FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ego Booster Battle (demo)]

K

^^Good Points^^
This did have some redeeming qualities in it. The music was a cool tune, it wasn't annoying, and didn't become annoying even through the long game play. I liked the added sound effects as well. The drawings were pretty good, I like the characters. Another good feature is how your ego goes down if you are hitting the wrong button.

^^Needs Improving^^
For a game to be good, it can't just have flashy graphics, it has to have fun game play, which this doesn't. For one, finishing the game takes a massive amount of time. I only got half way on one character before quitting. Make the game much shorter, and add the one player mode.

[Fun With Goths]

Lame

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this is the drawings. You drawing of the goth was pretty good, and the crosshairs looked nice the way they were animated and such. I do think the music is a catchy tune as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Gosh this game is boring. You click on the guy once and three holes appear in him with some crappy looking blood around as well. He doesn't fight back, the "game" is not challenging at all or very much fun.

[Kill SameGame v1.0]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this game is the graphics. The art you have in this is very nice looking, coloring, shapes, shading, etc. Some of the deaths are pretty humorous, like flying penor.

^^Needs Improving^^
The buttons are hard to click since you just made them text. Put a box behind the text and make the box a button. The sound seems to be synced a second or two late, which just shows that not much testing was used. It's a very obvious problem. The animations aren't very good either.

[Interactive Buddy v.1.01]

Why is this so entertaining!

^^Good Points^^
There are probably so many things good about this that I can't fit it in the space allowed to write a review. First off, there are a million options in this game, I probably didn't even get to see a quarter of them in action in the time I spent. The money system is neat, and the purchasing system is good as well, man those upgrades are great. It's surprisingly fun to beat up on this guy as much as possible. The sound effects were good, and drawings were decent. There are also so many things in the menus like stats, upgrades...wonderfully done!

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I have to say is that this is a little hard to get into at the beginning, but if the player spends enough time messing around with this, they will start to get more into it.

[_ULTIMATE TUTORIAL 2_]

Didn't help me

^^Good Points^^
This had a bunch of information in it, most of it seems pretty accurate, though I didn't test out any of the coding or anything, I think it's safe to assume that the codes work from the score and reviews. This is obviously a very good resource, covers an endless amount of subjects, and this should be most people's first source to check.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, this didn't help me out. I went here to get some info on Vcam. This included a download link, but really no in depth instructions. I copied the cam onto my movie and it doesn't work. perhaps something I may have missed, which is why I came here, but to no avail :(

[Daily2oon SE: ThreeStar]

Funny

^^Good Points^^
I thought that this game was pretty funny. I laughed at how no matter what you did you died...even going into the school, that is pretty funny stuff. The drawings weren't too bad, I liked the facial expressions you used and the voice overs were funny as well. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Umm...the backgrounds were kind of bland, could use some more details.

ThreeStar responds:

arauuughhhh
/me is lazy

Three

[Flash 8 Blur Tutorial]

Yeah...

^^Good Points^^
The tutorial has clear instructions on how to blur text. I'm sure every author could use this effects no more than twice.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music kind of sucks. Besides that, I mean, this is a tutorial on how to blur things. You can't make a whole tutorial out of just a single effects, that's just not helpful at all. If you are going to make a tutorial, atleast put some more things to do in there besides blurring. If you did, this wouldn't have been a half bad tut.

[Instant Message Simulator]

Good concept

^^Good Points^^
Another original idea on NG. This game certainly has a creative concept and could be fun to play if there weren't so many bugs >.< I liked how you let the players select the levels, which were also pretty creative scenes. The sound effects were good as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, this game has a few major downfalls. First off, the game play is very buggy. It's very hard to move your character around to get the boxes. It seems to be hard to jump and run at the same time, and the character just moves strangely.