FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snoozy]

K

^^Good Points^^
A nice attempt for your first Flash animation. The animation wasn't too bad. You had some good effects like when Sonic was getting hit. Overall the animations were very good.

^^Needs Improving^^
This flash is in desperate need of some audio, especially sound effects. Without any sound at all I'm really more bored by this than anything. I honestly couldn't even hold out to see the ending this was so boring. Add some sound for a much better score. Your animating skills aren't bad.

[When aliens invade...]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the drawings weren't half bad. I liked the opening scene, that was a good show. The music and sound effects weren't too bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main reason I didn't like this was because I had no idea what was going on. Everything was just being shot by something. But what? And then they are bombed by this entity? I'm sorry, but I had no idea what is going on. Also, try to avoid shape tweening, it just looks like crap.

[bloody fight 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I'd say this wasn't a bad movie. The animations were quick and fluid. I liked how this was more than a normal fight by adding some cool supernatural powers and cool fighting techniques. The sound effects were well placed and the blood was placed well too.

^^Needs Improving^^
It moves too fast, especially if one hasn't seen the first episode. You should always do a little section on the previous episode. This was kind of short too. I feel like I was cheated out of an ending.

[A Phoenix Wrong Tribute]

K

^^Good Points^^
Honestly one of the better Phoenix Wrong tribute movies I've seen. The reason of this is because you didn't just simply take clips and put them into the court scene, but you actually took some other backgrounds and different environments and use that. It was much more interesting than most PW movies. My favorite had to be the Ace Ventura scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting a bad movie when I saw the black text in the first scene. Perhaps you should move that back just since I think it is a bad first impression.

Kitsunedai responds:

Ah, thanks for watching and reviewing. I had a feeling that the different scenes was a good thing.

And I'll try to remove text in the future, unless it's absolutely needed.

[Lord of the Bins]

K

^^Good Points^^
This took a while, but it got funny once Orion got into the office. The pizza lamp falling was pretty funny, and that whole conversation was humorous. I liked the voice overs you did too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You do very little animation in this, and when you do they are pretty crude. Work on that part of this. Also, the voice overs in the beginning seem to be very loud to me. You could really decrease the volume, as they almost got me to stop watching this mid-stream.

Toxic-Tears responds:

Thanx 4 ur organized review, milinko959. I expected the flash to be quite boring except for the last part, if u have watched LotR and noticed the 2nd ending. Yup, u can count on me to make a far better flash in future, m8!

[Phoenix Wrong: Objection]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good graphics. These are at least more original than most PW movies, and you used the "Take That" which is more interesting. I liked the graphics. The outline of PW you had was neat. The music was kind of funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think that stuff like this is really unnecessary since I don't think it will really change anything about the current situation. People won't stop. Funny, but a little bit pointless.

[Stickcombat 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
I was actually pretty impressed by this movie. You kept the fighting interesting by adding a lot of special powers like the one guy eating his opponent, and the other splitting into two. Keep it up like this and the series will be good. The bracketing is a neat feature, I really like this idea.

^^Needs Improving^^
This needs some cool sound effects, it seems a little empty how it is now. Also, you may want to try and improve the close up pictures of the characters. This looks really crappy right now.

["Hey Jude"]

K

^^Good Points^^
I've seen many clock movies, but few of them are really serious and heartwarming like this. I like the message you are sending in this movie, it's really quite nice. My favorite scene had to be the one with Raspberry clock. Good storyline that shows the true nature of SBC.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could definitely use something more in the graphics. You should have shaded the buildings or street or just in general the background to give some lighting effects. Also, sound effects wouldn't be a bad idea.

kilogram1 responds:

I'm glad you liked the storyline, and thank you for the CONSTRUCTIVE criticism; it is very much appreciated! I will definately work on my graphics in future movies I make. Thanks for the review!

[Jam Competition]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were decent. I like how you drew the characters in this movie, and the storyline was pretty humorous, and definitely pretty original. Pretty good voice overs as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music is really strange. It sounds to me like the preloader music plays with the movies music, but either way, the music is really odd and quite distracting from watching the movie. That really just turned me off from this movie the most.

[Sueño]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were much better than most movies of this type (clock/lock). You did a great job coloring and drawing in the beginning, and the pencil part was superb. The beginning was pretty funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't know why you didn't make a real storyline out of this. The graphics are amazing, but you can't just have great graphics without storyline.