FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flash Break Dancing]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the break dancing beat, that was a pretty cool song.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it's missing quite a bit for me. First off, if you hit D twice, it goes back to the menu, which is really annoying. Also, there's no real way to win this game. It's supposed to be a battle from what I can see, but the game is more just making random moves that don't flow by hitting buttons.

[CollectIt (original)]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, this wasn't a bad collection game. It ran smoothly and detection was pretty good as well. I liked the music in the background and different difficulties were great.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't of great quality, and they looked a bit too basic to me. I also thought there wasn't much to set this apart from other collection games. Just seemed run of the mill.

[Bunny Killer Deluxe]

K

^^Good Points^^
I have to say, I was surprised by this game. I actually played it all the way through and got to the bonus. The graphics were decent, and I liked how the screen shook after you shot.

^^Needs Improving^^
The detection could be improved, I felt that I lost a lot because of it. Also, shouldn't the shotgun sound play when you shoot, rather than just when you hit a bunny. Would make more sense to me.

[SMW Scene Creator]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good scene creator. At first, I couldn't figure out how to get different backgrounds, but then I found that by sliding them, you could use any part of the level. This is very cool, since now there are an endless number of backgrounds with this unique tool. Lots of sprites to use, and cool background music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
It would be nice if the symbols duplicated themselves, so you could have more than one, and also a clear button would be great.

[BPO Disk]

K

^^Good Points^^
Seems like a strong contender for the Rock Out contest. The game play was really smooth, and the arrows seemed to be synced really well with the music. Definitely got harder as you went on, with the rotation and such. Fun game.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't like the transition from song to song. Just a bit of a gap in between where arrows still go. Also, would be better if you could choose a difficulty and just have really fast arrows instead of rotation.

[ytmnd soundboard part 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
The sound quality was relatively good for each sound. All of the buttons seemed to work fine to me.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphically this wasn't too pleasing. The buttons overlapped each other a lot since you didn't really trace them or anything. A lot of the images didn't really seem related, or at least weren't from the YTMND's their musing was from. Could use some text to go with the pictures or something. Just not graphically pleasing.

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jacktherack responds:

NOBODY EXPECTS THE SPANISH INQUESITION!!!

[TLOEG Soundboard]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a very good soundboard. I see you took my advice and decided to put in the quiz and some other extra features. I think it really turned out nice when finished. There weren't many sounds on this, but everything else made up for that.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just clean up the graphics a bit, other than that it was really good.

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Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the comments! And yeah, thanks for the quiz idea!

~ Z

[Clock Hentai Quiz]

K

^^Good Points^^
It was truly an interesting quiz. The questions didn't make any sense, but I got a laugh out of the pictures at the end. I was expecting something actually drawn, but the clock pictures were still rather funny. Good idea.

^^Needs Improving^^
The questions should have had real answers instead of just random ones.

Little-Rena responds:

I was too tired and lazy to draw when I did this, but thanks. I was going to make really questions, but again, I was too lazy :(

Thanks for the review.

[=Bounce Physics Tutorial=]

K

^^Good Points^^
It does what it promises. You had selectable AS, which is good, and the explanation was pretty cool too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Still needed some more. You need to explain better what changing any variable will do. Also, some applications of this would be nice. Just looks like a tween to me. How can I interact with it, etc.