FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madagascar Soundboard]

K

^^Good Points^^
There were a bunch of sound clips in this, and I like how you separated them by characters. The sound clips were humorous and just fun to listen to, which is why I liked this soundboard a lot. I thought the jungle sounds at the beginning was a cool addition as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, this can't really be used for a prank call, but who cares, it was fun to listen to. The graphics aren't really that great though. Could use some background besides the orange, though it did go with the green buttons.

Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the review!

.frenZy.

[Blockhead Soundboard]

K

^^Good Points^^
I was always wanting to make one of these for BH, but never really got around to it. How did you go about getting the sounds? I was going to record every episode then isolate them...probably why I never did it. :D Anyway, very good soundboard. Jam packed with three pages of funny clips from BH himself, one of my favorite characters. Lots of humor and great for prank calling.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the intro since it doesn't look at all like Swain's intro, and the buttons were kind of ugly, as were the background images.

wizardman responds:

That's basically what I did, I went through every episode and just ripped them with Sound Recorder. I was tryign to make the intro not look exactly like Swain's to avoid plagiarism. It's his intro :P. Yeah, the bg images weren't great, but I didn't have any other ideas.

[Clock Pong]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this was the graphics. I like how you incorporated a bunch of different clocks into this and the background is well done.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game is very glitchy. If orange hits the center, he bounces around in there for a second, and I don't really see any other clocks trying to kill me as was explained in the instructions. Interesting graphics, but not a very fun game.

Lone-Ronin1 responds:

Well it is my first game. So of course there are glitches. but Iam glad you liked the graphics.

[Music and Sounds]

K

^^Good Points^^
I would stick to making movies about your hamster. They are way cooler than this :D

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, there really isn't much to this submission, and I'm sure that the only reason it passed judgement was the fact that it was Clock Day and you said Happy Clock Day in the desciption of this. This is basically just a collection of sound effects and a few songs controlled by various buttons on the keyboard, nothing very imressive at all.

MegaGold responds:

Oh you watch my hamster movies =) and thanks for the review. I don't know how to make flash really so I snuck this in.

[StrawberryClock: SB]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, this is much better than the first soundboard you submitted. You had a lot more sounds that were divided into sections and are great for a prank call. The extras were good, especially the SBC rap, that was rather funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are kind of bland for this, you could have added some more pictures or a better background.

Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the review!

When I made this, I didn't really know how to make a really godo abckground, I think. Now I do! Expect mroe soon!

(And when you say the first soundboard, do you mean my first soundboard eve,r or my first clock soundboard?)

Anyway, Happy Clock Day! And thanks for the review!

.frenZy.

[Which Clock are You?]

K

^^Good Points^^
Interesting idea for a Clock Day game. It's definitely an original idea. I liked the music you used for this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the game isn't really fun since all of the A answers are SBC, etc. You should atleast make it so you switch it up every once in a while, or add some more clocks to the mix. I also notice that you are always using the same clock related pictures! Happy Clock Day though.

Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the review!

Lol, yeah, I guess I'm just too lazy to get more pictures. Lol.

And, yeah, I shouldn't have made it that not all of the answers that were 'A' were SBC, etc.

Anyway, Happy Clock Day to you, too! And thanks for the review!

.frenZy.

[NG Clock Robbery Sim]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hah, I remember when the office was robbed a few months ago, and this game just makes it seem like a funny thing! My favorite part was when Stamper just said "wassup" to the guy and walked away. The voice overs were great in this, and the sound effects were neat too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, let's face it, the graphics are not very good in this. Your drawings are really primitive, and the animations are just as bad.

Rabid-Animals responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Koopa Chaos]

K

^^Good Points^^
I see you took my advice on making a maze game, and for your first try and it taking only about one day to make, this isn't bad. I like how you added in the many different types of Koopas and also bowser was a neat addition. The music is good of course too.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, it's very easy to cheat in this game. Ask around and find out how to disable right click to make things a lot better. You should also try to use some more sprites for the backgrounds and walls. Try not to use the red and black lines for the borders, it's kind of ugly.

RyuXKen responds:

kk thanx! i think when i edit it, ill put up some new bgs and make koopas animated, oh and get rid of the cheating thing!

[Mario Scene Maker (C.M.S)]

K

^^Good Points^^
Like the other ones you made, you had a lot of items in this. Many different characters and items. I liked how you had a bigger background in this one too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really isn't as good as the last one you made. First off, compress the music into *.wav format and you can put a lot more songs on there. Also, the background you used isn't that good because there is already a ton of scenery in it, which kind of messes things up. I don't know why you only put in two backgrounds either, more is better!

azza3809 responds:

1st:- Thanks, I unlike most people have found several websites where i can get sprites and backgrounds.

2nd:- The music loops so it takes less space if i keep it in mp3 format like it says in the file compresion area.

3rd:- I cant find any more custom made backgrounds at the moment. If i do find some i'll be sure to update it

[Mega Mario Scene Maker]

K

^^Good Points^^
As far as scene creators go, this is pretty good. I like how you gave some stats in the preloader, and I wasn't disappointed by the final product. The different music choices were nice, and you had many different backgrounds to use. The sprites were very numerous, and I like how some of them were animated. Very nice job on this.

^^Needs Improving^^
The cactus guy doesn't copy itself when you pick it up, so you can't really use more than one of them. Also, it would be nice if you had some animated sprites that weren't characters, like the spikes or the rock guys.

azza3809 responds:

Ok ill try to include these when i next update this game.