FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Thinkcomix - Sir yes Sir]

Good idea!

^^Good Points^^
This is the first time I've seen an interactive comic on NG, so this is an original, fresh idea. each frame was drawn very well and the animations and mini-game were a nice touch. I couldn't really figure out the mini-game completely, but it's a good idea.

^^Needs Improving^^
This needs some sound. Voice overs, sound effects, etc. As it is now without sound, this is pretty bland.

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[Dave Swinger in space]

Err..how do I play?

^^Good Points^^
The intro in the beginning giving a storyline and what not was a good touch. The graphics throughout the game is pretty darn good.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't have the slightest idea how one goes about playing this game. I sat there looking at the screen with my eyebrow up the whole time. Add some directions and maybe this could have potential.

[Astroids and red things]

Lame

^^Good Points^^
Err, it's pretty simple and could be fun with some improvement.

^^Needs Improving^^
This isn't really any different than normal asteroids except with different things to shoot. This is really boring and doesn't offer a whole lot. Also when an enemy fires upon you, their bullets seem to do nothing.

[HexSweeper]

A little bland

^^Good Points^^
This game was well made. It seems to work fine and it's easy to understand how to play.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are a little bland, the grays don't look very inviting. Also this could use a few different music choices. As the previous review said, this needs some different skill levels with different sized playing boards, and also an in-depth tutorial would help some people since minesweeper isn't a very self explanatory game.

[Store Bought Bones]

Pretty basic

^^Good Points^^
I liked the level designs in this game. The backgrounds were very nicely drawn and colored and looked unique. Same with the charactesr. The controls were well planned out as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is way too easy, which makes it a little bit boring to play. I found myself playing this one for no more than two minutes. Add some difficulty and also some music to it.

[another mouse avoider 1.2]

This is getting old

^^Good Points^^
Well, the only feature about this that isn't featured in other games like this is the anti-cheating mechanism, however that just gets annoying if you are trying to play, and can be bypassed easily.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like the graphics at all. They were very unprofessional. The level designs were nothing really special and nothing new. You need to atleast spice it up with some music. Nothing new, I'm bored.

[Easter Egg Chaos]

Boring

^^Good Points^^
I liked the winner drawings, they were kind of cute.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, the race track is very boring, add some texture or atleast some environmental changes as you go along. The game itself is too simple and too long for how much is involved in it, so it gets very boring. The music doesn't sound very Easter-y or race-y at all. I found this to just be boring.

[the NG Calculator]

Very cool!

^^Good Points^^
This is an interesting idea. I'm not sure exactly how this works, but it's pretty interesting and I found it quite fun to find out what my account is worth. I liked the background and the sound as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The Troubleshooting button didn't seem to work for me.

[Easter Egg Hunt]

Fun, but really slow

^^Good Points^^
The game was coded very solidly and didn't seem to have any bugs in it. I felt that the game was very fair in how close or far I had to be to catch something. The graphics were pretty nice and I liked how you changed the music and background after every level. I also liked the fact that this was divided into levels and not just constant.

^^Needs Improving^^
I found this game to be a little boring. It wasn't very hard. I played a good eight levels before I gave up out of boredom. This could stand to either get harder, faster, or have some weird items in the game that maybe make your basket smaller or larger, just stuff to give the game a little more dimension.

Wollfman responds:

I'm fairly new to this kind of scripting and am really happy to read this encouraging review. I agree, it gets slow at times. I was thinking of speeding it up, but I've got another project underway. Thankyou for your comments and constructive critism :D