cramped to me. It was hard for me to navigate around and place objects somewhere when they were not being used. Give the user some extra room to move stuff around. Also, you should add some FMA music to this (the new theme is great).

rabi87 responds:

Hi hi, thanks for the review. I appreciate it! :) Hehe, I'm still trying to figure out how to organize the clothing into tabs of some sort. ^^ Again, thanks for the advice and I'm off to figure out how to insert music into flash! =o

[Frontwards Complete]

Fix the errors

^^Good Points^^
Again, this has good drawings and such. There is a myriad of items to choose from making this very entertaining and quite fun to play around with. Again, you've got a nice music choice.

^^Needs Improving^^
You've already said most of the problems I was going to put in here in your intro. I'm not sure if you know, but you can edit a submission through the "Portal Submissions" section of your Account Options page instead of resubmitting the fixed game.

fckin-clum responds:

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[ExTreme ClOck SoUndboArd]

Eh, kind of lame.

^^Good Points^^
I liked the intro to this and also the background music. I don't think i've ever heard the music, but it is pretty funny. This is also very good for making an actual prank call since you made all the sounds yourself. There are lots of replies and greeting, all of the stuff you need for a good soundboard.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm always want to like Clock submissions, but this is just a little lame. You went into Speakonia and made some sounds. Not a real lot of talent there, seeing how I rip the music for all my boards. You could have atleast added some different tones to emulate different clocks. Also, the pictures screen has a total of three pictures. Could use some more.

Frenzy responds:

Yes, well, if I was going to do it for something else, I wouldn't have very many sounds, and this soundboard wouldn't really be good for prank calls, would it? No. That's what I wanted to achieve with this soundboard.

Thanks for reviewing.

[Contra 20th Anniversary]

Very nice.

^^Good Points^^
Contra III is one of my favorite games of all times, definitely my favorite SNES side-scroller. This tribute to it is very appropriate and very well made. The levels appeared just like the levels from the original game, and the game play was accurate as well. I liked the options before playing, they add a lot of interactivity and custumizablity to this game.

^^Needs Improving^^
Perhaps a level you made would be nice? Or atleast something more original.

Jhunour responds:

good idear! thanks!

[Best Christmas Collab]

Good collab throughout.

^^Menu^^
Liked the music the most. Very chrismasy, yet not a song that I've heard used before, so it's original. The names are interactive, which is a nice touch as well. The menu could use some sprucing up though, it doesn't look too chrismasy.

^^Orunitia^^
It's got the classic "make fun of emo" music. The graphics are pretty good. I liked the shading and shadows, and the snowflakes drift very realistically. Just a little short.

^^Wesdood^^
Love the music. It's really up beat and quite entertaining. The game itself comtains minor entertainment for a little while, but nothing too exciting, but fit's the collab well. The drawings are good too.

^^Tommaycry^^
Err...A little bit weird. Not sure who this Omar guy is, but if it's an inside joke it's not really funny. Doesn't really fit the mood of the whole collab either.

^^Towley^^
Very good. It's a quick and fun little game. It wouldn't really work as a stand along game because it is too simplistic, but it is perfect for a collab such as this one.

^^Juliusas^^
Pretty strange as well. Exploding pizza, then getting shot by Santa Clause. Good drawings though.

^^Overall^^
A very good collab that contains both interactivity and some pretty decent films as well.

Review Request Club

wesdood responds:

All I do all day is make fun of emos. Fight the people fighting the system when I'm keeping the system in line by brawling with it. Kthx.

[Mousemaze #2]

a big improvement

^^Good Points^^
After just playing the first version of this game, I am impressed with the amount of improvement this second version has recieved. The level designs are better, the added check points make failing less annoying, and the survival levels are a cool idea. This was much better.

^^Needs Improving^^
Still, the levels are without a lot of graphical spark and are very boring. Add some fancy graphics or something to make this more appealing.

curnimurnihurniburni responds:

I've started working on a third version :P just because these are easy to make. but i will, as many people suggested: improve graphics, add more sound, background music, background, levels. etc.

[Flasteroids]

This I can like.

^^Good Points^^
This game is original. I've never seen a game exactly like this one. I found the graphics to be subtle, you very impressive. For example, I liked how some start, meant to be further away, move down slower than ones meant to look closer, giving a sense of realism in this. The smooth movements of the ship also looks cool and makes the game fun to play. This game is very well made, is challenging, and not to mention, fun to play.

^^Needs Improving^^
There really isn't anything I can think of to improve this, sorry.

iVisual responds:

Thanx. Well there are some things i need to improve but never mind ;)

[Space Invaders: Reborn]

Basically stolen

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were nicely done. The gradients were subtle yet made the game look very nice. The game worked fine as well. As far as I can see there aren't any bugs that hurt game play a lot.

^^Needs Improving^^
I've seen many games just like this one, probably using the same exact script come through the portal. The game works just like them and this isn't very original at all, and I hate when stuff is unoriginal. Next time make a game that doesn't already exist in five hundred other forms.

iVisual responds:

Ok....