FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yeti Dressup v1.1]

(title in work)

This was a pretty good dress up game for your first. Graphically it was carefully done. You made sure everything was layered properly and fit properly. Nice shading as well. It seems like you perhaps put the wrong dimensions in when you submitted this though. Or at least that is what it looks like to me, considering how this stuff looked severely pushed to the edges.

[Rain/Effects Tutorial]

(title in work)

A bit lacking. I came to this tutorial to learn rain effects, but this didn't explain very well. The thing that really ate me up was when you said "Add a blur and some other effects". How am I supposed to know what effects should be put on the rain drop. That is why I came to this tutorial. You need more detail. Don't assume the viewer knows everything.

[Anime 101]

(title in work)

Well, you seem to explain things relatively well, but then you also don't seem to be much of a master of art, so one has to take this tutorial with a grain of salt. Your drawings weren't that impressive, and you completely avoided complex animation that includes the limbs. A tutorial on animating that would have been more useful. Also, it would be nice to go back to the menu after you finish a section rather than going straight on to the next one.

[Ragdolly]

(title in work)

It was very elementary and basic. I certainly provided what was promised, a ragdoll that you could drag across the screen. But for this type of game you really need to add a bit more to make it more interesting. It would have been fun if there were objects that could be used on the screen to run him into other than the walls. It gave me some pleasure to play around with this, but having only four walls, this got old pretty fast.

[Joyride (working)]

(title in work)

This game needs a lot of work. The graphics could use a lot of polishing. The town graphics weren't bad, but animations such as the bar fight was pretty bad. Also, speaking of the bar fight, the enemies health never went down and he also never attacked me. So I was kind of stuck in battle limbo forever, and that's when I gave up. Please make sure your game works before you submit it.

[Comic Relief]

(title in work)

I enjoyed this game quite thoroughly. It was a simple concept and started off easy enough, but it got tough pretty soon, and I was quite entertained by having to watch all of the red noses and time everything perfectly. It's one of those games where you can just play for a short amount of time and get everything out of it. Very fun, a good amount of challenge, and nice presentation.

[ultimate high speed racin]

(title in work)

The title of ultimate ill befits this game! The game play was very boring and a bit bugged. You can't hold down control and move up and down at the same time. You have to avoid the engines long after you shoot them. The graphics were lame and simple. Overall just a boring game!

[Amateur Surgeon]

(title in work)

A great game no doubt. I played a medieval version previously, which I remember being more interesting though. this seemed very tedious and slow. While it is surgery, I realize that, I think it could have been a bit more exciting, with less repetition. The graphics were excellent to go along with this though, that was very necessary for a game such as this.

[Swordless Ninja]

(title in work)

This game was very good. I am quite surprised that it did not win a daily award or at least get put into a collection. It is quite similar to the Super Mario style with a map and choosing where to go on that map by beating levels. The game play was also similar, but obviously with a different theme. The game is quite enjoyable and easy to get the hang of. The only thing I didn't like was how you immediately stopped moving in a direction when you stopped holding that button. It messed me up a few times, seeing how I am one who believes in physics!

[Christmas Dash]

(title in work)

This was a decent game. It was best in the graphics, which were very nice overall, and the music helped to set the winter scene quite well. The game play was nothing special. It was a bit annoying when the level ended, you pretty much would automatically start the next one since you are just in a mad frenzy of clicking. Some button smaller than the entire screen would have been nice to start a new level.