FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Phoenix Wrong Tribute]

K

^^Good Points^^
Honestly one of the better Phoenix Wrong tribute movies I've seen. The reason of this is because you didn't just simply take clips and put them into the court scene, but you actually took some other backgrounds and different environments and use that. It was much more interesting than most PW movies. My favorite had to be the Ace Ventura scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting a bad movie when I saw the black text in the first scene. Perhaps you should move that back just since I think it is a bad first impression.

Kitsunedai responds:

Ah, thanks for watching and reviewing. I had a feeling that the different scenes was a good thing.

And I'll try to remove text in the future, unless it's absolutely needed.

[Lord of the Bins]

K

^^Good Points^^
This took a while, but it got funny once Orion got into the office. The pizza lamp falling was pretty funny, and that whole conversation was humorous. I liked the voice overs you did too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You do very little animation in this, and when you do they are pretty crude. Work on that part of this. Also, the voice overs in the beginning seem to be very loud to me. You could really decrease the volume, as they almost got me to stop watching this mid-stream.

Toxic-Tears responds:

Thanx 4 ur organized review, milinko959. I expected the flash to be quite boring except for the last part, if u have watched LotR and noticed the 2nd ending. Yup, u can count on me to make a far better flash in future, m8!

[Phoenix Wrong: Objection]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good graphics. These are at least more original than most PW movies, and you used the "Take That" which is more interesting. I liked the graphics. The outline of PW you had was neat. The music was kind of funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think that stuff like this is really unnecessary since I don't think it will really change anything about the current situation. People won't stop. Funny, but a little bit pointless.

[Jam Competition]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were decent. I like how you drew the characters in this movie, and the storyline was pretty humorous, and definitely pretty original. Pretty good voice overs as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music is really strange. It sounds to me like the preloader music plays with the movies music, but either way, the music is really odd and quite distracting from watching the movie. That really just turned me off from this movie the most.

[Sueño]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were much better than most movies of this type (clock/lock). You did a great job coloring and drawing in the beginning, and the pencil part was superb. The beginning was pretty funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't know why you didn't make a real storyline out of this. The graphics are amazing, but you can't just have great graphics without storyline.

[A Cauliflower Story]

K

^^Good Points^^
A parody of BBQ, eh? I actually like it quite better than the actual true BBQ movies, though some of those spinoffs top this. Anyway, the movie was really funny because of the characters. That was like a deer in a box or something? The speakonia sounded pretty funny in this and the farting was absolutely necessary. I wouldn't mind seeing more adventures of this fellow.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess the music may have been a little bit loud compared to the speakonia, but other than that, no specific complaints.

AaroNinja responds:

Actually, it was a donkey with a cardboard box for a head, holding a cheese.

[Jack-in-the-Box]

K

^^Good Points^^
A neat movie with a good moral too...I guess. But more entertaining that not. I liked the sound effects, they were very unique, and of course the storyline was very interesting. I enjoyed watching this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
You may want to consider coloring things in a little bit, things without color to me just look really bland.