FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Slippery Fish]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good concept and idea, but this needs some work. I liked the sound however, it was definitely the best part. The song was looped well and a neat song, and I liked how you used different sound effects when you clicked a fish and click open space. Good idea there.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is too easy. I played it for about a minute without missing any fish, and this was no great feat. You should add more fish at one time and have the energy go down faster, perhaps. Also, like the last reviewer said, you could add sharks or something that would take away energy. Overall, this just needs to be harder.

[Spider Man. City Raid]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a neat idea. I like how you have this as a spiderman game, it fits well. The game is mildly fun too. The highscore feature is a nice integration too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I played a game similar to this, and it was much better. I think one reason it was better was that you couldn't go on top of the things you were jumping on or run in to them. Half the time when I try to get a swing going in this game, I just run into something and have relatively no recourse. The game just doesn't really function that well for me.

[The Riddler]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess if I really wanted to sit down and figure out some kind of logic game this is where I would go. The game seemed to function fairly well, though I don't know what was going on half of the time.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, you need a better description of how to play. You show up on a screen that tells me to input a password without any previous prompt, and I was just stymied as what to do. By pure chance i found out how to play. Arranging all the pieces just seems more annoying than challenging, so get rid of it.

[Zombie Soundboard]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is good for Halloween day. There were a ton of sounds, and I really like how you set this up and organized the sounds. You had a ton of sources which was cool. The background wasn't bad. I must say though, I got the most entertainment from the stop button. That sound was hilarious.

^^Needs Improving^^
Doesn't really serve much entertainment. Can't be used for a prank call, and it also isn't really funny, which is also something soundboards should provide.

[8-bit Zombies]

K

^^Good Points^^
Neat to see an 8-bit game on here. It is something not seen too often. The game itself had great graphics. The scenery was well made, and the zombies were well animated. Sound effects were good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
For a while, the music was just a horrific array of beeps and buzzes, which was extremely annoying. I don't see what you do in this game besides blow up a few cars and zombies. You stay in the same area and don't really make any progress with the game, which is what really turned me off.

[Pumpkin Hunter]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a good Halloween themed game. The graphics were decent, The scenes were drawn fairly well, and they all varied, which is important. The game is quite challenging due to time restraints and what not. Sound effects were right on.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like the music. I just don't feel it helps the Halloween mood in this. The graphics could be cleaned up a bit, especially in the text and what not. Try to make some stuff smaller.

[Slappa A Hoe]

K

^^Good Points^^
This game is decent for what it is. The sound clips were pretty funny and there were a lot of them, so I got only a few repeats.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is a pretty tired idea, I've seen it used many times in various different applications. While this is one of the better ones, it still isn't very fun for more than a few minutes. I was sad that I couldn't slap at a really high rate. You should integrate some continuity in the game besides just a single slap being basically the end.

[Army Combat]

K

^^Good Points^^
The three dimensional graphics are great. You animated the scenes extremely well, very life-like. The drawing of the gun was good as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is just very incomplete and is missing a lot. First off, for some reason this is not quick to respond to switching between firing types. It takes entirely too much time to reload and even to shoot, which makes the game incredibly slow moving and really turned me off from this. This needs new sound effects and some coloring.

[Halloween Reprisal]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a great game, no doubt. The graphics are definitely the best part in this. The scenes were all unique and were drawn very realistically. Great shading and animations too. The violence was top notch, it was surprisingly fun to kill a bunch of little ghosts. I liked the storyline in this, it was pretty fun to play.

^^Needs Improving^^
This get's old after a while. I found that even after 25 kills, the little dudes still didn't fight back, which was when I stopped playing. You should have added some more fun to this.

Review Request Club.

Rammer responds:

i'm sick of telling people about the lack of challenge. look through the past few reviews next time you critique someone's work; they may have been told this before and/or cleared it up, already.

you're one of the few that liked the storyline. people thought it was a serious attempt at a story, and it's really just one of those "heh" kind of things.

thanks for the review mr. review request club member person-face.

[Pumpkin-dressup!]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was great. It is a spooky sounding song perfect for the Halloween season. I liked the interface in this as well. The selection menu was easy to use and better than dragging pieces on and off. The drawings were well done too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should make the items on the right side smaller than those that appear on the pumpkin. This way it would be easier to add items to this like other people have suggested to you, which really would be nice.

ELFERRETO responds:

thanks for the review! seems like you had some good pointers in it!