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[Cour&hisGang#1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another good movie. This one with Clocks, but still just as good as anything you've made. The graphics are good, of course. You had good camera stuff and I liked how you did stuff with the clock faces, and how the viewer could still see that from behind. I liked the music in this, very cool for background music. The best scene was definitely from the sitcom style. This is definitely a series you should have continued.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some of the sound effects seemed a little weird, I didn't really like them.

Courgy responds:

Thanks, yes it is indeed the idea this series goes on so you will see more of this.

[LL-LockDay Trailer]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music in this movie. A cool tune from The Matrix, and it is a good song for preview movies such as this. The graphics were pretty good. You had some common clocks in here, all drawn and shaded well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't know I really like the idea of a preview movie for Lock Day. Regardless of that, you didn't really give a whole lot of information on the movie, but then again, I guess most previews don't. But you should have made the text go a little faster.

Courgy responds:

Yeah this was a failed project down at LL to make lockday trailers.

Anyway, thanks for the comments.

[LL-teh Circus]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely one of the better movies I've seen from you thus far. The graphics were very typical of you, which is a great thing, I'd say. As always, excellent shading, good subtle animations like in their faces, and detailed drawings. The storyline really made this interesting of course, though. There was a lot of humor in this. The acts were hilarious, my favorite was Golden's flipping. Trash's unpreparedness was rather funny too. I liked this movie, another good one from you.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing specific that I can think of that I haven't said about some of your other movies as well.

Courgy responds:

Hehe thanks, luckely I feel like I have the lacks I had in this movie fixed in my later movies.

[LL-Stranded]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another good LL movie from you. This one had your style of graphics, so of course they were pretty well done. Thorough shading, smooth animations, and good background drawings. The speakonia was all clear, and the script itself had lots of random humor added in, which started at the beginning and didn't falter at all throughout the movie. I really wasn't expecting that ending either, so nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Once again, in future movies, you need some more camera movement, which is easily done with V-cam. You could zoom in on characters, pan, and what not, and it would make your movies a lot cooler.

Courgy responds:

Hehe thanks, this movie was my pride and joy before I got my AS-Cam fla so I wasn't skill-wise ready to do all the fancy cameramovements and all.
But thanks for the cool comments.

[LL short- Break Down]

K

^^Good Points^^
For a quick job on this movie, not too bad at all. The drawings were half decent. Your characters looked pretty nice, and you had good shading and coloring throughout this movie. The storyline wasn't to bad. I thought the ending was pretty clever as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
There isn't a whole lot of animation in here. The only thing you really animated consistently was the speech indicator. That made the movie a little boring, since nothing much was happening the whole time.

Courgy responds:

Thanks dude.
I realize it´s a bit dull but I was a lot less animator back then.

[The Clocktopian Massacre]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is definitely a movie to go on my favorite movie list, so congrats on that. This movie was amazing in basically every way possible. There was a ton of random shit going on the whole time, like the first opening sentence, which really set a funny mood throughout the movie. The mood never failed as this movie just got better and better as time went on. I loved the "Overused song" part, it was completely necessary to have a Benny Hill scene in this movie. Also, the pokemon battle scene was very well done, and really quite funny. This movie was awesome, it definitely deserved a daily award of some sort :(.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie was gold, man.

Courgy responds:

If I say "I totaly agree"I would seem arogant.

But, I totaly agree.

thanks dood

[LL-Pranks]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty entertaining Lock Legion movie. You've definitely got some graphical talent in this movie. There was shading in every character, and you animated the lock faces all of the time and changed their shapes, which was cool. The jokes and storyline in this were rather humorous as well. "you gook" made me laugh first, and then the prank that commie played was funny, and Water's reaction to that was kind of funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
You focused a lot on the characters, and you didn't do much with the background or anything else. The movie looks a little barren to me. You could add some more to the backgrounds and also some camera movement would make this more interesting.

Courgy responds:

Again, this movie was made just 1 day after Stranded so I didn't own a Cam-fla. And yes I did made sloppy backgrounds for this.

Thanks for the comments, you are luckely one of the fellas that actualy put's thought in reviews.

[Bill Murry The General!]

K

^^Good Points^^
When this first started playing I was pleasantly surprised to hear that song "General" by Dispatch. Has to be one of my favorite songs in my life. You actually started out making a pretty good movie out of this. The Bill Murray general looked pretty funny, and the animations were true to the storyline.

^^Needs Improving^^
However, I was then quite disappointed when I saw that the end was a so early, though I was expecting no less. I guess that next scene was kind of humorous, mainly because of the alien Bill Murray you drew.

Sensu-clock responds:

Thanks. Im finishing the rest of it now, this was just so it would be in time for Murry week. The General is one of my favorite songs also.

[Random Encounter]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like the graphics in this movie. The drawings were good; pretty detailed and well-shaped. Also, the spell drawings and the effect drawings were good as well. I liked how you had the camera follow the ice balls and whatever, and moving from character to character was a good idea. The ending was funny as well with the guy doing the happy dance with that bug still on his face.

^^Needs Improving^^
First thing I noticed was the lack of sounds. You had a music loop in there, which I didn't really like, seeing how it was looped very poorly. Other than that there were no sound effects, and for a RPG style battle scene, you definitely could have added some sound effects. This felt like one of those random encounters that just makes you turn off the PS2 and say screw it.

[My First Snowman]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were half decent. Not bad drawings for people, they are rather hard to draw. Some good detail in the drawings too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really a boring movie. The storyline was rather lame and uninspired, it seems. The animations were rather crude. Shape tweens look really bad in most situations, especially when they are on a large object like the snowman. Ending was kind of lame. An unclear message, and overall just a very uncreative storyline.