FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clock Hentai Quiz]

K

^^Good Points^^
It was truly an interesting quiz. The questions didn't make any sense, but I got a laugh out of the pictures at the end. I was expecting something actually drawn, but the clock pictures were still rather funny. Good idea.

^^Needs Improving^^
The questions should have had real answers instead of just random ones.

Little-Rena responds:

I was too tired and lazy to draw when I did this, but thanks. I was going to make really questions, but again, I was too lazy :(

Thanks for the review.

[Cars: The Soundboard]

K

^^Good Points^^
One of the better SB's you've made from what I remember. The background was good quality and looked nice. Overall the graphics were better than you've done in the past. I liked the sounds included in this. They were humorous, good quality, and the buttons worked.

^^Needs Improving^^
Would have been great to see some of the "scraped ideas" in this. I guess I never thought to add more interactivity to any of my SB's but having a quiz is a great idea, and also random facts is a very cool idea as well.

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Frenzy responds:

Yeah, I probably will use some of those in my next soundboard, I just didn't feel like it this time around and wanted something to put in the 'scraped ideas' section. lol.

Thanks for the review!

~ Z

[Stop the pollution!]

K

^^Good Points^^
At least you made the game your own. I really don't like it when people submit remakes of classic games with a video game theme or something, but this was definitely a lot more interesting than that. You had an interesting premise and interesting graphics.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should have added some different music in there, the original music doesn't really seem to fit too well with this.

wolfinator-x responds:

I would have put music, but I forgot. Next time I will.

[Newbie Tutorial]

K

^^Good Points^^
You have a few good topics in here, and I like how you separated everything and made it easy to navigate. Seems like you know what you are talking about.

^^Needs Improving^^
The instructions are a bit vague in most places. You assume that people know a lot about Flash, but most of them looking for tutorial don't. Try to put more detail next time.

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wolfinator-x responds:

I try putting the most detail possible. I want to score as most possible.

[Wolfinator-x Random Quiz!]

K

^^Good Points^^
It delivers what is promised, which is completely random questions with no correlation to each other. I really can't say anything bad about this, as it is what you wanted to do, but honestly it's not really my bag.

^^Needs Improving^^
I liked the music at first, but it's a really short loop that is very powerful, and gets a bit annoying after a while. Also, the graphics could have changed throughout, just to add some more interest to it.

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wolfinator-x responds:

I wanted to do a "Background" button for people to change it, but like the replay button, it wasn't working (I dunno why)

[Star Knight---Demo RPG]

K

^^Good Points^^
Honestly, I found the "No!" when you died to be pretty hilarious, which is why I gave you points for humor. The music wasn't bad, and the graphics aren't the worst I've seen.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really doesn't offer a lot, even considering that it is a demo. You only have the option to attack or nothing (which has no advantage at all). You should add more attacks and some items, spells, or something. It seems like you have the coding down well enough to add some of these components.

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wolfinator-x responds:

I know, but we might not continue it, since it is gonna be a real game (we are gonna be videogame programmers in the future). Anyway we started working on RPG maker 2003.

[Advanced Tutorial]

K

^^Good Points^^
I suppose you have some good techniques in here. I like how all of the AS is selectable for easy moving to Flash.

^^Needs Improving^^
The thing that really annoyed me was the robotic voice over. There is really no need for it, as most people can simply read the text, and I don't know anyone who wouldn't want to read it faster than that robot voice. You should either get rid of it completely, or make it stop when moving from frame to frame, so that the clips don't overlap.

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wolfinator-x responds:

Sorry or the voice because I only know stopAllSounds();. I dunno how to stop only one sound.

[Jive Machine]

K

^^Good Points^^
I've seen this before, and I think it's worth mentioning its awesomeness. The graphics were amazing. I loved the colorful layout, and the different backgrounds were themed well with the songs, which were plentiful and good for dancing. There were a ton of moves, most of which gave me a good laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think the text could be slightly bigger.

BlueHippo responds:

twas awesome, no?

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[Lights Out 3D]

K

^^Good Points^^
Really not my type of game, but its still pretty well made. It works quickly and simply. Adding a move counter was a good idea for people who want to compete with themselves or others.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just nothing much graphically in here. Perhaps some larger grids would be fun to add for some people.

Flame-Reaper responds:

Thanks for the comment. The move counter does serve another purpose. You actualy loose 5 points per move. so it helps to finished quickly.

Graphics wise i was kinda of limited i chose to keep it rather minimalistic as i felt it looked best with this kinda of game.

As for larger grids. the engine will suport grids of any size, i just found that the 3x3x3 was tricky enough. going any bigger makes it incredibly difficult.

[Defend Your Mom!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely the most enjoyable Mother's Day submission this year that I've seen. The graphics were pleasant as well as the sounds. The game is a fun and original twist on a classic Defense game, with an innocent premise and game play.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm a little disappointed at the way that I died. Had really no chance to shoot the thug that appeared right on the edge of the screen.

Kart-Man responds:

Thanks. Yeah, it gets tricky when the pickpockets seemingly appear out of nowhere. If I make a sequel, I'll fix that problem.