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[Global Defense]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good game. A little disappointing for daily third, but no doubt a well-made game. The game functioned nearly flawlessly and was pretty challenging. It got really hard when you added dual colored missiles, which was a neat thing to have. The music was pretty cool, and the graphics were well done too. I can tell that you thought this game out well too, since only a certain amount of missiles are allowed to be shot.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics look kind of pixilated, could have been quite a bit better.

MaxManning responds:

Thanks for your feedback.

I have an actual artist working on the next version, so the graphics should be far better than I could ever do.

[MJ Dance Machine]

K

^^Good Points^^
Funny little game you've got here. I liked the music, of course it goes well with this, and it's fun to listen too. There are a lot of different moves to use, which is pretty cool also. This was overall a pretty fun game.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could have done some more for the graphics. You could have changed the light color at times, and the floor definitely needs a remake. The gradients are a good idea, but you need different colors. You should also have the moves loop or something. I think that would be pretty cool.

[How to Make a Bad Flash]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought the funniest part about this movie was the fact that you had the pokemon theme song as one of the song choices.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok then, the sound compression tutorial is located at the bottom of the submit page! You need to do it. This sure does serve its purpose though. I don't really like how you presented this, it really wasn't that interesting and there wasn't much information in here.

Frenzy responds:

I wanna be the very best
Like noone ever was
To catch them is my real test
To train them is my cause
I will travel across the land
Searching far and wide
Each Pokemon to understand
The power that's inside

Chorus
Pokemon!
It's you and me
I know it's my destiny
Pokemon!
Ooh, you're my best friend
In a world we must defend
Pokemon!
Our hearts so true
Our courage will pull us through
You teach me and I'll teach you
Pokemon
Gotta catch 'em all!

Every challenge along the way
With courage I will face
I will battle every day
To claim my rightful place
Come with me, the time is right
There's no better team
Arm in arm we'll win the fight
It's always been our dream

Chorus

Chorus

["Newgrounds Tutorial"]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess the sound wasn't too bad, but FOR GOD'S SAKE COMPRESS THE AUDIO FOR ONCE!

^^Needs Improving^^
I wasn't really impressed by this. Since the new levels will be out very soon, this will be mostly out-dated in a short amount of time. Besides that, the info really isn't anything secret. It's already in many tutorials, and it is even on the NG website in more detail. This was also very slow to start, which I didn't quite like.

Frenzy responds:

Lol, I don't know how to compress the audio!!

Thanks for the review though.

.frenZy.

[Ultimate Homer Simpson SB]

K

^^Good Points^^
One of the best characters to make a SB on, I would say. You definitely added a lot of cool sound clips to this, they made me laugh. Everything seemed to work, and you had a bunch of clips.

^^Needs Improving^^
First thing I noticed was that you had a picture of Dr. Nick...on a Homer soundboard. Doesn't make much sense to me. Anyway, the sound effects were very varying in volume, which was annoying, and they weren't organized in any way.

Frenzy responds:

Okay, thanks!

[Bomb-omb Blast!]

K

Regardless of your comments, I will give suggestions, because that is the purpose of a review.

^^Good Points^^
The music was good. It was an obvious choice and fit well with a mario themed game. The concept isn't bad either. With some improvement, this could easily be a fun game.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like you said, this needs more levels. The game as it is takes relatively no effort. I'm pretty sure I could sit here with this game forever without much problems in avoiding the bomb-omb. New levels or slow difficulty increase is needed. I also don't like the custom cursor. It is hard to click stuff.

[Flower Squadron]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics was the best part about this. You had detailed drawings and creative ones at that, and the animations weren't bad either. The lightning effects are nice too. The game was very functional. It wasn't too challenging, but still pretty fun.

^^Needs Improving^^
You have all this creative storyline and graphics, but you have absolutely no sound! You have lightning flashes, but no sound! Add some sound, it will make this game appear much better than it does now. Also, games like this are always more fun with waves and stuff such as that.

[Hunchback Harry]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not bad groundwork for a good game. The backgrounds were quite interesting, and the level designs weren't bad. The music and sound effects were good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
With some improvement this game could be a lot better. The main problem I see is the detection and spawn death problem. I think I got a few cheap deaths when I clearly didn't touch an obstacle, and sometimes those flying guys would hit me right when I respawned, which was even worse. You need to trim down the detection area a bit for this.

[Ultimate Homer SB V.2.0]

K

^^Good Points^^
The preloader had to be the best part about this. It was very creative how you made it look like the Simpson's television. Then the soundboard looked nice too. I liked the color scheme. The sound clips were very funny, a great selection to choose from and get a good laugh from.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really only needs fine tuning as a soundboard. You could use some simple Yes/No replies in this to make it better for prank calls, and also try making sure all of the sound clips are around the same volume. Some stuff from older episodes are really low.

[Dumb & Dumber Soundboard]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ah! A soundboard for one of the greatest movies every to be made! I commend you on making this, I don't know why I never did one! The sound clips you had on here were some hilarious ones, it really makes me want to watch this movie again. Very funny stuff, nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
There are a countless number of funny clips from that movie, so perhaps you could have added a few more into this. I was kind of surprised at how few there were, since there are so many good ones.

IAmSaul responds:

Yeah i might make a V2 of it with more sounds.