FattyWhale's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-=}Techno CooLness{=-]

Ok

This is the last song and the best one I've seen by you. I think this one shows the most likeable beat to it and the best mix of sounds. Same problem as the others though. Not much excitement in it. Try to change the tempo in parts of it.

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Spiff responds:

Once again, this review was helpful. When I make another one, I'll let you know I want you to critique it before I post it to make sure it's decent enough. Thanks for the help.

[***Comforting^ music***]

Ok

This was kind of cool as well. You established a strong beat with the deep drums in the background and the other sounds in this were rather cool. Again though, this didn't vary much at all, and it just seemed like a short loop to me.

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Spiff responds:

Thanks. Thats pretty much what it was meant to be. The feedback will help me when I create another one.

[CraZy DanCe MuzAk]

Ok

Well this was definitely an interesting piece. Parts of it sounded like a neat mix, but for the most part it just sounded annoying. It wouldn't have been quite so bad if the song had some variety throughout. To me it just sounds like the same thing over and over.

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Spiff responds:

This one I wasn't too happy with. I experimented with some reversal in the beats, so that might have had an effect on it. I'll remix it eventually.

[Salvare Ambition]

Ok

Another interesting song by you, with more lyrics, always cool. It's very interesting how you pieced the sound together, but it didn't really sound believable at all. A little boring with the background music too. Felt more like I was just listening to him speak.

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Bezman responds:

This was kinda an experiment - an attempt to emulate negativland in my own style.

I wanted the cuts to remain 'obvious', just using repeated words and phrases to bring attention to a particular phrase or sentiment.

Here, I just wanted people to think about the importance of ambition and the success of Fidel Castro's rule.

I'll try and mix it up more next time.

Thanks for the review!

[Mangosteen (reigns supreme)]

Ok

This song was very interesting in my opinion! The beat was cool, as it reminded me of an island, which reminds me of mangos, so you get it. It's also cool because it has lyrics, which most songs on NG don't, and they were actually pretty creative in how you rhymed them. Great singing too :D

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Bezman responds:

The fruit actually isn't a mango - it's a totally different fruit. Just in case there was any confusion.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mangosteen

It's slightly less sweet and slightly more sour than a mango and it doesn't have stringy bits.

Glad you enjoyed the tune! Thanks for the multitude of specific comments.

Stay funky!

[Cleyra Dancing Stage]

Ok

Another quality audio submission by you. I don't think that it is quite as good as most of your original stuff, and I think perhaps you should work on remixes a little more just to get better at them.

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[(SM64) Sleeping Piranha P]

Ok

This was a pretty decent song. It was a little bit quiet, which was the only thing I didn't like about it. I didn't even realize it was playing when I first put it on. The song itself was calming, and sounded pretty cool.

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[The Apple Song]

Ok

Really getting a little repetitive with these songs. They just sound like the same thing to me over and over. This one was mellow, which I liked, but it really sounded like you compromised the quality quite a bit.

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[The Watermellon Song]

Ok

This song started off pretty decent, sounded like a pretty good solo. However, as the song went on I just felt like you went a little overboard with this. You used the pedal way too much and it just became a little bit annoying to me. You should have added some regular guitar into that as well.