FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Office Frenzy]

K

^^Good Points^^
Fun little game. Quick game play, yet pretty addicting and pretty fun to play. The graphics are nice. Both the background drawings and the animations are pretty cool, and the concept is good. The portal is definitely a better place with this game included in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could use some nice sound effects to spice it up. The play feild is a little smaller than I would have liked as well.

[Pong Pong Revolution]

K

^^Good Points^^
Fun game to play. Probably one of the better Pong remakes on NG and on the web. The customizable controls are great, and the different game modes allow for a lot of replay ability. The music is a nice choice and the game is pretty fun to play. The power ups seem to be creative as well, and add a lot to the game experience.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting this to incorporate something a little more from DDR... All you did was use the song "bethoven virus" and have some of the same sound effects like in the menu. Nothing else really has to do with DDR. You got my hopes up for nothing.

polnareff responds:

Actually, I didn't use Beethoven Virus, I considered it, but didn't. The song title is in the credits...the reason I used the name Pong Pong Revolution was because it was original and also meant the revolution of pong. I tried to think of a way to incorporate DDR with Pong...but it all ended up sounding dumb =P

Thanks for the comment though.

[Camcorder simulator #1]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a neat idea for a game...I've never seen it done before. The sound effects were good, and the game is really quite challenging and hard to get a hang of since the controls are reversed. I had some fun trying to play this game and get it down right, but to no avail.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should give people the option of easy or hard...easy being regular controls (Left button moves left etc) and hard, which would keep the controls as they are now. I would have liked to see you draw more of the backgrounds. Pictures just aren't very interesting.

[Demon Dress Up]

K

^^Good Points^^
I think you definitely have some atristic talent when it comes to flash. For the most part, the drawings were very good. Your clothing varied quite a bit from piece to piece, and there were lots of other iteresting non-clothing pieces.

^^Needs Improving^^
For some reason all of the pieces seem to be very laggy when you try to move them around. I have no possible solution to this, but it's something to work on. Also, the fishnet stockings are really hard to grab on to seeing how they are only grabable on the actual black part of the stocking. Make it a multi-layered and make an outline of the stocking, then change the fill alpha to zero. That should do the trick.

[My Mr. Burns Soundboard]

K

^^Good Points^^
Mr. Burns is a hilarious character sometimes, and I think you captured a lot of his funny moments. You even had my favorite clip from him "me no speaki chini". Nice job in the sound department. This is pretty decent for a first soundboard.

^^Needs Improving^^
This has thirty two sounds, which isn't really a whole lot. You should add some basic questions/greetings/replies to make this more prank call friendly. The look of it is also not very appealing. The way you cropped Mr. Burns just looks horrible, and the whole "don't click me" part is just weird.

EvilKillingPinetree responds:

Yah i kno i neeed more basic sound thing but i kept searchinbg and culden't find even a simple hello so eventually i just gave up. Sry bout cropping but o well. Ouch thing was just to add more its just one of those things i add 2 see if ppl notice

[Pattern maker]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty neat game, and I had fun playing around with it. The many different options in this make it fun to play around with, and you can't really get a better filesize for a game anyway. Quick, and fun to play around with.

^^Needs Improving^^
I have a few suggestions on how to make this better. First off, once you get a good, complex pattern going, the box gets really hard to see, even if you turn up the opacity. Perhaps you should somehow make the alpha of the drawing lower until the author wants to preview it, in order to see the box easier. I also would like to be able to change the size of the drawing box.

Rantzien responds:

Thank you, I will see about your suggestions.

[Scene Editor]

K

^^Good Points^^
There are lots of items in this game, many different faces, clock bodies, and lots of weapons and fun stuff to play around with. I made some pretty funny looking characters. Not a bad scene creator.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main thing I didn't like is that there is only one background option, and it is a very small background. Basically you can put one clock in there, and that is about it. The items are also pretty random. A lot of them have nothing to do with the CC, and you chose a lot of clock bodies of either clocks that don't exist, or are not very popular at all.

V1C70R responds:

:)

[nudity]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is pretty cool actually. Everything in this game is pretty abstract, but it's really quite interesting. The animations were the best in this, and the drawings were kind of neat as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
There really isn't much to do in this game. You can click on stuff, but that is about all, and once you click on something, the action happens, and then we are done with that. It doesn't effect anything else or really cause anything to happen. This needs to be more interactive with actually some kind of goal involved.