FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Daily2oon SE: ThreeStar]

Funny

^^Good Points^^
I thought that this game was pretty funny. I laughed at how no matter what you did you died...even going into the school, that is pretty funny stuff. The drawings weren't too bad, I liked the facial expressions you used and the voice overs were funny as well. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Umm...the backgrounds were kind of bland, could use some more details.

ThreeStar responds:

arauuughhhh
/me is lazy

Three

[Nude Porn Tit Boob]

I don't get it

^^Good Points^^
The sound effect that was heard when you hit this fat guy was kind of humorous.

^^Needs Improving^^
Maybe I'm not current on the times, but I don't know who the heck this guy is or what significance is to anyone here. He just flies around the screen and then you can hit him if you want. Nothing else really happens that I was expecting.

zipstyke responds:

Thanks for the positive review. I'll take this into considerantion for the next iteration of "Nude Porn Tit Boob - the Sexining"

[Space Skirmish]

Fun game.

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty fun defending game. The different difficulties are fun and challenging. The upgrade screen is neat and there are lots of different upgrades to purchase. The game is fun to play and the controls were easy to handle.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not exactly an innovative game, it's been done many times and there isn't really anything new that I haven't seen in any other games like this.

flame862 responds:

yea thnx, why I haven't made another game is because I've run out of ideas.

I've gotten a few, but when I tried them, they didn't even start out very well.

if you've got an idea, i'd love to hear it!

[all around tutorial]

Some good info here

^^Good Points^^
This tutorial has quite a bit of stuff in it, mainly in the AS and animating sections and some of it I found to be quite useful. The explanations were plain and simple and easy to follow. I liked the music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lot of this stuff has already been put into countless tutorials that are easier to locate than this one. The tutorial itself is kind of ugly with the red backround and the overall graphical style isn't very pleasant.

yodd responds:

Wow thanks for reviewing all my works (well two for sure). And you actually told me what I did well and not so well, both are appreciated! I didn't think the backround was that bad and stuff >:(. But thats your opinion, thanks for a great review yet again!

[Test Your Might]

Didn't really work...

^^Good Points^^
The game seems to be well made. There are a variety of different types of question types and this is much better than the traditional multiple chioce quizzes. I liked the themesong section and the gun section. This is an innovative quiz and I hope you make more.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, I couldn't get through this quiz. Twice I got an error message saying the script cause Flash to run slowly. This never has happened in any other game, so I assume the problem is on your end...

mudvaynian182 responds:

Thanx for the feedback, i think iv found and fixed the problem. let me know if it happens again.

[]{ombat interactive]

A fansite in a flash movie!

^^Good Points^^
Let's see, you've got all of the characters from the original MK in here with their moves and bio and so forth. This is a neat little collection of everything and is easier than downloading a bunch of fatatlity videos.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could have added some more characters. I don't know why you just stopped at the MK1 characters. Also, I don't see why the Stats info is on the secret page. It would make more sense in the character page itself.

jack-o-sticks responds:

thank you for your insight but i thought that it would be better to have the mk 1 mk 2 mk 3 mk 4 seperate i mean this size of this is over 3000mb
and there is a 5000mb upload limit but i will be submitting further work in the ]{ombat interactive series so keep witing

[Weird Al MP3 Player v1.01]

I will complain about quality.

Ok, in this review, I'm just going to give you some advice. I see what you are trying to do. Make an MP3 player with some of Al's songs. Fine. That's fair. However, there are only three songs, and they are all terrible quality. Forget about the filesize, and upload to the maximum 5mb with more songs and regular quality. Most people have high speed connections and won't mind much to load such great songs. It makes perfect sense!

HackerZC responds:

Back in the day Newgrounds had a very strict filesize limit of about 2MB. Back then most people had dial-up internet as well (56k or slower), and commercial broadband was unheard of. It took like an hour to upload something that was 1.7MB.

[SBC Soundboard __ o_O]

Umm...

I'm not quite sure what to say about this soundboard. It's extremely similar to the one submitted on -Frenzy-'s account, so I don't really see much of a point in this. Since you didn't rip the sounds yourself and just typed some stuff into Speakonia, you could have added a ton more sounds to make a better soundboard with more possiblities. I liked how you separated each section though. I found three buttons that didn't work at all.

Kronzo-Productions responds:

Thanks for reviewing! I made this before my other one, and I just toguht I'd submit it.

[NBA Quiz v 1.0]

I guess if I were into basketball...

^^Good Points^^
I liked how you didn't just make this a straight-up quiz, but made it a lot more interesting by making this sort of like a job interview, which was pretty creative. The losing scene was a funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
There seems to be some audio problems with music overlapping. I didn't really enjoy playing this game, but then again, I really don't know anything about basketball, so maybe those who do will get some more entertainment out of this.

ElMaster responds:

"There seems to be some audio problems with music overlapping"
Yeah I forgot to add a stopallsounds to the replay button.

Thx for the review

[Fantasy Female 2.0]

Better

^^Good Points^^
There is a whole lot more one can do in this episode than the last one. The face editor and body editor sections are good, and the music was nice as well. There was a lot more stuff here and most of it was drawn a bit better. The buttons also seemed to work better.

^^Needs Improving^^
The general drawings could use some more definition and realism to it. The body you drew doesn't have a lot of detail in it.

Syrsly responds:

It's old. Try version seven. Better yet, try version eight on DeviantArt or SheezyArt.

I'm making something more advanced right now. It has interactive characters.