FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Instant Message Simulator]

Good concept

^^Good Points^^
Another original idea on NG. This game certainly has a creative concept and could be fun to play if there weren't so many bugs >.< I liked how you let the players select the levels, which were also pretty creative scenes. The sound effects were good as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, this game has a few major downfalls. First off, the game play is very buggy. It's very hard to move your character around to get the boxes. It seems to be hard to jump and run at the same time, and the character just moves strangely.

[Peg Puzz - NEW!]

Still doesn't work

^^Good Points^^
You added music, like I suggested and like many other users suggested.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music quality however, makes it sound very compressed. Also, you should add more than one song, since that type of music is never satisfactory to all people. The game still isn't working properly for me. Either the game isn't coded right, which it doesn't sound like, or the area you have to move the blocks into is very small. Other than that, the same comments go on this one as the last one.

[Peg Puzz]

Nothing happens

^^Good Points^^
It's good you put the instructions page in there, because this game is not very self explanatory.

^^Needs Improving^^
For some reason, when I play this game, I try to move one of the pieces and it just goes right back to its original spot. Every piece does this, I've read the instructions carefully, and I'm sure that I am doing this right, but it just doesn't work right. Besides that, if the game did work, it could use some better graphics and maybe some music to go along with it. And you may want to think of making the blue circles in random locations to give more replay value.

[Distracted Driver Sim]

Not half bad

^^Good Points^^
This is a fresh and original game, that has some fun incorporated in it. I will say that this is definitely more entertaining thatn 99% of games I've played in this score range. The music was nice, and the game sort of serves a good lesson, don't be distracted while driving.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main thing that isn't very good is the graphics. Your drawings could stand a whole lot of improvement, and the weird slurping sound effect was annoying as well.

[Kill Jordan Knight]

I have every right

^^Good Points^^
The only mildly good point about this was the introduction/mission text, which was mildly funny, as was the voice over you used for this dude.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you say I have no right to say this is bad because it is your first, however this game is just terrible. Click twice and it is over. Your image manipulation is horrible and the game is just so unoriginal. Work on it a little more. I don't think this guy would just sit there and let you shoot him, now would he? This is just one of many simple questions you could have asked yourself before publishing this.

[dress up april hunter]

Eek!

^^Good Points^^
Quite a few items to choose from, some of them are pretty humorous, like the penis.

^^Needs Improving^^
Eww, that lady is really ugly. We all know the main purpose of dress ups is to see some nice tits, this lady had them, but seriously, this lady is just plain scary looking, so not a great character to pick. There is not sound, most of the items are just other items with different colors.

[CCR]

Boring

^^Good Points^^
I liked the background animations. They were the most interesting part about this game. The different difficulty levels are a nice addition too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should know something about the game before you make the game yourself. The arrows are in the wrong order, the song is not synced with the arrows at all. The hard difficulty is a joke, the music is stupid as well. This is way too easy and gets old pretty fast, especially since there are long pauses without any arrows.

[M.I.N.E 2]

Lack luster

^^Good Points^^
Umm... Interesting title, though it's kind of cheesy what mine stands for. Some times the drawings weren't bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
Where to start...The animations are terrible, there really aren't any, but when you tried to animated the guy in the beginning, it was just ugly. The music was annoying and there weren't many interesting sound effects. You can't shoot enemies in the bodies, and their reaction is very slow, making the game incredibly easy, which in turn, makes the game boring.

[A Massacre in Happy City]

Stupid

^^Good Points^^
Well, the graphics aren't terrible. It's kind of funny how you used the Doom guys for enemies. The sound effects weren't bad, and neither was the music.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game is way too easy. You can rapid fire without penalty and the enemies will die no matter where they are as long as you are shooting. If you shoot an enemy rapidly, they just keep screaming. The background repeats very poorly and isn't smooth at all. Not a fun game. Just repeats and nothing really happens.

[Thanksgiving Shoot Em Up]

Pretty good

^^Good Points^^
This game was pretty fun to play, shooting turkeys and pilgrims just has to be a funny thing to do, and it proves to be fun. The sound effects were good, and the animations were decent. Game is pretty challenging, nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sometimes it seems I clicked the enemies but they don't die, and it's a very obvious bug. Your drawings aren't too good either.