FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[BANANA ATTACK]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Honestly, what I did play I thought was kind of amusing and fun. Controlling a banana for a ship is a funny idea, and honestly, I'd think it'd be a good game if it didn't have some crucial mistakes.

^^Needs Improving^^
The first error you need to address is the scripting. I got a script error, which caused my browser to freeze for a minute. Something in your AS is not quite right. Game could have moved a bit faster too.

[Kill-A-Baby: Baby Joe]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
You at least set this up graphically a lot nicer than most of these random killing games. It wasn't amazing, but still better than most.

^^Needs Improving^^
I've said this with nearly every single random killing game on NG, and it applies to this one as well. This game was boring. You just clicked once and the game was over. You need to add more scenarios or have much better graphics for me to really enjoy this.

[Ball Maze]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Err.

^^Needs Improving^^
This maze game is obviously pretty primitive. I'm not sure I like the idea of the ball doing all the moving and having to click all of the arrows. It makes the game less involved and just easier to run through. Text buttons were really hard to click, like the "undo move?" buttons. Needs some better patterns and more interactivity to it.

[Cat Life (demo version)]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Doesn't seem like a bad idea, in fact it seems rather interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
A very pointless demo. All you can do is go into the alley and kill a cat with a ball of yarn. First off, that makes no sense, second, it takes about ten seconds to finish this demo. A demo should at least have a few minutes of game play and some test of your game's engine, rather than just clicking on a few single items. Really pointless.

[blueclue's clue]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Really the only thing I thought was good about this was Steve. Having his middle finger up was kind of funny, and the sound clip "I wasn't playing with myself" was really funny to add in here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really behind as far as graphics go. You only drew what was really necessary, no nice bckgrounds, etc. Animations weren't too good either, especially the explosion at the end. Really not a challenging game at all, or one that is really fun to play, as it is so easy.

[THE CHICKENATOR 2000]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Heh, a pretty funny concept for a game. Funny how this chicken just snapped and now has to kill flame throwing birds.

^^Needs Improving^^
How long does this game go on for? I spend a long time flying around but I never encountered anything besides the same lame graphics and enemies and the same backgrounds.

[Git Da Pussy]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
It was mildly funny how you used pussy instead of cat. Definitely had some sexual innuendo there. Some tasteful gradients used in the artwork too, not bad graphically.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game itself is a little bit tasteless and crude, and honestly not very fun regardless. It's too simple and far too easy to complete this game. Just your basic point and click shooter, once again.

[Make Me Die Pokémon II]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The graphics weren't too bad in this...well parts of the graphics. The objects you drew looked pretty nice, and you had a tasteful sense of using gradients.

^^Needs Improving^^
Overall, a little disappointing. You go through a lot of pre-killing stuff, and then there are only two lame methods to kill him. You should have added more and made those you had more cinematic.

[Stealth 2: The Mechanic]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I guess the sound effects and music weren't bad. I you won't find buff, half-naked steel workers in any other game either. :s

^^Needs Improving^^
Just like the first episode, the boss is incredibly hard to beat. I had to cheat using the tab button to beat him, and after that the game was over. Should have definitely made this longer. Also, you would think you would get better at making these after you made a few, but this is worse than the first. The detection is awful and hitting enemies is very awkward.