FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Don't lose!]

(title in work)

That was interesting I guess. You definitely put some effort and though into this. The music was a nice touch and the art wasn't bad. The animations could use a bit of work though. Also, that gunfire sound effect was far too loud I feel. Gave me quite a fright.

[Quincy]

(title in work)

Well the animation was definitely good. Very smooth and complex at times, which shows off your skill quite nicely. Storyline was weird, as were the characters. It really wasn't my thing, but I suppose it wasn't that bad overall. Nice artwork.

fluffkomix responds:

thanks. this review feels a little weird but i guess its because even if the animation is amazing, most people will vote 0 if they dont like the story/song.

good review :)

[Suprise!]

(title in work)

Eh, I don't really like this. The joke seems more like an inside joke than anything, even though maybe it isn't. Animation was very choppy and elementary. Work on the graphics the most. Also, what the heck was that thing that looked like a loaf of bread that kept popping up?

Giantsockmonster responds:

'twas a box

[What's the Worst?]

(title in work)

This was pretty well done. Animations and drawings were good enough, and I enjoyed the various things your character tried to do to get his soda. It sounded to me like you made some of the sound effects yourself, which I thought was cool. A bit predictable really, but a good movie as well.

[daft boys episode 0]

(title in work)

Not bad. I think that a pilot episode should give a little more background rather than just be a random animation. Graphically it wasn't too bad, and it had some humor. I don't see the point of using such a huge stage though. It just seems kind of awkward to me.

[Saw X]

(title in work)

Well, the drawings was pretty good. Could be better, but definitely looks like Jigsaw. The static effect was nice as well. I thought the music was appropriate as well. Unfortunately, for most of the speech, you can't hear what he says. Either get a clearer sound clip, or put subtitles.

EliStone responds:

Yeh this was only a little drawing to start off and i thought "Hey lets animate this." So i did. Yes i did do it quite fast thou.

Thanks for your review.

[House of Être]

(title in work)

A good project for you French class. It's pretty entertaining, which makes it a pretty good way to learn in my opinion. The flowing drawings went with the music well and really gave it a Paris feeling. I think it could have used some color though.

[Stickom: -One (Prologue)]

(title in work)

You still need a lot of practice in Flash. Graphically this wasn't that impressive, but keep working on it and you will get better. Other than that, subtitles would have been nice, or clearer voicing. I couldn't hear a few things that were said. Also, I don't really understand the storyline at all.

[It Doesn't Matter Lyrics]

(title in work)

I can't say this was a very good submission. All you did was use a program that automatically scrolls the lyrics to a song. At the very least, you had good audio quality, but besides that, really no work put into this. A music video would have been more interesting.

lucarioguyarceusboy responds:

I don't have any flash program but this!

[Fruit N' Veg Attack 1]

(title in work)

This was an interesting concept for a movie. I enjoyed the nuclear watermelon attack. I think that was a good way to start out the movie. I'm a little confused though. Are those green things on the fruit side or human side? That didn't really make sense to me. I liked the concept, so I hope you decide to continue work on this.

Lord-Desolator responds:

Thanks man. The green things are apple chunks, I probably should have mentioned that somewhere. I definitely want to continue, so you'll see more in the future. :)