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[Phoenix Wrong: Objection]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good graphics. These are at least more original than most PW movies, and you used the "Take That" which is more interesting. I liked the graphics. The outline of PW you had was neat. The music was kind of funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think that stuff like this is really unnecessary since I don't think it will really change anything about the current situation. People won't stop. Funny, but a little bit pointless.

[Jam Competition]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were decent. I like how you drew the characters in this movie, and the storyline was pretty humorous, and definitely pretty original. Pretty good voice overs as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music is really strange. It sounds to me like the preloader music plays with the movies music, but either way, the music is really odd and quite distracting from watching the movie. That really just turned me off from this movie the most.

[Sueño]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were much better than most movies of this type (clock/lock). You did a great job coloring and drawing in the beginning, and the pencil part was superb. The beginning was pretty funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't know why you didn't make a real storyline out of this. The graphics are amazing, but you can't just have great graphics without storyline.

[A Cauliflower Story]

K

^^Good Points^^
A parody of BBQ, eh? I actually like it quite better than the actual true BBQ movies, though some of those spinoffs top this. Anyway, the movie was really funny because of the characters. That was like a deer in a box or something? The speakonia sounded pretty funny in this and the farting was absolutely necessary. I wouldn't mind seeing more adventures of this fellow.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess the music may have been a little bit loud compared to the speakonia, but other than that, no specific complaints.

AaroNinja responds:

Actually, it was a donkey with a cardboard box for a head, holding a cheese.

[Jack-in-the-Box]

K

^^Good Points^^
A neat movie with a good moral too...I guess. But more entertaining that not. I liked the sound effects, they were very unique, and of course the storyline was very interesting. I enjoyed watching this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
You may want to consider coloring things in a little bit, things without color to me just look really bland.

["Phuck Wou" Phoenix Wong]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best part was the music/sound effects. You had running in the 90's which is a good song, and some other funny stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, I think you already know, but half of this stuff is just taken from YTMND and has nothing to do with Phoenix Wrong. You had the NSMB clip, which had nothing to do with it, and also the ET clip... You also took some YTMND's without recognition. I can't say that this was funny at all, it doesn't look like you put much thought into this.

TommyGun responds:

MAED IN ONE HOUR.
PA-RO-DY

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much love

[Happiness]

K

^^Good Points^^
A fun little screw emo movie you have here. I like the contrast between the two songs you had in here. The movie started off neatly, it's cool to start a movie at such a close angle. The ending was unexpected too!

^^Needs Improving^^
I hated the music. I know you kind of had to put it in to follow the commercials, but still it is annoying.