FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sun&Moon Conversation 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
I see this is much better than the first two. The preloader is much more interesting. I liked the flashback scene, it was cooler than just having the two stand on the street and talk. The storyline was funny as well, good jokes with the yellow clothes.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can't really say much that I haven't said for the previous episodes of this series. Just drawn some more stuff on your own (try tracing).

[Sun&Moon Conversation 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was much better than the first episode. You actually had a good conversation in this one and it was pretty humorous. I liked when Pluto came in with his emo hair, and the singing part was rather creative. Overall, much funnier and more entertaining than the first.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, the graphics aren't really that good. You could use some more original drawings, and maybe some more animation.

[Sun&Moon Conversation]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the theme music, it was a pretty humorous ditty you had there, pretty cute. I liked the voices too, they were pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how you trace bitmapped everything, which was kind of crappy looking. This would be a lot better if you had drawn stuff yourself. The conversation was quite lacking in real content and it wasn't really humorous at all.

[the gathering storm]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the sound effects, they were quite humorous, like the farting noise, and also the singing by this strange man.

^^Needs Improving^^
This made very little sense. There was almost no storyline developed that I think the average person could deduce. The drawings were really crude and primitive and you just used a lot of sloppy art. Unlike most of your work, I wasn't much impressed.

[Tribute to BBQ]

K

^^Good Points^^
A great BBQ tribute you have made, I really enjoyed it. You had unique characters, which was a great plus. The sound clip was pretty funny and I liked your demon guy. The sound cut off with the far at the absolute best point, where the suspense would have come. The second fart was necessary.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought the homer Simpson laugh wasn't really in place I think. It never sounds really good when you mix clips from multiple sources.

[Snoozy]

K

^^Good Points^^
A nice attempt for your first Flash animation. The animation wasn't too bad. You had some good effects like when Sonic was getting hit. Overall the animations were very good.

^^Needs Improving^^
This flash is in desperate need of some audio, especially sound effects. Without any sound at all I'm really more bored by this than anything. I honestly couldn't even hold out to see the ending this was so boring. Add some sound for a much better score. Your animating skills aren't bad.

[When aliens invade...]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the drawings weren't half bad. I liked the opening scene, that was a good show. The music and sound effects weren't too bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main reason I didn't like this was because I had no idea what was going on. Everything was just being shot by something. But what? And then they are bombed by this entity? I'm sorry, but I had no idea what is going on. Also, try to avoid shape tweening, it just looks like crap.

[A Phoenix Wrong Tribute]

K

^^Good Points^^
Honestly one of the better Phoenix Wrong tribute movies I've seen. The reason of this is because you didn't just simply take clips and put them into the court scene, but you actually took some other backgrounds and different environments and use that. It was much more interesting than most PW movies. My favorite had to be the Ace Ventura scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting a bad movie when I saw the black text in the first scene. Perhaps you should move that back just since I think it is a bad first impression.

Kitsunedai responds:

Ah, thanks for watching and reviewing. I had a feeling that the different scenes was a good thing.

And I'll try to remove text in the future, unless it's absolutely needed.

[Lord of the Bins]

K

^^Good Points^^
This took a while, but it got funny once Orion got into the office. The pizza lamp falling was pretty funny, and that whole conversation was humorous. I liked the voice overs you did too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You do very little animation in this, and when you do they are pretty crude. Work on that part of this. Also, the voice overs in the beginning seem to be very loud to me. You could really decrease the volume, as they almost got me to stop watching this mid-stream.

Toxic-Tears responds:

Thanx 4 ur organized review, milinko959. I expected the flash to be quite boring except for the last part, if u have watched LotR and noticed the 2nd ending. Yup, u can count on me to make a far better flash in future, m8!