FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brain Griffin Soundboard]

Same as last time.

^^Good Points^^
You had quite a variety of clips in this one, which is always a good thing. All of the buttons worked too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This has a lot wrong with it. First off, your sounds are really low volume. The first clip "Hi, I'm Brian" sounds good, but the rest I can barely hear. The clips are also pretty long, so a stop sounds button is imperitive in this. You could also stand to be a little more creative with the graphical layout also.

[Peter Griffin SB!!!]

This is not so good.

^^Good Points^^
Well, regardless of what the last reviewer said, this SB does work for me and it works just fine. All of the buttons work, and I liked how on mouseover, the word Play pops up, I think I will incorporate this into my next SB! Some of the quotes were pretty funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound quality is really low. A lot of the sounds sound very cut off as if they continued longer and just weren't edited well. Also, a lot of the sounds were varying volumes, which would make this hard to use for a prank call. The graphical layout is kind of ugly too.

[Lets play cricket!!]

Cricket??

^^Good Points^^
The animations in this weren't half bad. They really make up for the poor drawings. I also liked the sound effects you used, like the Homer Simpson sounds.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, most of the people on NG are Americans that have no idea how to play cricket, like me, so maybe some kind of short instructions page would be nice. I also thought you made the "replay" scene far too long, seeing stick figures catch a ball is not that entertaining. Also, you should make it more obvious whether you win or lose. I had no idea whatsoever.

["Resident's Evil" preview]

My ears hurt.

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this is the grapics, and even they weren't that good. I thought it was a decent, original idea.

^^Needs Improving^^
The worst part about this is the sounds. The voice overs are done very loudly, almost like you screamed into the mic. There is a lot of static in the voices as well, which is annoying. The storyline is pretty stupid, just shoot one zombie in the head. You should have just made the full version.

[Castlevania 2: Tiger DEMO]

Neat idea...

^^Good Points^^
I thought this is a pretty neat idea, having a Tiger Handheld game put into Flash, but it turned out not to be such a good idea after playing. The music was good too!

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are terrible. I don't know why the quality of the picture you used but it should definitely be a lot higher. I can't even read the text. The game itself is really hard to play because you need to move your mouse across the screen to hit a very small button in a small amount of time. This idea obviously doesn't pan out. Also, when you hit the score button, there is no way to go back to the game without restarting.

[-Star Corps-]

Too hard

^^Good Points^^
I'd like to say that the graphics in this game are not bad. The menu is animated nicely and is pleasing to the eyes. The in game graphics are pretty nicely done as well, the game just isn't fun.

^^Needs Improving^^
It seems like you have almost no time to hit your targets. They appear suddenly and you have less than a second to move your mouse over them to destroy them before they do the same to you. The targets are pretty small, so you get my point, this game is too hard.

[Gore dead]

No sense in this

Well, I'm not sure what you were really trying to accomplish with this movie. Some guy falls on a table then is shot. Random violence like this is not funny and doesn't serve any entertainment value, especially when it is done as poorly as this one. The sound effects were pretty lame, and the graphics were even worse. I know it's hard to draw blood, but you failed at it completely. No storyline, no interactivity (you did mark this as a game...). I don't see why you made this.

[Katie Holmes Crisis]

Different

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty good idea for a game. You get to see a hot chick half naked, and also...well that's all, but that's always a fun thing!

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound effect didn't really go with her happy demeanor and got annoying after a while. Drawings aren't too good. You could have had some stuff that looks a little more like debris than just crappy shapes of random stuff.

[kaksen]

K...

^^Good Points^^
Luckily, I know some German, so I was able to understand a good part of this movie. The concept was definitely...unique, and just a tad bit strange. The game itself could be fun, but I didn't have someone to play against. The ending was kind of funny too...dinner...

^^Needs Improving^^
You should have some kind of single player mode in this game, since most people won't bother to have a second person play. Odd humor too.