FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Machine #1 -Breakfast-]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty cool movie, but then again, pretty much any Rube Goldberg type contraption is pretty cool. It was pretty neat how everything worked, and what made this unique was the fact that everything happened so fast! The sound effects were well placed, and the drawings were very cool. I really liked how you had the slow motion and What's Happening buttons on this too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could improve the What's Happening part of this. You could add some text explaining what is going on, and maybe slow down the animations in that too. Still too me a while to figure out even with that integrated.

MarcyVF responds:

Thanx 4 reviewing! Thx 4 the point! Maybe I will improve! :)

[Halloween Reprisal]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a great game, no doubt. The graphics are definitely the best part in this. The scenes were all unique and were drawn very realistically. Great shading and animations too. The violence was top notch, it was surprisingly fun to kill a bunch of little ghosts. I liked the storyline in this, it was pretty fun to play.

^^Needs Improving^^
This get's old after a while. I found that even after 25 kills, the little dudes still didn't fight back, which was when I stopped playing. You should have added some more fun to this.

Review Request Club.

Rammer responds:

i'm sick of telling people about the lack of challenge. look through the past few reviews next time you critique someone's work; they may have been told this before and/or cleared it up, already.

you're one of the few that liked the storyline. people thought it was a serious attempt at a story, and it's really just one of those "heh" kind of things.

thanks for the review mr. review request club member person-face.

[Pumpkin-dressup!]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was great. It is a spooky sounding song perfect for the Halloween season. I liked the interface in this as well. The selection menu was easy to use and better than dragging pieces on and off. The drawings were well done too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should make the items on the right side smaller than those that appear on the pumpkin. This way it would be easier to add items to this like other people have suggested to you, which really would be nice.

ELFERRETO responds:

thanks for the review! seems like you had some good pointers in it!

[So you think you know NG?]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked how you had the "lives" instead of sudden death like most quizzes are. The graphical layout was pretty good. You had some good colors and good effects. For the most part, the questions were well rounded. You had NG history, user history, and submission history.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really think you need to change the music. Anything by paragon is just overused. Besides that, I'm not fond of the "who was the king of the portal in October" question, as with time, that question will become somewhat of a guest even for very dedicated users. That kind of question needs to be kept out of quiz games.

Best of luck.

ELFERRETO responds:

milinko959`s Review
Reviewed by ELFERRETO

^^^Good points^^^
I liked how you pointed out what styles i did good and what you liked in this quiz, it does give me lots of help, knowing what the users want these days.

^^Needs Improving^^
yes, i will change the music because everyone is telling me that the music loops badly and is not the type of quiz music, i might use one from my other game, bob!, thankyou for the great review, keep em comin!

[Spave Invaders!!!]

K

^^Good Points^^
You spiced this up with the graphics, which I think was the best part about this. The different backgrounds were cool, and the different aliens were nice for a change.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, the game is incredibly easy. Seeing how you can fire extremely rapidly without consequence, it is easy to knock out the entire screen in a matter of ten seconds. There are only two levels to the game, which needs to be changed. Atleast have the same levels played over and over once you finish. The shots from aliens are fired randomly on the screen and not from the aliens themselves, which is really how the game works. This needs lots of work!

Awesom-o-123 responds:

erm... no?

[Virtual PSP]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a very interesting submission. The graphics really made this game. They were expertly done and were very technical, especially in animations. Everything you drew was life like and well detailed. This game had a ton of interactivity in it, more than I even have time to experience it all. This has a lot to do and could be very fun to play around with.

^^Needs Improving^^
The "Skip Intro" button kept taking me to your website. Other than that I would just like to say that the main menu was very intimidating to me :(

Review Request Club.

Depredation responds:

Thanks, nice to see someone saw my post. Thanks for the nice review,i'llt ry and improve on your points. Thanks.

[halloween clock game]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphics were the best part about this game. The graphics were pretty well done. Good shading and good animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is really hard. I had no idea what to do coming in to the game since there weren't any instructions. The game itself is pretty shaky, I didn't really enjoy playing the game at all. Try to slow things down a bit, and maybe some type of score keeper or something.

HoboPorn responds:

Yeah but this was my first game, I doubt i'll do another but I might, with better things like a highscore and whatnot if I can figure out how.

[Dress up Dagger]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphics are half decent in this. Good drawings and background images too.

^^Needs Improving^^
An obvious screamer from the start, not very entertaining, not very funny either. Not even a good screamer! I didn't like this one at all.

Sir-CannabisClock responds:

hmmph! verywell sire, I could not make the scream louder without making it grainy. so I made the music quiet to hopefully get you to turn up your volume.

read the reviews mister! I DID scare quite a few individuals :D

[Ultimate Simpsons SB]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another great soundboard from you, Frenzy. You had pages for some obscure characters that can't really have a soundboard of their own and squeezed them into one. I think you had lots of funny quotes in this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't like how you have to page through, instead of having some type of menu to pick a character. Also, you could have changed the background image to suit each page a little more. Some more characters would be nice too. There are lots of less popular characters you could have added into this.

Frenzy responds:

Thanks, and yeah.


.frenZy.

[Ultimate Bart Simpson SB]

K

^^Good Points^^
I think the best SB we've seen from you recently, probably your best so far. The graphics were surprisingly good. I like how you had a text similar to that used in the Simpsons, it was neat looking, also the huge picture of Bart looks really nice. The sounds were good, humorous choices and thankfully were mostly from old episodes.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could have some more sounds, you should have covered the whole screen, also maybe some prank call clips would be good.

Frenzy responds:

Ok, thanks for the great review, milinko!

I agree.


Thanks for the review, again!

.frenZy.