FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fantasy Female]

Not so good

^^Good Points^^
There are a lot of different styles to choose from in this game. Many different items that are easy to choose between and toggle.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your drawings were decent, but not at all up to par with some of the stuff I've seen lately here on NG. I'm not really getting the whole easter egg thing in this, it doesn't seem to be of much use.

Syrsly responds:

It's old. Try version seven. Better yet, try version eight on DeviantArt or SheezyArt.

[A Mario Scene Creator]

Ok.

^^Good Points^^
The one thing that I thought set this apart was that when you clicked certain parts of this it made a noise. That would make this a lot more fun to play around with.

^^Needs Improving^^
The problem with this is that there are already plenty of Mario scene creators and this doesn't add anything besides the new sounds with it. None of the sprites are animated, there aren't many of them, and there is only one background. So if I ever wanted to look for a scene creator, I wouldn't pick this one.

John12346 responds:

well, i put in more backgrounds now.

[Ultimate Newgrounds Quiz!]

I'm not too enthused

I'm really not too impressed after playing this game. I wouldn't quite dub it as the "ultimate". My first suggestion, is that since this is a NG quiz, it should be more NG themed, mainly in the layout and color scheme. The green just doesn't cut it. Then there is the whole thing with level fifteen not working, which is really a drag. Also, like the previous review said, this isn't too original, and the questions are a little overdone in NG quizes. One thing I did like was that you gave the viewer the option of going to the main menu after every question.

Kronzo-Productions responds:

Okay then... thanks for your review.

By the way, what happened to your ^^Good Points^^, ^^Needs Improving^^ format?

[:: Dress or Undress Ed ::]

A decent game.

^^Good Points^^
I thought that the drawings were good. Looked just like the character from the TV show. There were a bunch of different items to choose from in this game, which made this pretty fun.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seemed really cramped to me. It was hard for me to navigate around and place objects somewhere when they were not being used. Give the user some extra room to move stuff around. Also, you should add some FMA music to this (the new theme is great).

rabi87 responds:

Hi hi, thanks for the review. I appreciate it! :) Hehe, I'm still trying to figure out how to organize the clothing into tabs of some sort. ^^ Again, thanks for the advice and I'm off to figure out how to insert music into flash! =o

[Eh Complete]

Another dress up?

^^Good Points^^
Just like your other two dress up games, this has a good selection of items nicely arranged and easy to move around in a small amount of space. The drawings are good and the animated items are neat as well. And your music choices are very choice.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, one of the shirt items doesn't really have a right hand, and since there are only left hands, you have a hand missing. Also, this is your third dress up game submitted and they are all the same person with a lot of the same items, so maybe you should consider combining them into one, each getting their separate pages.

fckin-clum responds:

umm thx. The point is the guy's got his hand in his pocket, that's why it's missing (I know, work on the graphics) and my bigger project is of a similair layout but with all 12 poses that I'll soon be finished with. Thanks for the pointers :)

[Frontwards Complete]

Fix the errors

^^Good Points^^
Again, this has good drawings and such. There is a myriad of items to choose from making this very entertaining and quite fun to play around with. Again, you've got a nice music choice.

^^Needs Improving^^
You've already said most of the problems I was going to put in here in your intro. I'm not sure if you know, but you can edit a submission through the "Portal Submissions" section of your Account Options page instead of resubmitting the fixed game.

fckin-clum responds:

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[Sidewards Complete]

Pretty good

^^Good Points^^
There are a hell of a lot of pieces to this dress up game. Eighty pieces really can keep a person busy for some time. I had some fun playing around with this. Everything seemed to work fine that I used and the different pieces blended together and were layered well. Drawings were good and the animations were neat. The music was good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not sure I like the idea that this is just a stick figure. It's a lot more fun when it's someone who is famous or more popular. Also, the hand pieces should stick together, instead of each piece separate.

fckin-clum responds:

k

[ExTreme ClOck SoUndboArd]

Eh, kind of lame.

^^Good Points^^
I liked the intro to this and also the background music. I don't think i've ever heard the music, but it is pretty funny. This is also very good for making an actual prank call since you made all the sounds yourself. There are lots of replies and greeting, all of the stuff you need for a good soundboard.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm always want to like Clock submissions, but this is just a little lame. You went into Speakonia and made some sounds. Not a real lot of talent there, seeing how I rip the music for all my boards. You could have atleast added some different tones to emulate different clocks. Also, the pictures screen has a total of three pictures. Could use some more.

Frenzy responds:

Yes, well, if I was going to do it for something else, I wouldn't have very many sounds, and this soundboard wouldn't really be good for prank calls, would it? No. That's what I wanted to achieve with this soundboard.

Thanks for reviewing.

[Contra 20th Anniversary]

Very nice.

^^Good Points^^
Contra III is one of my favorite games of all times, definitely my favorite SNES side-scroller. This tribute to it is very appropriate and very well made. The levels appeared just like the levels from the original game, and the game play was accurate as well. I liked the options before playing, they add a lot of interactivity and custumizablity to this game.

^^Needs Improving^^
Perhaps a level you made would be nice? Or atleast something more original.

Jhunour responds:

good idear! thanks!

[Best Christmas Collab]

Good collab throughout.

^^Menu^^
Liked the music the most. Very chrismasy, yet not a song that I've heard used before, so it's original. The names are interactive, which is a nice touch as well. The menu could use some sprucing up though, it doesn't look too chrismasy.

^^Orunitia^^
It's got the classic "make fun of emo" music. The graphics are pretty good. I liked the shading and shadows, and the snowflakes drift very realistically. Just a little short.

^^Wesdood^^
Love the music. It's really up beat and quite entertaining. The game itself comtains minor entertainment for a little while, but nothing too exciting, but fit's the collab well. The drawings are good too.

^^Tommaycry^^
Err...A little bit weird. Not sure who this Omar guy is, but if it's an inside joke it's not really funny. Doesn't really fit the mood of the whole collab either.

^^Towley^^
Very good. It's a quick and fun little game. It wouldn't really work as a stand along game because it is too simplistic, but it is perfect for a collab such as this one.

^^Juliusas^^
Pretty strange as well. Exploding pizza, then getting shot by Santa Clause. Good drawings though.

^^Overall^^
A very good collab that contains both interactivity and some pretty decent films as well.

Review Request Club

wesdood responds:

All I do all day is make fun of emos. Fight the people fighting the system when I'm keeping the system in line by brawling with it. Kthx.