FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Uniwar Level 1 SE]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This was really good for its old age. The game play was pretty smooth. Detection was fair, and the mini-bosses and bosses really set this apart from some other games. It's neat how it switched perspectives as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm sure you've already gotten this, but you should work on the walking animations of the people. Also, try not to use pixilated pictures. Make your own art instead. It will look a lot nicer.

[HK Mobs]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were really quite cool. I like how you drew your characters, and the development of the storyline was just enough to introduce the game. Cool music too.

^^Needs Improving^^
When I played the first time, I had no idea what I was doing when the fight started. You should have included instructions or something for this. After I figured it out, the fighting got a little repetitive.

[SWAT]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The game isn't too poorly made. It's kind of funny how it's based off of a bad acid trip, which made me laugh. I wasn't expecting to be shooting clowns. Boss battles were a good addition.

^^Needs Improving^^
Shooting is a bit hard. It's really hard to hit some things, especially projectiles. Should have made the targets a little bigger. Also, I think the zombies should have fell down after you hit them a few times instead of still walking.

[AEvil]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Not only is it the first game submitted to the portal, but it's not too bad at all. The graphics were surprisingly good, especially the backgrounds. The game play was cool too. The Carnage points made this more interesting, and the detection was good.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I would really work on is the zombie graphics. They weren't animated all that well, and the drawings could improve as well.

[Glory Arrow]

K

^^Good Points^^
The game seemed to work fairly well. The arrows' physics were pretty good, and controlling the game wasn't hard at all. With some improvement I think it could be a lot better.

^^Needs Improving^^
It shouldn't take like three arrows to kill each person, that was just annoying. Also, I don't like the dark graphics in this. Should have been able to see a little better.

[Stick adventures game]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, this game wasn't too bad. You had decent animations and decent drawings for the platforms and such. I liked the music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game is very glitchy. For one, it seems like you land on any level of a platform just randomly. Sometimes on top and sometimes in the middle. You can also walk through some walls if timed right. I think you need to change the themes of each level a little more. Level two looked only slightly different than level one.

[Sandwich Cooking Game]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very cute and original game. I liked the little guys that helped make the sandwich they were cool, and overall the game had a real cool feeling to it. The graphics were nice, and the game was easy to play around with. Not hard to get the hang of.

^^Needs Improving^^
I had a hard time reading the stuff on the right during the main menu. I saw the instructions page, then didn't realize there was a next button. I think you need to make those buttons stand out more. I wasted a bit of time fiddling around not know what the heck I was doing because of this.

[Bunny DressUp]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics weren't too bad on this one. You have some decent drawing skills, as well as a good enough knowledge to make a game such as this. Seemed to function fairly well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main thing is that you need to optimize both graphics and audio. There is no way this was optimized, seeing how it was almost 8 MB. I assume most of this comes from the music.

[Rock-O-Meter]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like the storyline and objective of the game, which is pretty realistic for a garage band. The music was cool too, definitely fit the characters you drew.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game was really odd to play. I'm not sure if I was even doing it right, as no matter what I did I failed the first level. There doesn't seem to be any syncing involved in this at all, and the game is just awkward to play.