FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[8-bit Dress-up]

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^^Good Points^^
I have to say that I was pretty interested in this from the title. It sounded like an interesting idea. The music was cool, and it was a neat idea to have several different characters in this.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not sure I really like how you made this and how it turned out. While 8-bit sounds interesting, it really doesn't work that well when you have to stretch out the characters and such. Also, you had a lot of clothing with smooth edges, which I didn't really think fit that well.

[Terrance & Phillip SB]

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^^Good Points^^
Not too bad at all. You had a good amount of clips on there, most of which were pretty funny. I think what I really liked about this was the fact that you actually had the Uncle Fucker video, which was fun to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I can say is that you don't really have any sound clips that could be used for a prank call or anything. Most of these have more than one character and are quite long.

[Revenge OfThe StarWarsKid]

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^^Good Points^^
It was a very interesting idea and I was looking forward to playing a good game. The transfer from movie to Flash of the animations was pretty good, and the filesize was good as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game seems a bit arbitrary in the way that it runs. It really seems like you cannot defeat this kid, and swinging and defending are really kind of...vague I guess. I found it kind of hard to play this game and enjoy it.

[suicide bunny]

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^^Good Points^^
A very challenging game I think. It really takes a bit of getting used to, especially in the timing, but I think it was hella fun to play this game. The graphics were very clean and the thought of a suicide bombing bunny is quite funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said, just the large learning curve, but that's just something people will have to deal with to play a good game.

[Minigames]

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^^Good Points^^
A nice collection of your Flash work. I think it's better that you combined all of them, as most wouldn't be very good as separate games. Pretty fun stuff here, I enjoyed some of them.

^^Needs Improving^^
Kill Tidus was a little bit primitive and overdone, also the music during the quiz was incredibly annoying.

[ClockLand- The Lost Files]

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^^Good Points^^
The game was pretty cool. It was a surprisingly good platformer game that was a lot more functional and fair than most made in Flash. Graphics were very colorful and the game was pretty fun to play.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, you definitely need to shorten up the intro and finish it. It really tells nothing about the storyline from what you have, and it's like three minutes long. Also, why are we attacking other clocks? Wouldn't it make sense to attack locks or something? Definitely needs to be addressed in the intro.

[Last Man Standing.]

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^^Good Points^^
The graphics were quite good. Nice detail and character drawings. The music went well with the party scene this was in. I had no idea what to do at first, seeing how I've never heard of something like this done, so it was interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
There could have been some better animations. You could have animated the guy falling off of the keg instead of going right back to the title screen when you leave.

[Sumo and lunch]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A very quick game, but from all of the simple live/die games I've played, this one is definitely above average. The graphics look pretty nice. The buttons and the explosion really looks good. I liked the moaning sound effect as well. A good effort on this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really nothing I can say other than the fact that this game only really keeps one entertained for thirty seconds and then it is boring.

[Rabbit Hunt]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty fair. It looked a lot like the Deer Hunter series in how that was conducted and presented. Worked just like that game too. And just like Deer Hunter, this wasn't very fun to play.

^^Needs Improving^^
What I really don't like about this game, and what really turned me off from playing this is how the mouse is inverted and you really don't have much range of shooting. The mouse goes off of the screen easily and you barely moved the crosshairs. Very hard to play.

[Tutorial: Spinney Stuff]

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^^Good Points^^
At least it wasn't another button tutorial, which is something we definitely don't need. This was a pretty unique tutorial with some interesting effects and how to make them work. A pretty good presentation. I liked the text in this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some of it was a little vague to me. I would have liked to see a bit more detail, especially how to do the color changing thing. You didn't give much detail on that.