FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[concentrating]

(title in work)

Quite good actually. The storyline and the humor was definitely good in this movie. I enjoyed the jokes and got a few laughs out of this. I particularly like your use of music and camera effects to make certain parts seem really intense. Quite well done. The only thing you really need to work on are the graphics. Animations were a bit choppy throughout, and not much coloring either.

PegasuTV responds:

thanks dude
about the graphics,its hard to draw with the maus

[The Way I Feel]

(title in work)

Heh, this was interesting. I guess you were on some kind of drug or something? I don't really understand what emotion is meant by a spinning head flying across a sunny field. That definitely was unexpected, so I like that. Graphics could have been better though. Needs some shading at the very least, and some more animation.

ForNoReason responds:

Nope no drugs. Thanks for the review.

[Armada - Part Tres]

(title in work)

Not a bad claymation. I thought it started out a bit too slowly. The whole conversation between the two was really boring, with not a lot of animation. Once people started dying and getting shot, your animating skill game out, and I was surprised that you animated as well as you did. Nicely done.

Devils-Dog responds:

Thanks, but I didn't animate this one as well as my other movies.

And the boringness at the start was on purpose, I was using simaler humour to Knox's (KlayWorld) recent stuff on YouTube.

[The Corporation: facebook]

(title in work)

Well, it's a lesson to be learned. Why to not go on Facebook at work. I didn't see the ending coming, so that is a good thing. In the opening scene, I think you need to up the voice overs a bit. I could hardly hear them. Luckily there were some subtitles. Also, the scene on the computer screen could have been done better. The text was really small. You should have zoomed in on the chatbox a bit.

Kumar responds:

Yes I'm getting a lot of that, definetly for next time. Thanks for the review!

[A short on Technology]

(title in work)

Ok, it wasn't bad. You did a good job with the black and white theme in the beginning. The music was quite good on that, and overall enjoyable throughout. The storyline was interesting, though I don't really see the point to this movie in the end. Animations could use some work as well.

pelepone responds:

K will keep that in mind. THx.

[Your Mothers House]

(title in work)

Heh, this wasn't bad. It was funny, I quite enjoyed the way you made the one character so classy. The contrast between what he said and his class was humorous. Obviously though, the graphics need the most work. Not much animation going on throughout, and the drawings weren't impressive either. Work on that the most.

Red-XAnimation responds:

Thanks for your input, I kinda want to do more voice work than animation. If you know anyone that might require a voice of a character or anything i would be really grateful to have the opportunity. Thank you

[Bubbles Wassap]

(title in work)

Well you took something that was already annoying and somehow made it even more so. The high pitch you added to this definitely isn't something that makes this good. Very annoying to listen to this. The animation was also sub par. Not very detailed or smooth in the animating.

Mkemaster responds:

Okay, Thanks ~.~

[figuritas]

(title in work)

Let's see. You animated this fairly well. It definitely passes for OK animation. You also put in an awesome song, but cut it off way too short. I think there was too much animating going on in this simultaneously, so it was too hard to really see everything that was going on. You should have broken it down a bit. Maybe used some camera zoom to focus on a specific fight too.

davidpuralocura responds:

if it pass the OK why a 2?

and it is more funny if you can see anywere and they are all fighting

:P i think

[Hey, Cowboy]

(title in work)

Well it has the graphics, which were pretty good. Nice drawings and animation of the clouds. That looked nice. Put your talent to work with something more meaningful. Something with a storyline and characters. This is funny for a bit I guess, just in it's randomness, but it gets old pretty quickly.

jacobwillman responds:

Yeah, i can only watch it for a few seconds before i'm like "alright. turn it off."

i am actually working on something bigger with a story and characters. Thanks for watching!