FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Saw X]

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Well, the drawings was pretty good. Could be better, but definitely looks like Jigsaw. The static effect was nice as well. I thought the music was appropriate as well. Unfortunately, for most of the speech, you can't hear what he says. Either get a clearer sound clip, or put subtitles.

EliStone responds:

Yeh this was only a little drawing to start off and i thought "Hey lets animate this." So i did. Yes i did do it quite fast thou.

Thanks for your review.

[It Doesn't Matter Lyrics]

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I can't say this was a very good submission. All you did was use a program that automatically scrolls the lyrics to a song. At the very least, you had good audio quality, but besides that, really no work put into this. A music video would have been more interesting.

lucarioguyarceusboy responds:

I don't have any flash program but this!

[Fruit N' Veg Attack 1]

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This was an interesting concept for a movie. I enjoyed the nuclear watermelon attack. I think that was a good way to start out the movie. I'm a little confused though. Are those green things on the fruit side or human side? That didn't really make sense to me. I liked the concept, so I hope you decide to continue work on this.

Lord-Desolator responds:

Thanks man. The green things are apple chunks, I probably should have mentioned that somewhere. I definitely want to continue, so you'll see more in the future. :)

[Dr. Horrible Monologue]

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An interesting take on the mind of a super villain. It was humorous to hear him talk about his problems, which were surprisingly just like the problems of normal people I suppose. That parallel was quite funny. At times the animation looked a bit awkward, but overall, the artwork was well done. Nice movie, good luck in your class.

Cynny responds:

Thanks, yeah overall there could be so much improvement~
but for my first ever animation, I'm pretty happy with it :)

[MrsCriblam Kills A Whale]

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A pretty lack luster effort for the most part. There really wasn't any one part that really stood out against the others. They were all pretty poorly done. Loud noises and poor graphics were what brought this down. The only part that was mildly good was the Johnny Bravo reference. Other than that, wouldn't want to get this as a birthday gift.

KhawnerL responds:

<RobHalford> "They were all pretty poorly done"
<RobHalford> get fucked

[Smoke's Rude Awakening]

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Eh, you've got some talent graphically. The animations were pretty smooth and the scenes were well detailed and drawn. I think taking tourettes guy audio is kind of lame though. That wasn't funny to begin with, so using it here isn't going to be that great. The only funny part was the very end. I guess this just isn't my cup of tea.

Avojaifnot responds:

I was originally going to make a movie that was, like, 3 minutes long, but I was like FUCK IT I'M TOO LAZY, LET'S PUT SOME TOURETTES GUY AUDIO IN IT.

[O Canada]

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This was pretty great. It made absolutely no sense in the first place, and the fact that it was set to the Canadian National Anthem made it that much more strange. I did enjoy the animations though. Their randomness gave me a chuckle. Smooth graphics with some nice effects as well. The file size probably could have been reduced though.

Thundaboom responds:

Glad you like the randomness.

And the file size might be explained by the cloud effect, the blur filter on high quality.

[Angel and the Fox]

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That was alright, I suppose. It's a simple story, that covers up any background, like why she is in the cage, which is kind of disappointing. Hopefully any future work on this story will reveal a bit more instead of covering it up. The music was a good choice, but the graphics were pretty lame. Animations were nil, and the use of mostly outlines was a bit cheap.

Jamieneo66 responds:

Well it wasn't planned for it really be a coloured animation save for one or two pieces, and there wasn't a great deal of animation avaliable due to the original idea =]

[Sprited Nazo Unleashed]

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What was that? I don't see really any need for lip syncing, as no one says anything. The animation itself wasn't bad, but there was no storyline and it just ended in a very odd place. Much shorter than I expected, and leaves a lot to be desired. Next time you should have some sort of storyline and dialogue, rather than just Sonic turning into a nuke explosion.

SoarKrieg responds:

Alright, but this wasn't intended to have a storyline. If you want the storyline then watch Chakra-X's "Nazo Unleashed" trilogy. These are scenes from it that I sprited to look as close to the original scenes as possible.

[a kitty goes shopping 2]

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Fantastic. It's amazing what wonderful things people can shoot out, even with the worst of graphics. The music was out of place, but you did some syncing with the song, which was cool. Storyline was glorious. That cat was so fucking happy. It almost brings a tear of happiness to mine own eyes.

k3ltr0n responds:

WOW THANKS DUDE ROCK ON !!!!