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[Blob Wars]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty average random death match type movie. I liked the colors, they were pretty vibrant. The sound effects were well used and placed and appropriate. The graphics were decent, I liked the part where the grenade exploded in the air and shattered towards the screen, that was a cool effect.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some deaths were pretty lame, like when the guy just got a gun thrown at his head. Also, I can't say the deaths were really that creative. There wasn't anything in this movie that really stood out to me to make this better than anything else in the same genre.

[TwelveOhSix2006]

K

^^Good Points^^
A strange movie. The graphics were pretty good in the pre-movie. You had some good drawings in there, and the animations were pretty smooth. The music throughout this was all good choices.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really find this too entertaining. It was just too random for me, and there wasn't any storyline developed in this. Then I was very disappointed at the actual movie, which was just a single frame.

numbers responds:

There IS a storyline here. Undeveloped? You don't need a 4 minute Flash to tell a simple plot :)

I wonder if you're just saying there's no plot because I didn't type it out like in ATTACK Of The Stereo..hm

thanks for the points, and critic to work on storylines (well that's a given but hgjdhf)

[spengbarb squirepents]

K

^^Good Points^^
That was freaky! And I enjoyed this because of it. It's one of my favorite animated shows, and you really scared me. These pictures were freaking weird looking, but they were all pretty funny to watch. The squidward ones had to be my favorite.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound quality was pretty bad. I liked the song, but it had a lot of interference and sounded pretty bad. Same thing with some of the images, they just look like the quality was compromised for lower file size.

[Shy Shy 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Just watched the first episode, and I must admit that this one is better than the first. You had more of a storyline developed in this episode, and you changed the camera often, and zoomed in more. The graphics were about the same though. Nice music.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sometimes the animations just seem a little bit choppy, and overall not smooth, namely when the guy is jumping and what not.

[Shy Shy]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good stick movie. The animations turned out surprisingly well, even though the first scene wasn't drawn too well. You had lots of creative deaths in here, which were kind of humorous. The sound effects were right on, and the music was cool. That three dimensional scene with the one guy rotating was neat looking too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said, the drawings weren't too great, that's what could have used the most improving. I also don't like how the first scene was so zoomed out. You should have zoomed in a little bit more in my opinion.

[Santa Claus Is Dead]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked how much this was similar to the song. You animated with the lyrics to the song, and followed it very well. Not a bad song, pretty funny lyrics, and there was a ton of violence.

^^Needs Improving^^
The audio was just terrible. I've never heard the song, but if it's supposed to sound like an echo, this was a terrible choice to make a video for. Seriously, I was so distracted by the horrible music I could hardly watch this.

[FDA: Santa Dogg]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty good holiday themed movie, it's definitely not your average movie. The song was pretty unique, I've never heard it before, and it was kind of funny. Decent drawings too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations were kind of crude, most noticeably in the lip syncing, which was not even close to being on the words of the song. There also wasn't much shading in this...obviously a very old movie though.

[Tapion's Tune]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good graphics, no doubt. The effects in those glowing lines was very cool looking, and everything in this was well animated. The music was good too. A very calming tune, and the windy noise was a great addition.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I can't say much about this. It's a single frame with a few movie clips. I'm sure it took some time to make, but it's not much of a movie at all, considering what I just said.

[The Grocery Store]

K

^^Good Points^^
This had some redeeming points to it. The drawings were very good, pretty realistic too. There were some good animations in this as well. I liked the voice overs. They sounded very natural.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie was pretty boring to me. There was no color, which didn't give me a whole lot to look at. This was mostly just a bunch of talking, which got boring really quick. Next time you definitely need to have some more going on in this.