FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[A fly and a light]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty decent game. You made it hard by not allowing the fly to go too far away from the light, but of course couldn't touch it. The music was pretty good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really think the graphics could have improved. The fly is just a dot. Also, it would make more sense if the fly turned to ice or something instead of exploding at the cool point. It would be nice to be able to see that cool point as well, since the only way to know is by dieing.

[Save Lil' Jimmy!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a completely bad game. It's a deductive game, which can be fun, and since the number is random each time, the game doesn't really get boring. The idea is kind of funny, and I like the hang-man esque way of having a game over.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think with some sound effects or music or something, perhaps some voice overs, this would be a lot more interesting. Also, try to work on the drawings a bit. This was pretty crude.

[[CC] Inside my Mind]

K

^^Good Points^^
Loved the song, that song can never be wrong in any movie no matter where placed, that it my opinion. It was funny to see all of the clocks dancing around like such too. Also, the idea that this is going on in your head...

^^Needs Improving^^
Perhaps that idea is a little copied from that one movie with this song...name evades me at this time, but the guy goes insane from hearing the song in his head.

[WOS-Dress Up Jesus]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good graphics. I really liked the background of this, and the sun looked pretty cool. The pieces in general were very well drawn. Nice music too, that stuff is so crazy.

^^Needs Improving^^
This isn't much for a dress up game. The pieces are all arranged so that they fit on the body exactly as they are supposed to. You don't give any variations in any of the pieces either, which is a big mistake. I also looked at this and though "what part am I dressing up". You definitely need some more items in this.

Arskagarf responds:

This was more of a cry for attention than anything else really. IM SUCH AN EMO.

[Short Circuit]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad game. Takes some memorization and rote to get used to the beats and be able to remember what you have to do at certain points of the time. The actions of the *'s were synced well with the music. Good functionality too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really was hoping this would have a little more to do with rhythm. It seemed to me that only sparsely would the astericks move around according to the music.

[The Follower]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good music for a strategy game for this. The game itself is kind of fun. Puzzle mode wasn't bad, I could see some people enjoying it, but survival mode had to be my favorite. Quick paced and fun.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think that for survival mode perhaps you could make the bar stick a little more to the mouse, just to make it a little more possible. Next, I felt I was counted as hitting something when I clearly feel that I wasn't. You may also want to try to center the puzzles and make them smaller or do something to keep them away from edges, since when your mouse goes out of the screen you cannot control the bar, which is frustrating.

[SwapPop]

K

^^Good Points^^
This reminds me a lot of Tetris Attack for the SNES, which was a very fun game, so good idea to make a Flash version. The game functioned very well, no bugs that I could find. It is a good way to waste some time and is pretty fun with that soothing music. I liked how you could change difficulty by characters, and the scoring system is very sophisticated.

^^Needs Improving^^
When does each level end? I played until 12k points but I was still on level one on the hard skill level. You may want to think of adding something like unbreakable sections one must work around just to add some more challenge.

["Don't Be Late For Work"]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very good textual adventure, I am really starting to like games like this. The best part had to be the comical choices you could take in this game. I broke out laughing when I hit the pimp's hat off of his head. The voice overs were hilarious, like "later, faggots". I laughed at just about everything that happened in this game. Supreme job.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could have improved the drawings a lot. When I went to skip the intro the first scene I saw I just looked at it and thought it was not going to be too good. First impressions are very important.

[Wimzyland]

K

^^Good Points^^
A fine game, a very good storyline was developed in this with lots of unexpected twists and turns. This was so unexpected that it made me laugh throughout. A game without much challenge, but still very fun to play. The drawings were amazing. Top quality among most artist I've seen!

^^Needs Improving^^
I said the drawings were amazing, but there were really no animations in this at all. At least you could have added some repeating animations when one is reading the text. Even something subtle would be much better than what you have.