FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Training targets]

A good game.

^^Good Points^^
This game is very true to life. The gun looks pretty realistic, as does the surroundings and environments. The sound effects are also very realistic. I liked the many different features in this, like hit percentage, reaction time, etc. The different game modes are fun as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
There were some grammar errors and what not, but other than that, this is a very clean game.

[Ms. Swan soundboard]

Good for use.

^^Good Points^^
This is an original character to make a soundboard on, I've never seen a soundboard on Ms. Swan. There were only twenty-nine sounds, but what I like most about this is that it can probably actually be used to make a good prank call, which is hard to come by in soundboards (even mine). Everything worked fine and I tend to like this soundboard.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use a graphical redo. It's just ugly as it is. Also, there isn't a section for questions, which is imperitive to have. Also, this could use a few more sound clips.

[FOG Chain Reaction]

It's ok.

^^Good Points^^
I've seen reaction games before, but none quite like this one. The graphical design is pretty cool and well done. I liked the sound effect used in this one, and the game is kind of addicting as well, because it's pretty hard to beat a good record.

^^Needs Improving^^
Besides the slightly differen't style, this doesn't add much on top of other reaction games in terms of actual game play. I found this game a little boring and it went a bit too slow. I think you should have made the reactions happen a little faster to speed things up.

[Breakout v1.10]

Originality points!

^^Good Points^^
I always like games that have an original twist to them, and this game definitely has it with the sort of mixture between Space Invaders and Breakout. The music was good, but it didn't really go with the game, and the graphics were pretty well done as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game is missing a few things. First off, the physics aren't very good. The ball maintains constant speed and never changes angle throughout the game. Also, this could use some items and upgrades like multi-ball, smaller/bigger platforms...all of the stuff found in Breakout clones.

[squares 2]

Classic.

^^Good Points^^
This is much improved from the first game. The music is an excellent choice. The bass is very cool and is just an awesome beat. I liked the addition of the red and black circles. They added a lot of fun on top of the original version. Again, this game is challenging and even more fun to play than the second. In my opinion, this game is excellent and everyone should play it at least once.

^^Needs Improving^^
Too addictive. :(

[squares game]

An Ok start

^^Good Points^^
This is a fun, quick little game. It's not complicated at all, and is nice for a short little play for anyone. The game gets harder pretty quickly so there is challenge for everyone. I enjoyed playing the game, but it can use some improvements.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use some funky music (even though you already took that suggestion in to the second one). Basically, everything wrong with this was taken care of, so I won't continue.

[Lock Lock Revolution]

A few flaws.

^^Good Points^^
There are a lot of Lock Movies today, but this is the first game I've played. I like DDR games, so this is right down my alley. I liked the song choice and I thought it was hilarious when the lock made comments on your steps like "sexy!" This looked pretty cool as well and worked fairly well.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, the moves should be more synced with the music. At some points it seemed perfectly synced and at other, it seemed to very well done. Also, if you try to play twice, the music will still be playing from the first round.

[-Simpsons Soundboard V.2-]

Good, but flawed

^^Good Points^^
For a soundboard, this had surprisingly good graphics. The preloader was unique, and the buttons on the menu were really cool looking. There were quite a few quotes in this one, and the songs section is a nice addition. I liked how each page had a picture of the character, this was very well layed out and presented.

^^Needs Improving^^
There are numerous buttons that when clicked don't play any sound at all. Also, some of the clips are very long and have multiple characters in them.

[madness stage creator V11]

Not much different

^^Good Points^^
I liked the lightsabers. The stuff you did add to this still looks pretty decent graphically.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't really improved too much on the last one. You added more stuff, but didn't do anything to fix the problem of difficulty to navigate due to cluttering. This only made the problem worse. You should really make the size of the area bigger so that one can make better scenes.

[madness stage creator V1.]

A little cluttered

^^Good Points^^
Most of the graphics weren't too bad. The guns looked pretty realistic, as did the blood. The scene creator had a decent amount of stuff in it as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This whole thing was really cluttered and unorganized. The text was hard to read on the scene creator. The scene itself is pretty boring, you should have had a few more backgrounds. All the objects, like the body parts were really cluttered up and hard to see/move around.