FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[dress chibi vegeta clock!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, all of the items seemed to work for me and all the ones I used were layered right. I also liked how you could move around vegeta's body and his arms and legs separately. The items were of good variety too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like the explanation pages. They just seem kind of pointless to me and maybe they are just fillers. The items aren't drawn very well, they were very two dimensional.

[Pod Bots]

K

^^Good Points^^
I wanted to like this game. I really did. It looked nice at least. The backgrounds and stuff weren't drawn too poorly.

^^Needs Improving^^
There was no sound first of all. Next, the conrols are really hard to get. I had a really hard time just getting out of the corner that you start at. Once I started playing, I had a very hard time figuring out the reloading system. I hit the right button to reload, but I just wouldn't shoot again. This game has lots of bugs, but I'm sure it would be a decent game if you worked some of them out.

[car designer]

K

^^Good Points^^
A nice catchy and original tune was put into this Flash.

^^Needs Improving^^
The previous reviewer could not have said it better. You need to preview a game before you submit it. I can't even see a bunch of the screen. I counted a total of three parts that I could actually move and I had no idea where to put any of them :s Even if I did see the whole game, I'm sure it wouldn't have been too good because there isn't much to change the colors, and like I said above, I can't tell where half of the pieces go.

[How to draw 4: 3D]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a decent tutorial. There are some good tips in here and you are pretty detailed on how to draw things then make them 3D. The test area was also a nice addition to this game to let people paractice.

^^Needs Improving^^
One thing is that there should always be a music off button, since some people won't always like your music. I wasn't to fond of it. You should teach people how to apply this tutorial into scenes, etc. since most people already know how to make a square three dimensional. Not quite enough info was put into this.

Aprime responds:

i learnt that from the simpsons, when homer goes computer graphics any who, thanks for the review!

[Kill Linkin Park]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the introduction to this, it set the mood, and who doesn't hate linkin park? Good band to do a killing game for. The ending was cool too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could have done so much more in this game, really the setup you have is pretty lame. You can only kill them in one way, which is lame, and the way you kill them isn't very humorous or fun to do. You should definitely have some more options in any more games.

[Vampire Hunter]

K

^^Good Points^^
You definitely have some graphical skill. The drawings were better than a lot of stuff I've seen lately, and the animations, like lip syncing wasn't bad either. I liked how you described the game and goal of the game in the beginning with the girl talking to you. Much more entertaining than reading a long instruction page.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game is too easy and far too short. All you have to do is click on Dracula. You could have added something else to make this more exciting. And at the end "how can she repay me?" I can think of a few good ways :)

[Kill Mario Interactive]

K

^^Good Points^^
I gave you a two for sound because the fact that you used actual Mario sounds, though they are so overused and you didn't compress them >:(

^^Needs Improving^^
Why would anyone want to kill mario? He's such a lovable character. These things are supposed to kill characters no one likes. The deaths were not very creative or funny. I didn't like the drawings either. You should have used a sprite for mario since you can't draw him very well, and the blood was just...yeah.

[School Daze]

K

^^Good Points^^
Eh. I don't have time for this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Drawings weren't that good. No sound, hard to play. You should definitely make it more obvious on what you have to do. I had no idea what the hell to do half the time. Work on the drawings mostly and add some sound.

[Blue's Poos 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I had to laugh when steve said "Listen! Do you smell that?" That line was just too funny. The drawings weren't half bad, and the trippy acid scene was pretty neat looking. I found this funny for some reason.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could do some good voice overs for this movie or add some sound effects to spice it up. Movies without any music/sounds aren't usually too good, and it definitely does hurt the score of this movie.

[Mr.Offensive]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad concept. Kind of interesting the way you layed this out and stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
LAYERS. You need to learn how to use layers first off. It will improve stlightly your crappy graphics. The graphics are still crappy, and the drawings are bad, and you couldn't even do the text nicely. The clips are short, kind of predictable, and not very funny. Add some sound effects too.