FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[all around tutorial]

Some good info here

^^Good Points^^
This tutorial has quite a bit of stuff in it, mainly in the AS and animating sections and some of it I found to be quite useful. The explanations were plain and simple and easy to follow. I liked the music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lot of this stuff has already been put into countless tutorials that are easier to locate than this one. The tutorial itself is kind of ugly with the red backround and the overall graphical style isn't very pleasant.

yodd responds:

Wow thanks for reviewing all my works (well two for sure). And you actually told me what I did well and not so well, both are appreciated! I didn't think the backround was that bad and stuff >:(. But thats your opinion, thanks for a great review yet again!

[Test Your Might]

Didn't really work...

^^Good Points^^
The game seems to be well made. There are a variety of different types of question types and this is much better than the traditional multiple chioce quizzes. I liked the themesong section and the gun section. This is an innovative quiz and I hope you make more.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, I couldn't get through this quiz. Twice I got an error message saying the script cause Flash to run slowly. This never has happened in any other game, so I assume the problem is on your end...

mudvaynian182 responds:

Thanx for the feedback, i think iv found and fixed the problem. let me know if it happens again.

[]{ombat interactive]

A fansite in a flash movie!

^^Good Points^^
Let's see, you've got all of the characters from the original MK in here with their moves and bio and so forth. This is a neat little collection of everything and is easier than downloading a bunch of fatatlity videos.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could have added some more characters. I don't know why you just stopped at the MK1 characters. Also, I don't see why the Stats info is on the secret page. It would make more sense in the character page itself.

jack-o-sticks responds:

thank you for your insight but i thought that it would be better to have the mk 1 mk 2 mk 3 mk 4 seperate i mean this size of this is over 3000mb
and there is a 5000mb upload limit but i will be submitting further work in the ]{ombat interactive series so keep witing

[SBC Soundboard __ o_O]

Umm...

I'm not quite sure what to say about this soundboard. It's extremely similar to the one submitted on -Frenzy-'s account, so I don't really see much of a point in this. Since you didn't rip the sounds yourself and just typed some stuff into Speakonia, you could have added a ton more sounds to make a better soundboard with more possiblities. I liked how you separated each section though. I found three buttons that didn't work at all.

Kronzo-Productions responds:

Thanks for reviewing! I made this before my other one, and I just toguht I'd submit it.

[NBA Quiz v 1.0]

I guess if I were into basketball...

^^Good Points^^
I liked how you didn't just make this a straight-up quiz, but made it a lot more interesting by making this sort of like a job interview, which was pretty creative. The losing scene was a funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
There seems to be some audio problems with music overlapping. I didn't really enjoy playing this game, but then again, I really don't know anything about basketball, so maybe those who do will get some more entertainment out of this.

ElMaster responds:

"There seems to be some audio problems with music overlapping"
Yeah I forgot to add a stopallsounds to the replay button.

Thx for the review

[Fantasy Female]

Not so good

^^Good Points^^
There are a lot of different styles to choose from in this game. Many different items that are easy to choose between and toggle.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your drawings were decent, but not at all up to par with some of the stuff I've seen lately here on NG. I'm not really getting the whole easter egg thing in this, it doesn't seem to be of much use.

Syrsly responds:

It's old. Try version seven. Better yet, try version eight on DeviantArt or SheezyArt.

[Ultimate Newgrounds Quiz!]

I'm not too enthused

I'm really not too impressed after playing this game. I wouldn't quite dub it as the "ultimate". My first suggestion, is that since this is a NG quiz, it should be more NG themed, mainly in the layout and color scheme. The green just doesn't cut it. Then there is the whole thing with level fifteen not working, which is really a drag. Also, like the previous review said, this isn't too original, and the questions are a little overdone in NG quizes. One thing I did like was that you gave the viewer the option of going to the main menu after every question.

Kronzo-Productions responds:

Okay then... thanks for your review.

By the way, what happened to your ^^Good Points^^, ^^Needs Improving^^ format?