FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chao's The Hedgehog's Tut]

Nothing new

^^Good Points^^
This has a nice looking graphical layout and nice colors, so atleast this doesn't look like complete crap. This also has a good song on it, which I like.

^^Needs Improving^^
There isn't a whole lot on this tutorial that most people wouldn't already know, and it is mostly very basic stuff. You should make any coding highligtable, and most of all, make sure all the text fits on the page >.< The blurring tutorial also doesn't have a button to go back to the menu.

[Duck Shooting]

I don't see why this is bad

^^Good Points^^
I really don't see why this game has the score that it does. It is a pretty solid game that has some pretty fun game play too it. There are three different weapons that seem to be different difficulty levels. I like how the game ends both when failing and beating the game. The game is fun and fast paced as well. Not a bad game, good for a quick, fun time.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think this is in need of some sound effects. Maybe some funny duck noises or something. The graphics you drew aren't that good either. You could animated the ducks a little more.

[Wheres Waldo?]

Old

^^Good Points^^
Umm...none really, I wasn't impressed by this at all.

^^Needs Improving^^
Anyone who just didn't log on to the internet twelve seconds ago will know that this is just a screamer. It's been done before in this EXACT same fashion with the Where's Waldo graphics and then a scream a few minutes later. Unoriginal and very lame. Screamers are a waste of time.

[anime tetris]

Tetris...again

^^Good Points^^
Atleast you took some time to change around the graphics in this coding that you most likely took from a tutorial or something.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really get an anime sense from this. The music doesn't sound anime inspired at all, and there are only two anime pictures in the whole game. Like I said above, you just changed the graphics in this, which is pretty lame, and it's just tetris. There are already hundreds of better versions.

[Space Revenge 2]

Not bad

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty good game. The drawings you used aren't too bad, and I liked the boss...an octopus. The sound was this game's best point, it had good music and good sound effects too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The most important thing this needs is instructions. I spent too much time trying to figure out how to fire. Like you said, the game isn't very original, and the fact that you can rapid fire is kind of lame. I didn't like the parts where aliens came from behind you either. The powerups went away way too quickly.

[Final Fantasy Punks]

This is generous

^^Good Points^^
I've giving this movie a one overall and that is being very generous. The drawings were...ok. And I found it mildly funny how your character runs into Nazis.

^^Needs Improving^^
When I played, the play button doesn't seem to work. The battle system is also very strange. Once you beat an enemy, there isn't a button to continue playing, nor is there one when you die. If you manually continue by right clicking and hitting play, the game doesn't seem to work at all.

[Kill H from Steps]

So glad I have ten bullets

^^Good Points^^
The music was good, but the reason I gave you a four in sound will be listed below.

^^Needs Improving^^
No sound effects. This is the type of game where it is extremely easy to put in sound effects. A gunshot and maybe a few moans would be perfect. The target doesn't move at all, so why did you give us ten bullets? To kill ourselves with afterwards? I sure feel like that. The graphics were terrible, never try to drawn blood again, and I'm sorry, I have no idea who this guy "H" is. And you spelled die wrong, showing that you rushed through this.

[Parachute(TheLastOneMaybe]

Ugh...

^^Good Points^^
I gave this a 1 for the gun sound effects and a two for half-decent drawings and being able to tween.

^^Needs Improving^^
Why would I want to shoot a bunch of helpless parachuters? Certainly I would not want to. The game is boring, has two levels, which aren't really levels since you can't pass or fail them. There is no score system or any way to determine how well you do. I just don't see what could have been going through your head as you submitted this.

[Pikacrap gets a mate]

Ugh

^^Good Points^^
I hate pokemon just as much as the next guy, but seriously...

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were really poor in this. You just moved a pikachu sprite across a boring white background. Add some background to make this a little more interesting. The game wasn't really fun, it moved kind of slow and the objective of it was pretty stupid as well.