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Sorry, but this is just unacceptable. I'm sure you've heard it all before, but the simple truth is, this tutorial hardly works. Some buttons are broken, others don't lead where they should. You should have at least tried this before submitting it. I guess some of the script is usable, but that's really only if you want to listen to some annoying, hardly audible voice telling you how to do things.
The best thing you can do is learn flash a bit more before trying to teach others. Because seeing the way this is laid out I wouldn't trust your advice on Flash.