FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pokemon Shoot ver 3.0]

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^^Good Points^^
It wasn't that bad. Much better than a lot of Pokemon killing games of the time. Decent graphics and decent detection. Also got harder as you went on.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not much replay value in this. You should have made it a little bit longer and had some different levels or something. This one was just good for a minute or two of playing, then got boring.

[Death v.s. Genger(game)]

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^^Good Points^^
You at least put some creativity into this with the many attacks and such. The reporter scene is a good idea as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics and audio were just atrocious. You used lots of gradients for blood, and that didn't look realistic at all. Everything was drawn poorly and quickly. You need to put more time into your drawings next time. Then the sound. I assume you made some sound effects yourself, and in that case, you need to stop screaming into your microphone. The sound made my ears hurt :(

[Make Your Own Rap Song]

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^^Good Points^^
Some of the lyric clips were rather funny just the way you said them.

^^Needs Improving^^
The artwork is horrendous, you definitely need to do some better drawings on this. I think you would have been better using images from the web of rappers. The sound quality of the clips was not good at all. Sounds like you need a better microphone to me.

[US Patroler]

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^^Good Points^^
It was a quick load, I've gotta give you that. Moving on to different areas is a good idea.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, there are a ton of point and click shooters, so you need something to set this apart. However, the graphics are just atrocious. Very simple and very basic. Obviously you don't have much experience. Work on your animations and drawings in this.

[Pacman!]

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^^Good Points^^
An interesting take on Pac-Man. Not sure it was a good choice to do the game differently, but at least it was original.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, needs some classic Pac-Man music! As I said, not sure the game play is so great. You should have definitely added some more levels or something. The game is really short and the highscore is not hard to achieve.

[Mr. T v.s. Pokeymon]

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^^Good Points^^
The only really redeeming part of this was when Ash challenged Mr. T. That scene was funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ugh, so much I could write here. The animations were pretty elementary, and the drawings were even worse. Half of the stuff looked nothing like what it was supposed to. The sound quality was terrible, and the voice acting was mediocre. Really painful to my ears to listen to this.

[Paintball Mayhem]

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^^Good Points^^
Meh, not a whole lot. At least a little unique with the paintball idea.

^^Needs Improving^^
The enemies didn't try to hurt you, which really makes the game boring. There really isn't anything to set this apart from other shooting games. It's got boring graphics and average game play. Besides, what kind of paintball gun makes that noise?

[Pikachu Must Die]

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/reviews/229

^^Good Points^^
I like the layout graphically, it looks kind of nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, why is Pikachu flying through the air? That makes no sense to start off. Second, the game is just a little boring and repetitive. Should have been some kind of level system with requirements or something.

[Kill Togepy]

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^^Good Points^^
Good music in this movie. I also found it mildly entertaining when the little guy morphed into an egg in the frying pan.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were pretty poor. You could have at least done a better job of getting an image of this pokemon. A bit too many shape tweens too. Should have done some more FBF or something. Also, only three death modes doesn't offer much interest for this.

[Shoot Da Alien]

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^^Good Points^^
There were a lot of options when deciding how to kill the little guy. Creative overall with the different deaths.

^^Needs Improving^^
As you said, it really needs sound effects. Other than that, perhaps some multiple click deaths instead of just single clicks. It will make things a bit more interesting and a little less redundant.