FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shy Shy 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Just watched the first episode, and I must admit that this one is better than the first. You had more of a storyline developed in this episode, and you changed the camera often, and zoomed in more. The graphics were about the same though. Nice music.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sometimes the animations just seem a little bit choppy, and overall not smooth, namely when the guy is jumping and what not.

[Shy Shy]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good stick movie. The animations turned out surprisingly well, even though the first scene wasn't drawn too well. You had lots of creative deaths in here, which were kind of humorous. The sound effects were right on, and the music was cool. That three dimensional scene with the one guy rotating was neat looking too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said, the drawings weren't too great, that's what could have used the most improving. I also don't like how the first scene was so zoomed out. You should have zoomed in a little bit more in my opinion.

[Santa Claus Is Dead]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked how much this was similar to the song. You animated with the lyrics to the song, and followed it very well. Not a bad song, pretty funny lyrics, and there was a ton of violence.

^^Needs Improving^^
The audio was just terrible. I've never heard the song, but if it's supposed to sound like an echo, this was a terrible choice to make a video for. Seriously, I was so distracted by the horrible music I could hardly watch this.

[FDA: Santa Dogg]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty good holiday themed movie, it's definitely not your average movie. The song was pretty unique, I've never heard it before, and it was kind of funny. Decent drawings too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations were kind of crude, most noticeably in the lip syncing, which was not even close to being on the words of the song. There also wasn't much shading in this...obviously a very old movie though.

[Tapion's Tune]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good graphics, no doubt. The effects in those glowing lines was very cool looking, and everything in this was well animated. The music was good too. A very calming tune, and the windy noise was a great addition.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I can't say much about this. It's a single frame with a few movie clips. I'm sure it took some time to make, but it's not much of a movie at all, considering what I just said.

[The Grocery Store]

K

^^Good Points^^
This had some redeeming points to it. The drawings were very good, pretty realistic too. There were some good animations in this as well. I liked the voice overs. They sounded very natural.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie was pretty boring to me. There was no color, which didn't give me a whole lot to look at. This was mostly just a bunch of talking, which got boring really quick. Next time you definitely need to have some more going on in this.

[Vodoo]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked this movie, despite from it's score, which would suggest that it's not that good. The music went perfectly with the sad mood in this. The storyline was pretty neat. I thought it was cute how the green guy gained respect by hurting that weird lion thing. You also attempted some three dimensional animations, and I give credit to that. Nice ending.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should create characters that can show emotion better. I had absolutely no idea, whether the two guys around the fire were happy or not, so it was pretty confusing in the beginning.

[In My Dreams]

K

^^Good Points^^
If this movie doesn't get a daily award tomorrow, it will be a great atrocity. This movie was nothing short of excellent. First off, the graphics were amazing. You had realistic blurring effects and great drawings, that were very realistic. The coloring helped to set the mood, which was so abstract, I absolutely loved it. Neat sound effects, and a great storyline.

^^Needs Improving^^
There wasn't a play button, which caused me to miss the beginning the first time I watched it.

[(WoW) Chubsie's day out!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Random as hell, but still a funny movie that I liked. It wasn't random to the point where it was stupid, though you walked the line. I liked speakonia in this, which was a cool thing to have in this, and the fact that Hitler was there was awesome. Great ending thirty seconds as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I liked this, yet there are obvious reasons why people won't. The graphics aren't that good. You used a bad background, and there wasn't much in animations here. Also, people will find this stupid for being so random.