FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Megaman Tootsie Pop?]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad idea. You used both a turtle and an owl for characters, which is good. The ending was pretty cool, I like how megaman got so much attitude towards the end, which was a cool scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
This looks pretty bad with everything so far zoomed out. You should have zoomed in to each scene a lot more and definitely added some kind of background, whether drawn or with sprites. Also, some sound effects would be a very critical addition, I think it would add much to this movie, which as it is seems very lacking to me.

[Stick Stick Stick!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Didn't know exactly what this was when I looked at the description, but since as soon as I started watching it I knew what it was, you obviously did a good parody. I now remember the commercials, and you followed it perfectly, even until the end when you supported your team! The voice overs were rather funny, and I liked the attitude of the guy in this movie. Quick and funny, just how I like em.

^^Needs Improving^^
Drawings could be improved a lot with some shading and maybe some thinner outlines.

[Timmy #7 - Timmy Potter]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty funny movie. The graphics were pretty good. You had good shading and drawings, and incorporated traced images very smoothly. The animations were smooth and I liked the voice overs. The script was funny too, very random. Not a bad ending too, pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I can think of is that you should add subtitles or increase the volume of the voices. I had some trouble hearing Timmy's voice, and I had to restart the beginning since I missed a few things.

[Sun&Moon Conversation 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
I see this is much better than the first two. The preloader is much more interesting. I liked the flashback scene, it was cooler than just having the two stand on the street and talk. The storyline was funny as well, good jokes with the yellow clothes.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can't really say much that I haven't said for the previous episodes of this series. Just drawn some more stuff on your own (try tracing).

[Sun&Moon Conversation 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was much better than the first episode. You actually had a good conversation in this one and it was pretty humorous. I liked when Pluto came in with his emo hair, and the singing part was rather creative. Overall, much funnier and more entertaining than the first.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, the graphics aren't really that good. You could use some more original drawings, and maybe some more animation.

[Sun&Moon Conversation]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the theme music, it was a pretty humorous ditty you had there, pretty cute. I liked the voices too, they were pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how you trace bitmapped everything, which was kind of crappy looking. This would be a lot better if you had drawn stuff yourself. The conversation was quite lacking in real content and it wasn't really humorous at all.

[the gathering storm]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the sound effects, they were quite humorous, like the farting noise, and also the singing by this strange man.

^^Needs Improving^^
This made very little sense. There was almost no storyline developed that I think the average person could deduce. The drawings were really crude and primitive and you just used a lot of sloppy art. Unlike most of your work, I wasn't much impressed.

[Tribute to BBQ]

K

^^Good Points^^
A great BBQ tribute you have made, I really enjoyed it. You had unique characters, which was a great plus. The sound clip was pretty funny and I liked your demon guy. The sound cut off with the far at the absolute best point, where the suspense would have come. The second fart was necessary.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought the homer Simpson laugh wasn't really in place I think. It never sounds really good when you mix clips from multiple sources.

[Snoozy]

K

^^Good Points^^
A nice attempt for your first Flash animation. The animation wasn't too bad. You had some good effects like when Sonic was getting hit. Overall the animations were very good.

^^Needs Improving^^
This flash is in desperate need of some audio, especially sound effects. Without any sound at all I'm really more bored by this than anything. I honestly couldn't even hold out to see the ending this was so boring. Add some sound for a much better score. Your animating skills aren't bad.

[When aliens invade...]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the drawings weren't half bad. I liked the opening scene, that was a good show. The music and sound effects weren't too bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main reason I didn't like this was because I had no idea what was going on. Everything was just being shot by something. But what? And then they are bombed by this entity? I'm sorry, but I had no idea what is going on. Also, try to avoid shape tweening, it just looks like crap.