FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Walk my lines]

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^^Good Points^^
Haha, yes it was very funny how you started to draw stuff with your maps. A penis, a face, and perhaps a joint at the end. Funny stuff. I though most of the maps looked like penis though. Anyway, the game was well made. It worked without many bugs and the anti cheating thing was good.

^^Needs Improving^^
After the joint-shaped level, the end button doesn't work. Also, you should add some kind of system to show what level the player is on and how many they have to go or something. Also, some music or sound effects would be great.

[Beer Fight]

K

^^Good Points^^
Somehow I've managed to view every single version of this that you have produced, and I must say that this has come a far way from your first version of it, congrats on finally having this pass. I thought the music was really cool, good bar music! The concept is also very funny. The game isn't that bad. Takes a lot of strategy!

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is still a little bit buggy. It's clear that sometimes I can get a hit to count when I'm not even touching the guy. I don't really like how the enemies are so powerful either.

[Bloody Sunday The Revenge]

K

^^Good Points^^
Really nothing notable in this section of the review.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a terrible game. All the player does is hit a few buttons and click a few times in order to win this game. There is no resistance from any of the enemies which makes the game incredibly easy and really boring.

[The invasion of Zorg]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this had to the be sound. The music was a cool song, for some reason it just reminded me of the aliens landing in the movie "Mars Attacks!". The sound effects were also pretty unique. The drawings weren't too bad, and the explosions looked good.

^^Needs Improving^^
With some improvement, this could be a much better game. You first need to make the penis shaped space ship move a little faster. Some times it is physically impossible to hit some of the targets. You could also make this game more interesting by more levels that are reached faster and increased difficulty.

[Weezer Jam Session]

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^^Good Points^^
Hah, not often that there is a GOOD rhythm action game on NG. This looks a lot like Donkey Konga, but the songs were actually decent songs! Good choice of music and the beats were easy to follow and the game was easy to learn. Loved the animations and layout. Very functional game and very fun to play.

^^Needs Improving^^
I have played many rhythm based games (ITG, DDR, IIDX, SMO, etc.) and I have to say that I honestly think the music was a little late synced. Something you could definitely change if you made a new version.

[Az Challenges 0.1]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, if the next one will be much better than this, I'm sure it will be pretty good. The game has a great interface. The different attacks and the energy system works well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't really good. There was no background that you drew, and the enemy was just some ugly looking stick figure. You should really improve the graphics. Also, perhaps some type of short intro movie to this to set a storyline. The battles themselves are kind of boring.

ottermaniac responds:

Yeah like I mentioned this was just a test :P

You can expect everything you mentioned in the next one. Thanks :D

[DABontv Platformer]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad game. The idea is original and the game was functional. I found no really annoying bugs. The sound was the best part. Both the music and the sound effects were well placed and unique.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could try to improve the graphics in this. The character is a circle, which is never a good thing in games. Also, overall the graphics were too simplistic. Also try to make the guy move faster. As it is, he just moves way too slow and it is really annoying.

[Hungry Green 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
The game functions well. I feel that the game was fairly varying from level to level, and the different items and enemies was cool too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game moves pretty slow. I would like it better if the green dude would jump and fall a bit faster. Also, you need some kind of instruction in this game. I had no idea what was bad or good, or what I could and couldn't land on.

[De-Monstration]

K

^^Good Points^^
Had I knew how to play the game, it seems like it might actually be kind of fun to play!

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, I really had no idea what the heck was going on when I was playing this game. You really need to explain what is going on in this game as when I played the monsters just moved around in the blocks seemingly randomly. Improve the instructions page and this will be better.

LoopyWolf responds:

Ok, I'll see what I can do, Milinko. It's quite simple once you understand, perhaps the instructions aren't fully clear.

[Machine #1 -Breakfast-]

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^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty cool movie, but then again, pretty much any Rube Goldberg type contraption is pretty cool. It was pretty neat how everything worked, and what made this unique was the fact that everything happened so fast! The sound effects were well placed, and the drawings were very cool. I really liked how you had the slow motion and What's Happening buttons on this too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could improve the What's Happening part of this. You could add some text explaining what is going on, and maybe slow down the animations in that too. Still too me a while to figure out even with that integrated.

MarcyVF responds:

Thanx 4 reviewing! Thx 4 the point! Maybe I will improve! :)