FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dont Touch That!]

K

^^Good Points^^
This song was awesome, I will definitely go pirate it right after writing this review! It was very funny and you followed it well. The bubblegum scene had to be my favorite. A great mix of text and animations too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Drawings were pretty bad. You could have definitely refined this a lot more. The bubblegum scene was fun, but your large bubble was in many pieces. I think you would have at least made it look like one big bubble.

[Megaman X?]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good CKY song you chose in this. I liked the part where Megaman thought the stick figure was Wily then Sigma, that scene was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, I'm pretty sure you well have realized what is wrong with this. You called it "crappy graphics world", which is quite true, and your public apology basically says it all. The graphics were terrible. You should have definitely added some kind of sprite background.

[Megaman Tootsie Pop?]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad idea. You used both a turtle and an owl for characters, which is good. The ending was pretty cool, I like how megaman got so much attitude towards the end, which was a cool scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
This looks pretty bad with everything so far zoomed out. You should have zoomed in to each scene a lot more and definitely added some kind of background, whether drawn or with sprites. Also, some sound effects would be a very critical addition, I think it would add much to this movie, which as it is seems very lacking to me.

[Stick Stick Stick!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Didn't know exactly what this was when I looked at the description, but since as soon as I started watching it I knew what it was, you obviously did a good parody. I now remember the commercials, and you followed it perfectly, even until the end when you supported your team! The voice overs were rather funny, and I liked the attitude of the guy in this movie. Quick and funny, just how I like em.

^^Needs Improving^^
Drawings could be improved a lot with some shading and maybe some thinner outlines.

[Timmy #7 - Timmy Potter]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty funny movie. The graphics were pretty good. You had good shading and drawings, and incorporated traced images very smoothly. The animations were smooth and I liked the voice overs. The script was funny too, very random. Not a bad ending too, pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I can think of is that you should add subtitles or increase the volume of the voices. I had some trouble hearing Timmy's voice, and I had to restart the beginning since I missed a few things.

[Sun&Moon Conversation 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
I see this is much better than the first two. The preloader is much more interesting. I liked the flashback scene, it was cooler than just having the two stand on the street and talk. The storyline was funny as well, good jokes with the yellow clothes.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can't really say much that I haven't said for the previous episodes of this series. Just drawn some more stuff on your own (try tracing).

[Sun&Moon Conversation 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was much better than the first episode. You actually had a good conversation in this one and it was pretty humorous. I liked when Pluto came in with his emo hair, and the singing part was rather creative. Overall, much funnier and more entertaining than the first.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, the graphics aren't really that good. You could use some more original drawings, and maybe some more animation.

[Sun&Moon Conversation]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the theme music, it was a pretty humorous ditty you had there, pretty cute. I liked the voices too, they were pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how you trace bitmapped everything, which was kind of crappy looking. This would be a lot better if you had drawn stuff yourself. The conversation was quite lacking in real content and it wasn't really humorous at all.

[the gathering storm]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the sound effects, they were quite humorous, like the farting noise, and also the singing by this strange man.

^^Needs Improving^^
This made very little sense. There was almost no storyline developed that I think the average person could deduce. The drawings were really crude and primitive and you just used a lot of sloppy art. Unlike most of your work, I wasn't much impressed.

[Tribute to BBQ]

K

^^Good Points^^
A great BBQ tribute you have made, I really enjoyed it. You had unique characters, which was a great plus. The sound clip was pretty funny and I liked your demon guy. The sound cut off with the far at the absolute best point, where the suspense would have come. The second fart was necessary.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought the homer Simpson laugh wasn't really in place I think. It never sounds really good when you mix clips from multiple sources.