FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pod Bots]

K

^^Good Points^^
I wanted to like this game. I really did. It looked nice at least. The backgrounds and stuff weren't drawn too poorly.

^^Needs Improving^^
There was no sound first of all. Next, the conrols are really hard to get. I had a really hard time just getting out of the corner that you start at. Once I started playing, I had a very hard time figuring out the reloading system. I hit the right button to reload, but I just wouldn't shoot again. This game has lots of bugs, but I'm sure it would be a decent game if you worked some of them out.

[car designer]

K

^^Good Points^^
A nice catchy and original tune was put into this Flash.

^^Needs Improving^^
The previous reviewer could not have said it better. You need to preview a game before you submit it. I can't even see a bunch of the screen. I counted a total of three parts that I could actually move and I had no idea where to put any of them :s Even if I did see the whole game, I'm sure it wouldn't have been too good because there isn't much to change the colors, and like I said above, I can't tell where half of the pieces go.

[School Daze]

K

^^Good Points^^
Eh. I don't have time for this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Drawings weren't that good. No sound, hard to play. You should definitely make it more obvious on what you have to do. I had no idea what the hell to do half the time. Work on the drawings mostly and add some sound.

[Mr.Offensive]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad concept. Kind of interesting the way you layed this out and stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
LAYERS. You need to learn how to use layers first off. It will improve stlightly your crappy graphics. The graphics are still crappy, and the drawings are bad, and you couldn't even do the text nicely. The clips are short, kind of predictable, and not very funny. Add some sound effects too.

[Online burp machineMixer2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess I could say here that I thought it was creative how you made this look like a stereo setup, and I always like creativity.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really is a horrible game. First off, why would you put music on it? you can't hear the burps with the music on, and since the burp clips are so long and low quality, you can't possibly have them go to the music or something. The burps sound terrible, they are really loud and low quality, and I didn't enjoy hearing them. Not funny at all, lack luster effort. Deserving of a zero.