FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cursor Game]

K

^^Good Points^^
I actually found this game to be kind of interesting. The music is definitely a bold choice, but I think it worked out well, and the sound effects went along with it well. It's really cool all of the custom cursors you put in here, but no one can deny the fun of shooting down evil fairies and communist blimps.

^^Needs Improving^^
No background images is kind of boring. Also, I can see some people not liking the music, so you may want to consider having a button to turn it off somewhere.

[Koopa Chaos]

K

^^Good Points^^
I see you took my advice on making a maze game, and for your first try and it taking only about one day to make, this isn't bad. I like how you added in the many different types of Koopas and also bowser was a neat addition. The music is good of course too.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, it's very easy to cheat in this game. Ask around and find out how to disable right click to make things a lot better. You should also try to use some more sprites for the backgrounds and walls. Try not to use the red and black lines for the borders, it's kind of ugly.

RyuXKen responds:

kk thanx! i think when i edit it, ill put up some new bgs and make koopas animated, oh and get rid of the cheating thing!

[Digital Tunnels]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it's better than the average mouse avoider game, mainly because of the graphics and sound. The graphics were very catch and had a lot of good effects used, and the music was a great choice.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like how the cursor was allowed to move outside the lines. It is just awkward. The game play in this really isn't that much better than the average avoider game. You didn't really add any new features that are unique to this game. I also don't get where the highscores come from, since there are no scores on this game anywhere.

[Gir Dressing Up Game]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very good drawings and shading in this game. You had quite a few items, my favorites were the different suits.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lot of the items didn't make sense. The sunglasses didn't fit any of the pairs of eyes, so I don't see the point in them. You also didn't add any alternative mouths, which was kind of disappointing. I can't even figure out where most of the body parts go either...they just don't seem to fit anywhere.

[Yay Snake Game ^^]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the game play is slightly better than most since the snake doesn't grow at an incredibly slow rate.

^^Needs Improving^^
Listen, anyone with minor AS experience can look at an open source file and change some things around and call it their own game, which is basically what you did. You didn't even add in a good background, and the music was completely unrelated. Poor graphics and nothing different in the gameplay doesn't make this a good game.

[Classic Snake]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, atleast you didn't just copy the code put some crappy background and then submit it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seriously though, this is just as bad as the people who come to NG with some flashkit codes and submit some crappy Snake game. This is really getting bad the amount of Snake games that are submitted, but having one actually pass is just plain stupid. You didn't do anything with this to make it more interesting either, you just put a picture of Donkey Kong. Make a game that's more complex and couldn't just be copied from any tutorial, edited around a bit, and maybe your will get some respect from me.

[Mission Manic]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, some of the drawings were ok, like the people. Actually not that poorly done.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a very boring game. The storyline was lack luster, and I had no idea who this guy was in the strange hat, or why my character kept saying "Hmo". The music is kind of annoying because it restarts all the time. This isn't very boring and I didn't have fun playing it at all.

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[Spot Problems]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess I could say that the few sound effects in this were the best parts about it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Wow, this game is really terrible. Games that are disgusting to play generally aren't like by people, and this one fits that. I didn't play this game for more than ten seconds just because it is in poor taste. If I wanted to pop a bunch of pimples, I'd stand in front of a mirror and get to work, I don't need a game to simulate such a thankless and disgusting job.