FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Are You a True Fan: RE2]

(title in work)

The main thing that needs to be improved is the graphics. The buttons look pretty bad against the background. Needs something more subtle for the buttons. Also, I really don't like how you have to go back to start every time you miss a question, especially with that slow introduction.

altare responds:

It's been a few years and I took a class on graphic design since I uploaded this. I haven't been working on flash too much, but I might give this another shot.

[SBC Portal Offender]

(title in work)

A nice little game here. It's got a simple concept with a good CC theme added in. I was quite entertained by the fact that the hour hand worked properly with the minute hand. The game was quite challenging too. Only thing you could have done better on was the graphics.

VicBiss responds:

Well, I made the game in about 4 hours to be in time for clock day so I couldn't make stellar graphics, but thanks alot anyways!

[Super City]

(title in work)

As far as flash based SimCity type games go, this was pretty well done. It was fairly well programmed and had nice music as well. The game was a bit easy though. It lacks a lot of the interactivity that you have in more complex games of this nature. A bit too linear for me as well. There aren't enough options on what to do.

Girdf responds:

try the 3rd super city...

[Guess The Price!]

(title in work)

Not very much replay value on this one. It's the same 15 items each time, just in a different order, so playing it more than once really doesn't make a whole lot of sense. Graphically it was nice, and having different currencies in here was a good idea. Unfortunately, prices change over time...

Snubby responds:

There are more than 15 items, probably 30 or 50 I don't remember. So you are wrong :(

[Straw Bouncy Clock]

(title in work)

This was a good idea for a Clock Day game. I think it definitely needs some tweaking though. The main thing I don't like about this game is the low FPS. Because of the low fps, it's almost impossible to track Strawberry as he falls down at a quick rate. It's kind of frustrating that this problem occurs. Happy Clock Day!

TheCastleClock responds:

YEAH WHATEVER MAN

[Dark Road]

(title in work)

This wasn't that great. First off, it's kind of strange how the instructions say not to touch the black road, but it seems like I have to stay on it to win... anyway, it's a basic maze game. I didn't really like how you only had to keep his feet in bounds, it was kind of awkward at first getting used to that. Also, collecting items seems to be rather difficult. You have to hit them just right. Needs a bit of tweaking.

CoolJony responds:

Thanks for the review, but I think you couldn't read properly the instructions.

[Sudoku II]

(title in work)

Ugh...9.8 MB just to play sudoku games. A bit much I think. That's one major drawback of this game. Doesn't need that much music stuffed into it. The game seems to work fairly well, but gee, really had to wait pretty long for it.

Deso responds:

I don't want to compress the audio too much 'cause of the quality. Maybe you should get a faster connection. For me it takes about 4 seconds to load.

[Piggy123s flash tutorial]

(title in work)

Sorry, but this is just unacceptable. I'm sure you've heard it all before, but the simple truth is, this tutorial hardly works. Some buttons are broken, others don't lead where they should. You should have at least tried this before submitting it. I guess some of the script is usable, but that's really only if you want to listen to some annoying, hardly audible voice telling you how to do things.

The best thing you can do is learn flash a bit more before trying to teach others. Because seeing the way this is laid out I wouldn't trust your advice on Flash.

piggy123 responds:

i made it like when i first got flash

[A Christmas Story SB]

(title in work)

A good soundboard, other than the filesize. You had a pretty good mix of quotes in here, and some memorable ones as well. Graphically this was nicely layed out. I would have liked to see some more quotes from Ralphie, considering he was the main character and you only had three quotes from him. Also, the "Out Here" button for the old man doesn't appear to be working.

Review Request Club.

Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the review!

~ Z

[Stop the mountain]

(title in work)

For a 2.1 KB game, it definitely wasn't bad. A simple concept and simple game play. Unfortunately you can only play against yourself since there are no high scores or anything of that nature. It would have been nice to add color to ones that are furthest from their starting point so you had some sort of priority. Otherwise it's just kind of mindless.

BlackStar23 responds:

The color idea is interesting.
However, the danger doesn't depend on the relative position to its starting point, but on the total vertical position on the screen.

There is no color because my work should show the possible minimalism in creating games. the "mountain" is drawn by moveTo, lineTo and beginFill commands.
Finally, you should admire the simplicity and then go on.
No need to replay the game several times.
I only played some games to find bugs.

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