FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Online burp machineMixer2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess I could say here that I thought it was creative how you made this look like a stereo setup, and I always like creativity.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really is a horrible game. First off, why would you put music on it? you can't hear the burps with the music on, and since the burp clips are so long and low quality, you can't possibly have them go to the music or something. The burps sound terrible, they are really loud and low quality, and I didn't enjoy hearing them. Not funny at all, lack luster effort. Deserving of a zero.

[Ego Booster Battle (demo)]

K

^^Good Points^^
This did have some redeeming qualities in it. The music was a cool tune, it wasn't annoying, and didn't become annoying even through the long game play. I liked the added sound effects as well. The drawings were pretty good, I like the characters. Another good feature is how your ego goes down if you are hitting the wrong button.

^^Needs Improving^^
For a game to be good, it can't just have flashy graphics, it has to have fun game play, which this doesn't. For one, finishing the game takes a massive amount of time. I only got half way on one character before quitting. Make the game much shorter, and add the one player mode.

[Interactive Death Game]

K

^^Good Points^^
Despite the score, I found this to be quite well made. The drawings were good first off. You drew a background which is nice, and the character is well colored and well drawn. I liked all of the death scenes, my favorite was Giant eggplant! They were all pretty funny though and mostly pretty creative. The music wasn't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could have used something that was a little longer for music. Even though it was a good tune, it was very repetitive. Also, some more deaths would be nice. And try to make some of them longer.

[Fun With Goths]

Lame

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this is the drawings. You drawing of the goth was pretty good, and the crosshairs looked nice the way they were animated and such. I do think the music is a catchy tune as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Gosh this game is boring. You click on the guy once and three holes appear in him with some crappy looking blood around as well. He doesn't fight back, the "game" is not challenging at all or very much fun.

[Kill SameGame v1.0]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this game is the graphics. The art you have in this is very nice looking, coloring, shapes, shading, etc. Some of the deaths are pretty humorous, like flying penor.

^^Needs Improving^^
The buttons are hard to click since you just made them text. Put a box behind the text and make the box a button. The sound seems to be synced a second or two late, which just shows that not much testing was used. It's a very obvious problem. The animations aren't very good either.

[Interactive Buddy v.1.01]

Why is this so entertaining!

^^Good Points^^
There are probably so many things good about this that I can't fit it in the space allowed to write a review. First off, there are a million options in this game, I probably didn't even get to see a quarter of them in action in the time I spent. The money system is neat, and the purchasing system is good as well, man those upgrades are great. It's surprisingly fun to beat up on this guy as much as possible. The sound effects were good, and drawings were decent. There are also so many things in the menus like stats, upgrades...wonderfully done!

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I have to say is that this is a little hard to get into at the beginning, but if the player spends enough time messing around with this, they will start to get more into it.

[_ULTIMATE TUTORIAL 2_]

Didn't help me

^^Good Points^^
This had a bunch of information in it, most of it seems pretty accurate, though I didn't test out any of the coding or anything, I think it's safe to assume that the codes work from the score and reviews. This is obviously a very good resource, covers an endless amount of subjects, and this should be most people's first source to check.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, this didn't help me out. I went here to get some info on Vcam. This included a download link, but really no in depth instructions. I copied the cam onto my movie and it doesn't work. perhaps something I may have missed, which is why I came here, but to no avail :(

[Daily2oon SE: ThreeStar]

Funny

^^Good Points^^
I thought that this game was pretty funny. I laughed at how no matter what you did you died...even going into the school, that is pretty funny stuff. The drawings weren't too bad, I liked the facial expressions you used and the voice overs were funny as well. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Umm...the backgrounds were kind of bland, could use some more details.

ThreeStar responds:

arauuughhhh
/me is lazy

Three

[Flash 8 Blur Tutorial]

Yeah...

^^Good Points^^
The tutorial has clear instructions on how to blur text. I'm sure every author could use this effects no more than twice.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music kind of sucks. Besides that, I mean, this is a tutorial on how to blur things. You can't make a whole tutorial out of just a single effects, that's just not helpful at all. If you are going to make a tutorial, atleast put some more things to do in there besides blurring. If you did, this wouldn't have been a half bad tut.

[Dog Dash]

Much better

^^Good Points^^
This is so many times better than the last game I played from you "IM Sim". This one doesn't seem to be very buggy at all and is much more fun to play. I like the platformer type levels, and the animations aren't half bad either. I liked the many different powerups and items you had to recieve. The game was challenging and fun to play.

^^Needs Improving^^
One thing I didn't like is the time limit. You should maybe put a time limit on each level, but not on the whole game. Just let the player play through the whole game.