FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dragondash]

Not bad.

^^Good Points^^
I like they simplistic game play style and the simplistic controls. This game takes a little bit of getting used to, but it's definitely fun to play. The music was a good choice and I could see this game giving quite a bit of fun.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main thing I didn't like was the graphics, in fact I thought they were pretty horrendous. There was a complete lack of detail in the walls, you could have made them look a lot better, and the colors just didn't work for me. I would have rather see just the dragon change color than the entire screen, it is a little annoying.

Ophyr responds:

Thanks for the review :)

Details are low indeed, I aimed for an abstract theme so yeah :) Actually, the first version was less fast, with a cartoony dragon ^^

[Windows 98 v1.0]

Cool

^^Good Points^^
I was really surprised how much this resembled a Windows 98 boot, which makes this pretty unique in my eyes. Everything looked really nice and I was surprised at how much of this actually worked. It was pretty fun to go through the hard drive and search around even though there wasn't a whole lot there, and I liked how you snuck in your sims game.

^^Needs Improving^^
The mouse gets messed up after you use notepad, and this could stand some more simple apps and what not.

Widi responds:

Thanks for a nice review, I will surely improve this one. Maybe I might add some new, realistic and funny features and make a second version, so check it out soon :)

[Napoleon Dynamite Sounds]

Pretty poor

^^Good Points^^
Err...atleast you gave credit to where you took the sounds from.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, there are many napoleon soundboards on the web, and even quite a few on NG, so this is pointless even if it was decent. The sound files were too long, often contain more than one character. Try editing them next time instead of just saving them and putting them into flash. The background is also pretty bland. This soundboard is very poor.

[Ultra Dressup]

Could use some improving

^^Good Points^^
The use of guns in dressup games is a pretty new idea, something that I haven't seen done much, so nice job. The guns themselves were drawn very well as were most of the hair pieces.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't really deserve the title "Ultra" as there are really only two things to change, the hair and the guns, which isn't really fun. The use of a stick figure is a really bad idea as well. Also two of the hair pieces do not work properly.

[Ninjor's Star Wars Quiz]

Not working

^^Good Points^^
The questions were pretty challenging at some times, though some of the questions are a little ridiculously easy.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like the previous review said the question about Grievous is wrong. It is two blue, two green. Also the button on the grammy question doesn't work so there is no way to complete the quiz.

Ninjor responds:

Ok I'm fixing.

[Halo Stacker Soundboard]

The best one from you

^^Good Points^^
This is definitely the best soundboard I've seen from you. The sound collection in this one was pretty good, and there were a lot of good questions and statements that could be used in prank calls.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I've said before, add some simple phrases like greetings, yes/no, etc. You could also use some graphical improvements, just to spruce up the visual portion of this soundboard.

[Halo Johnson Soundboard]

Another Halo soundboard...

^^Good Points^^
Better than the one you submitted yesterday. This one had words on the buttons, which was good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your soundboards still need a hell of a lot of improvement, and spending thirty minutes on each one and pumping them out every day isn't a good idea. I could make a decent prank call with this, but you could definitely add a lot more basic sayings like greetings. Try to make the volume for each clip the same also.

[Candy Shop]

Sooo...boring

^^Good Points^^
Relatively interactive, it could be a lot better. This is a good idea for a game, just not executed very well at all.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are very dark and bland and don't remind me of a candy shop one bit. I got so bored with this even in the first few minutes. Just spruce it up with some fancy graphics or music and it will be a lot better.

[IQ Thumb Print Scanner]

Good idea, ruined at the end.

^^Good Points^^
Quite a funny idea, of course the computer screen can't scan your thumb or calculate your IQ using that, but well done. The voice used went well with the flash and the general way this flash worked was quite good.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should have just generated a random number at the end and not told the viewer it was fake, it would have been funny if people actually believed it.

[UFO Joe]

Good clean fun!

^^Good Points^^
Just about everything in this game was good. The drawings in each level were pretty unique and had their own fun features to them, and animations were good as well. The game has a simple concept, yet quite fun. I liked the menu and the level setup with different areas. The sound was good also, I especially liked the music. The controls were easy to get and overall this game was just fun to play.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really much I can think of. Perhaps an initial difficulty choice or perhaps some larger level designs.