FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ways of Death]

K

^^Good Points^^
One thing I liked about this was the way the menu was set up. It's easy to choose a death, then go back and choose another.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, the graphics are really bad, mainly the drawings. Your shotgun really is just two lines, same thing with your handgun drawing. You really need to work on the drawings, then worry about the terrible animations. The different death options weren't too creative either. The average guns and knives...nothing really out of the ordinary. The sound effects were incredibly annoying too. I hated the sound that went off when you moved over a button. It was just an annoying, high-pitched sound that really distracted me from watching the scenes.

[Ways of Death II]

K

^^Good Points^^
I actually thought this was decent. Probably better than most people think it is. I liked the way the menu worked and how you chose the different deaths. Some of the sound effects, like the grunting were cool, and the slow motion scenes were a nice touch.

^^Needs Improving^^
Obvioulsly, the graphics aren't that good. You used stick figures, which is ok as long as you animate them well, which you didn't do. You seemed to overuse a lot of sound effects too, like the one that sounds when the baseball hits the guys head.

[SlipKnot:The game]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was good. Atleast you put a Slipknot song in here, and it's one of the few songs by them that is actually half decent.

^^Needs Improving^^
Shooting people? That's the game? Not very fun. Especially considering how the targets don't move at all and don't fight back at all. Not to mention that the targets are all the same character who happens to look like he is fapping. There is no time limit either, so there is really no point in counting how many people the player killed. I don't really see what you were trying to accomplish by making this game.

[Celebémon Salon]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics in this game are definitely pretty good. Your drawings are very nice and I like how you made the designs look like they were for sale in a package.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the idea of this. A lot of the celebemon's don't really look like who they are supposed to look like, which really defeats the purpose of this whole game. It also isn't very fun just to look through a slideshow of pictures you made.

[Feedin' the fish!!!]

K

^^Good Points^^
o_o The music was decent, though you just copied it from somewhere else without giving that location credit.

^^Needs Improving^^
Let's see. You used gradients to simulate a cut...wow. That's just so horrible, not to mention you drew blood with the nooby red paintbrush. Really nothing too interesting in this game at all. Why do I want to kill this fish anyway? It's just a stupid fish. Not funny, not a lot of effort, not good looking, not anything good.

[Ravin' Billy]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was the best part about this, but you didn't even make the music, which is the main showcase in this flash movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I hated this. It's just a crappy drawing of a dude with his head moving up and down, nothing else. The best part about this movie was the music, which you didn't make. Congrats on being able to change background colors my friend.

[cool game for ps2 fans!]

K

^^Good Points^^
The part I liked most about this game was the music, which you didn't even make yourself. The bonuses were kind of humorous as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is terrible. There is no way there is enough time in order to react that quickly and also maneuver your mouse quick enough to the little circle in order to hit the button. Give just a bit more time to make this game more bearable. But then the graphics would still be horrible, and the game play would be boring and not creative.

[Pointy's Attack]

K

^^Good Points^^
I don't see why people have voted so low on this game. I found it to really be quite funny! The storyline is kind of odd, which is why I like it. Evil inanimate objects are always funny! The game itself is pretty fun, it's just like a reverse Kaboom! or something. Not a bad game, this should have a higher score.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are the worst parts in this game. Your backgrounds aren't very exciting and are very ameture, as are mostly all the graphics in this. If this had better graphics it would be much more sucessful.

[Stress Relief]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a cute little game. I liked the character you used and the sound effects used were cute as well. The animations weren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't know if this will relieve anyone's stress at all. You should add more scenes first of all. Maybe by clicking "no" when asked Feel better yet? you could send the person to another scene with another death scene for this little guy. I don't really see why the Yes button takes you to the Newgrounds homepage either. That doesn't really make sense to me.

[kill pikachu!!!]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is just udder and complete garbage. Nothing to put up here. Except I guess that you put Ash in here as an added bonus.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, you also have the option of killing Cartman. Why? He has nothing to do with Pikachu or pokemon at all, so why put him in here? The death's weren't very creative at all. Just the average gunshot to the head, a few choppings, and a bomb. You did absolutely no animating, save for the occasional rotation. The blood just looked so fake. When you clicked on Ash, he just turns red and falls over. Also, next time put in some music.