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[Futurama Quiz Game]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was pretty good and it was neat how you added a bender clip when one got a question wrong. The questions were pretty challenging and I liked the end with all the grades, etc.

^^Needs Improving^^
The images you used for the backgrounds were pretty low quality and just more annoying than anything. Much better than your second version of this though.

bkdude responds:

thanks for constructive ctiticism

[Futurama Quiz Game 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Questions were alright, though I didn't get to them all because of the scream that blasted when you got a question wrong...

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, that scream for one. No one wants to play a game for more than a few seconds with that playing. The buttons are pretty ugly, and the text is kind of hard to read sometimes against that background.

bkdude responds:

lol the screaming was on purpouse

[Waka Laka Dodge]

K

^^Good Points^^
I saw this from viewing your submission in NG ALPHAS, which seems to be a much better game than this one is, hopefully on schedule for tommorow. The song was decent, but it doesn't really belong in a flash game. I'm sure people won't like the song as much as they like dancing to it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game is really hard, as I've already seen people wrote. The black thing moves way too fast. I've lasted about three seconds at most. Hope to see the new edition soon, and please don't delete this one...I lose so many reviews that way. :(

Jimtopia responds:

I think you'll be pleasently surprised with the new version, so keep looking.

[Kill Smile!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the music was pretty good, and the ending "finish him" sound was pretty nice addition. The game is pretty fun to play and the drawings aren't half bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is really short...seems like more of a demo. You should add some more levels or difficulties or something, because as it is right now, this game doesn't have much replay value.

AngryFaic responds:

Yeah, this was really only for people who are bored, who have a webcam, a minute and a face to kill.

[SF3 Scene Creator]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, this isn't bad. You have five different backgrounds for people to use, which is nice, and all of the images you used were both big and high quality. The music wasn't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, I don't understand this "Please wait...." thing you added for five seconds. I just waited for the thing to load and now you want me to wait again? That's not right. Anyway I don't really like how the items are all scattered throughout the stage, it's just harder to get everything off of the stage. You should start them all off above in the black area. There weren't too many items either.

threeD responds:

5 secs.. just wanted ythe music to end :P lol

this is a mere try to see if this idea is gonna work or not and i have got avg. of 7.5/10 which is cool so i am definitely making a next one with more stuff and also trying to get the person to select the sprites from a drop down menu..
next one might have a lot more or ALL of the characters and new stuff like different fireballs, hyper combo lightning stuff, and more..

[Newground$ Tutorial 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
This has improved a little bit from the first tutorial you did. I liked how you had the music on/off buttons, which should be in every tutorial. I am also a fan of how you linked each of the portal awards to the listing page on NG. This is very helpful, I think. The buttons all seemed to work too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are still pretty lame. Also, the music on/off buttons seem to be in the way sometimes.

HomerDough responds:

Yea I know about the music buttons. I need to fix that. Thanks

[Newground$ Tutorial]

K

^^Good Points^^
Much better than you NG quiz. I liked the music, it was a neat tune, and wasn't annoying or low quality. There is a quite a bit of good information in this tutorial for the people that are less exprienced on NG, and I think that you did a good job with explaining most things. I could see this being useful.

^^Needs Improving^^
Most of this info is taken right from the Help section of NG, so I can't say you had a lot of original work on this. Also, I didn't really like how when you went back to the menu the music restarted.

HomerDough responds:

Thanks and I know about the music

[Newground Quiz]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music is very characteristic of NG, that is for sure. I guess you couldn't have music any more NG themed than an old classic paragonx9 song.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, There is a lot wrong with this. First off, after question seven, you go right back to question five, so you can't really get to the end of the quiz without doing some right clicking. The graphics aren't that great, they are really quite bland and boring. I felt that a lot of the questions weren't very good either. Most of them were about Tom and not so much about NG itself. Who cares how tall Tom is?

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HomerDough responds:

Again, they are checkpoints. If you get one wrong, you go to the nearest checkpoint. Number 7's answer is 5'11 so you don't have to right click.

[First Flash Tut]

K

^^Good Points^^
Usually when a persons first flash submission is a tutorial, it usually sucks, however this one was actually pretty well done! I liked the many different sound clips and the graphical layout was pretty nice looking. I especially liked how easy this was to follow. You even put some //comments into your AS, which is something I don't see in many tuts, but is very useful.

^^Needs Improving^^
As Frenzy said, this isn't a plethora of information. Next time, you should definitely put a few more components of Flash into the tut.

Storm responds:

Thanks for the thumbs up, and yes - now I look at it, my tut is a bit too small.

[Type It]

K

^^Good Points^^
Game works pretty well. I have few complaints about the actual gameplay. The game is midly addicting too. I like how it gets progressively harder as you go on and the health system works well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really an interesting game, nor is it very original or innovative. The game is super easy too. I played for a few minutes and found I was not challenged at all and I don't feel like sticking around until it gets harder. You should definitely make the game harder.

Afro-Ninja responds:

Trust me, if you keep playing, it gets hard enough