FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pokemon Quizz 1.4]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hitting the arrow keys to give your answers is pretty unique about this quiz. The questions are challenging to me, though I want never one for Pokemon. The graphical layout was pretty good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
When Iget a question wrong you ask "whare are you six?". This made me laugh because aren't six year olds the ones that are supposed to like Pokemon. Anway, like frenzy said, the music is very loud, and I wish I didn't have to go back to the menu every time I get a question wrong.

Aprime responds:

"When Iget a question wrong you ask "whare are you six?". This made me laugh because aren't six year olds the ones that are supposed to like Pokemon", thats so funny, thanks for the review, it wud be the best review if only u gave it a high score, but the humour according to you should have been at least a 4

[Clock Soundboard!]

K

^^Good Points^^
All of the buttons worked and the right clips played when you clicked the buttons. I liked the little menu at the bottom as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use some graphical revamping. The black background is rather bland, you could put a nice clocky background in there with some images. The sound clips aren't really that great for making a prank call, especially since they are scattered all over the place. You should really organize them into category. Also, you obviously should get rid of the second page since three years later and you still haven't added it. It will just make people hate this more.

[Counter-Strike Shooter]

K

^^Good Points^^
It looks like you atleast put some effort into making this game, which I will give you credit for. The backgrounds, enemies, and player character were drawn fairly well. There are good sound effects used throughout this and they are well-placed and clear.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is way too short, so I will recommend some things to do to improve it. First off, make some more scenes, after the game is over, really the player should have to go to another scene or something to kill some more enemies. Some kind of scoring system would be nice, or a reloading button just to add some more realism. Also try to use shading on your drawings.

[Go Kart Racing DEMO]

K

^^Good Points^^
The good part about this is the drawings. The car drawings are actually pretty well done.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is terribly made. There is not interaction with the car and anything else on the track, meaning you can run into the walls and out of the track without consequence and into the other car without consequence. There aren't any sounds, I think it's obvious which ones you should put in. Besides that, since there are two players, you need to make some kind of score system so that people can actually play against each other and have a decent competition.

[Dress-up Brad]

LOL

^^Good Points^^
I think people would like this better if they gave it a chance. Sure it doesn't have a hot nude video game character in it, but it's still pretty fun to play with. There are enough items in this game to make some pretty wild combinations and I laughed at some of mine. The drawings are wonderful, which just makes things that much better. Fun stuff, nice job man.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately for you, NG is full of horny young boys, who when searching Dress-up find this, will be enraged to to find the hot naked video game character I mentioned above. I liked it though.

[Torture Pico]

K

^^Good Points^^
Sorry, but I really can't think of anything that stuck out as funny or entertaining in the least bit to stick in this section, so I just wrote this long sentence to fill up some space.

^^Needs Improving^^
You have to assume that submitting a game where one tourtures the NG mascot, that it will not be a very popular game, especially when it is as poorly made as this game. The blood is drawn very unprofessionally and doesn't look good at all. The animations were terrible, like the dogs and the baseball bats. You just cut and pasted a few items then moved them around. The deaths weren't very creative, and this was not very entertaining at all.

[I hate aliens the game]

K

^^Good Points^^
The funniest and best part I found about this was the first frame with mission briefing. your explanation of why you made this game is hilarious to me. "Extracto mouth" lol

^^Needs Improving^^
The game is really easy since it is incredibly obvious which choice you have to use in order to survive the game. The drawings weren't that great and neither were the animations, which really hurts this game. The sound effects are pretty lame too. Sorry, I just didn't like this.

[FaceDesign]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this is the drawings. Certainly you put some time into the drawings, the detail in the eyes is very nice. The items worked, and they were the basics for making a human face.

^^Needs Improving^^
My main problem with this is that it is rather boring. You just dress up to John/Jane Doe characters with just normal facial objects. It would be better if there were some funny items in this game, or atleast some more options. I would recommend a color changer for hair, eye color, and skin color. Also, you should make menu and let the user pick male/female. Also, once you are on the female screen, you should put a back button to the male side.

[Whack - A - Nazi]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is surprisingly good for the score this game has. The drawings were pretty well done, and the shading and animations were nice. The music was a nice pick, and the game worked well. It wasn't too challenging, but not too easy.

^^Needs Improving^^
This needs some more depth to it. The game just goes on and on and never ends. This needs some kind of difficulty increase as you go on or something to spice it up.

[dress chibi vegeta clock!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, all of the items seemed to work for me and all the ones I used were layered right. I also liked how you could move around vegeta's body and his arms and legs separately. The items were of good variety too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like the explanation pages. They just seem kind of pointless to me and maybe they are just fillers. The items aren't drawn very well, they were very two dimensional.