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[Rat DeeJay 2]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A few more things to play around with in this. The most fun I had with this was just holding down my tab button though :(

^^Needs Improving^^
It doesn't add much on top of the first one. There are only a few more beats and the sound clips have been replaced. Also, the Jesus one doesn't seem to fit in here very well with any combination of music.

[Destroy Hulkamania]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I have to say that the best part about this is the paragraph in the beginning, where it describes how the front row of a show got blinded by the reflection on Hulk's shiny head.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game play could definitely improve. I think you used a bit too many "brothers" throughout this and at first when I had to shoot his neck I wasn't sure it was working, as there was no response until after five clicks.

[Flash Keyboard!]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
It worked fairly well. I was able to pump out a off-key version of "Mary Had a Little Lamb" pretty easily with this.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, you have a lot of wasted space on this, and the buttons could have been a lot bigger. Also, I don't see why you didn't put the whole keyboard on here, it would have been a much more versatile game.

[Impeach Clinton!]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
It was kind of funny how you added Brittany Spears into this, that was unexpected. The briefing screens looked better than most games, too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game play however, was disappointing. There was a long lag between clicking and the actual firing of the weapon, which is just slightly annoying. Hitting them isn't hard at all, nor is it really entertaining in the way you presented it. Then you blow up the white house with a terrible quality sound effect.

[Death in Skating]

That wasn't predictable.

I predicted that much from the title that there would be some problems with these tricks. However, why bother with the different tricks? They were all pretty poorly animated and there was no cinematic or dramatic effect unique to each one. Therefore, I could just see the guy die four different times. Why?

I would suggest to do a few of the following. First off, zoom in on each trick and animate it a bit better, so that there is actually some type of reason to click each one. Also, add some sound effects. You've got a guy's head falling off, and no horrendous scream?

[Pokecrap: Kill Ash & PKMN]

(title in work)

Oh boy. Let's see here. First off, I'm not sure why you tried to draw a Pikachu instead of using an image. I'm not sure which would be better though. I always tell people to try and do their own art, but really, your Pikachu was horrendous. But then again, using uncut images doesn't really help you at all.

Anyway, that probably didn't help, but this will. The game play is incredibly boring. You just click on a pokemon a few times, with their faces smiling the whole time. They don't attack or try to run away, it's really quite boring to me. They should have moved around at the very least.

[Car Assasin: Level 1]

(title in work)

The second you start playing the game, you take damage, and there is really no way to avoid that, since the enemies are on the screen and shooting as soon as the game starts. A cheap hit if you ask me. I then played for a little while, and thought it was alright, the difficulty wasn't too bad and it ran pretty smoothly. Then the game got incredibly boring, as the same enemies came out time after time and played the same death sound effect than all of the others. I was about to give up when suddenly a seemingly unbeatable boss pops out. Even by cheating with the tab key couldn't kill him.

What you need to do is make the game more interesting by adding more enemies and sound effects, and perhaps a boss that is actually beatable.

[Operation: Viper Strike]

(title in work)

Well that was a hundred percent disappointing. You had me wanting to play this game with the nice graphics and cool briefing introduction part of this, but then you really disappointed with the whole "thanks for playing my demo" thing. At the very least you should have submitted this as a movie, so that people who were expecting to play a game, like I wouldn't be so disappointed.

[PokéAssAssin: Kill'emDead]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The graphics at least look pretty nice in this. You used some cool backgrounds and decent animations to make these games. Much better than most.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just too boring and unoriginal. It's just like any other pokemon killing game. You click on them and they die. Also, the sound effects got really annoying after a while, hearing their voices over and over.