FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A short on Technology]

(title in work)

Ok, it wasn't bad. You did a good job with the black and white theme in the beginning. The music was quite good on that, and overall enjoyable throughout. The storyline was interesting, though I don't really see the point to this movie in the end. Animations could use some work as well.

pelepone responds:

K will keep that in mind. THx.

[Your Mothers House]

(title in work)

Heh, this wasn't bad. It was funny, I quite enjoyed the way you made the one character so classy. The contrast between what he said and his class was humorous. Obviously though, the graphics need the most work. Not much animation going on throughout, and the drawings weren't impressive either. Work on that the most.

Red-XAnimation responds:

Thanks for your input, I kinda want to do more voice work than animation. If you know anyone that might require a voice of a character or anything i would be really grateful to have the opportunity. Thank you

[Bubbles Wassap]

(title in work)

Well you took something that was already annoying and somehow made it even more so. The high pitch you added to this definitely isn't something that makes this good. Very annoying to listen to this. The animation was also sub par. Not very detailed or smooth in the animating.

Mkemaster responds:

Okay, Thanks ~.~

[figuritas]

(title in work)

Let's see. You animated this fairly well. It definitely passes for OK animation. You also put in an awesome song, but cut it off way too short. I think there was too much animating going on in this simultaneously, so it was too hard to really see everything that was going on. You should have broken it down a bit. Maybe used some camera zoom to focus on a specific fight too.

davidpuralocura responds:

if it pass the OK why a 2?

and it is more funny if you can see anywere and they are all fighting

:P i think

[Chaos High 2 p1]

(title in work)

Ok, being that this is the second episode, you really need to cut down the intro movie. It's far too long for any flash, let alone the second episode of a series. The episode itself is very good. The storyline was interesting and the jokes were good. I laughed a few times throughout, so that's better than most. Now, the biggest thing you need to work on is your graphics.

[Mario's Stupid Mistakes]

(title in work)

Overall a very generic Mario movie. This idea of outtakes or mistakes as you call them has been done countless times before. The only one I really enjoyed from this was the one where Mario smashes his head on the invisible box. That was a good take on the game. The others though, were mostly just orgies of bad sound effects and animation. Work on your ideas.

[burning souls prolouge]

(title in work)

Well this is a prologue, so I really expected some sort of storyline to develop here, but this was mostly devoid of that. Should have definitely developed the characters more. Dialogue was terrible and predictable. Please make sure you spell things correctly in your movies or no one will take you seriously. Other than that, the animation wasn't too bad, and the fight scene was well done.

[Particles w/ Ty and Peter]

(title in work)

A quick, funny flash with a simple science lesson smashed in there as well. Your drawings were pretty cool, as were the animations. I think they set this apart from a crappy movie. I enjoyed the ending. I was trying to figure out what scientific applications the giant freezer in the sky could be, but then it was just to smash shit. So a bit of an unpredictable ending as well. Nice job.

[Hey, Cowboy]

(title in work)

Well it has the graphics, which were pretty good. Nice drawings and animation of the clouds. That looked nice. Put your talent to work with something more meaningful. Something with a storyline and characters. This is funny for a bit I guess, just in it's randomness, but it gets old pretty quickly.

jacobwillman responds:

Yeah, i can only watch it for a few seconds before i'm like "alright. turn it off."

i am actually working on something bigger with a story and characters. Thanks for watching!