FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spider Fighting]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is quite a well rounded game. It's definitely unique, and a concept that I've never played before in my time on NG. You did a good job making this; there were few bugs in it (no pun). Good sound effects and great graphics as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would say that this needs some kind of difficulty control. The game as it is seems nearly impossible for me. Would be more fun if you made an easier mode as well.

[So you think you know NG?]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked how you had the "lives" instead of sudden death like most quizzes are. The graphical layout was pretty good. You had some good colors and good effects. For the most part, the questions were well rounded. You had NG history, user history, and submission history.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really think you need to change the music. Anything by paragon is just overused. Besides that, I'm not fond of the "who was the king of the portal in October" question, as with time, that question will become somewhat of a guest even for very dedicated users. That kind of question needs to be kept out of quiz games.

Best of luck.

ELFERRETO responds:

milinko959`s Review
Reviewed by ELFERRETO

^^^Good points^^^
I liked how you pointed out what styles i did good and what you liked in this quiz, it does give me lots of help, knowing what the users want these days.

^^Needs Improving^^
yes, i will change the music because everyone is telling me that the music loops badly and is not the type of quiz music, i might use one from my other game, bob!, thankyou for the great review, keep em comin!

[A NSMB Scene Creator]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good scene creator. The music was a nice pick, and it wasn't some incredibly overused song. I liked how you added sound effects to the pieces when one clicked on them. Also, it was a nice feature to have some of the animated sprites. This is also unique because of the fact that it uses more recent sprites, and not lower resolution sprites.

^^Needs Improving^^
There isn't much in the line for making a really elaborate scene. A lot of the items don't regenerate themselves when you pick them up, and there aren't a whole lot of items to start with. Definitely add some more.

[Spave Invaders!!!]

K

^^Good Points^^
You spiced this up with the graphics, which I think was the best part about this. The different backgrounds were cool, and the different aliens were nice for a change.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, the game is incredibly easy. Seeing how you can fire extremely rapidly without consequence, it is easy to knock out the entire screen in a matter of ten seconds. There are only two levels to the game, which needs to be changed. Atleast have the same levels played over and over once you finish. The shots from aliens are fired randomly on the screen and not from the aliens themselves, which is really how the game works. This needs lots of work!

Awesom-o-123 responds:

erm... no?

[Gravity Vortex]

K

^^Good Points^^
Overall a fun game. The game worked well, I could find no bugs with it. You made this a good game by having the charging meter to add difficulty to this. The game kept me occupied for a few minutes, and the music was fun to listen to.

^^Needs Improving^^
The logo in the beginning is really ugly. I know you are trying to promote your website, but you should really try to make a new logo. Other than that, you can just add some difficulty levels.

[Dress Bin Laden]

K

^^Good Points^^
Serves its purpose by clearly expressing your opinions about Bin Laden. The gay turban was kind of funny, and I liked the things you wrote on his shirt too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't serve much entertainment in terms of dress up games. You could have added a bunch of new items that would have made him look silly and this would have been a whole lot funnier.

[classic - mooner lander]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, I guess the graphics were the best part about this game; even that could use improvement though.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game is extremely hard to play. You don't give in depth instructions, which I think are really needed in this game. First off, I couldn't even figure out where to land the craft, seems everywhere I tried, I would just die. I tried the yellow things and the obvious landing spots, none of the worked though. The physics aren't that good either. Your thrusters do too little against the high gravity.

[Virtual PSP]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a very interesting submission. The graphics really made this game. They were expertly done and were very technical, especially in animations. Everything you drew was life like and well detailed. This game had a ton of interactivity in it, more than I even have time to experience it all. This has a lot to do and could be very fun to play around with.

^^Needs Improving^^
The "Skip Intro" button kept taking me to your website. Other than that I would just like to say that the main menu was very intimidating to me :(

Review Request Club.

Depredation responds:

Thanks, nice to see someone saw my post. Thanks for the nice review,i'llt ry and improve on your points. Thanks.

[halloween clock game]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphics were the best part about this game. The graphics were pretty well done. Good shading and good animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is really hard. I had no idea what to do coming in to the game since there weren't any instructions. The game itself is pretty shaky, I didn't really enjoy playing the game at all. Try to slow things down a bit, and maybe some type of score keeper or something.

HoboPorn responds:

Yeah but this was my first game, I doubt i'll do another but I might, with better things like a highscore and whatnot if I can figure out how.

[Cursor Catalogue]

K

^^Good Points^^
These cursor things always get to me. They are really fun to play around with, and this one has a great interface, by showing a number for which effect you are on, and also some great effects that are fun to watch unfold!

^^Needs Improving^^
Really could use some funky music. I think that it would really help out the mood.