FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[dress-up kirsten dunst]

Oy...

^^Good Points^^
Your drawing of Kirsten isn't bad. The colors and shaping is realistic and pretty believable. Some of the items of clothing looked nice as well, and everything fit.

^^Needs Improving^^
There are only sixteen pieces of clothing, and most of them are just the same piece with different colors. I didn't really like the angle either, and the clothing, though it fit, was hard to get just right. Add some more clothing pieces would be a good start.

[Toilet Paper]

This is horrible.

^^Good Points^^
To be honest, the drawings weren't really half bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
Replacing a roll of toilet paper. If I wanted to do this, I would walk in to my bathroom and replace the roll. Why would I want to do this on the internet as well? Doing it in real life, I actually complete the job! In this game, the toilet paper just sticks to the mouse and won't go off, so I never really get to change the roll. I'm really disappointed. I guess.

[Phycic Powers: One]

Close..

^^Good Points^^
This was pretty close to what I was thinking. The only thing you got wrong was the animal. This is pretty cool. I haven't given much thought about how it works, but it I have no idea how you did it.

^^Needs Improving^^
From the other reviews, it doesn't seem like this is too accurate, which could really make this not so fun to play for some people. Also, on the "Pick your animal" screen, you asked for another country and not an animal.

[Shaolin Dodgeball]

Kind of boring

^^Good Points^^
The graphics are of course very good in this, and I think this is most of the reason it has such a high score. The drawings and animations are very good as is the shading. The music also goes along with the far east type theme in the graphics and game play. This is an original game with lots of neat stuff in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sadly, I got bored of this game quite quickly. And thanks for telling me that that carrot was infact some type of dynamite.

[UFO Encounter]

Decent

^^Good Points^^
The game works pretty well, I haven't found any bugs with it. The drawings are pretty good, and the sound effects are my favorite part.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm pretty sure your High Scores Table doesn't work, since it's been loading for about three minutes now. I didn't like the black and white background, you should really add some colors. The game play wasn't that fun either. It's really repetitive.

[]{ombat interactive]

A fansite in a flash movie!

^^Good Points^^
Let's see, you've got all of the characters from the original MK in here with their moves and bio and so forth. This is a neat little collection of everything and is easier than downloading a bunch of fatatlity videos.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could have added some more characters. I don't know why you just stopped at the MK1 characters. Also, I don't see why the Stats info is on the secret page. It would make more sense in the character page itself.

jack-o-sticks responds:

thank you for your insight but i thought that it would be better to have the mk 1 mk 2 mk 3 mk 4 seperate i mean this size of this is over 3000mb
and there is a 5000mb upload limit but i will be submitting further work in the ]{ombat interactive series so keep witing

[Quake3-Interactive(DM12)]

Pretty good!

^^Good Points^^
Interactive games like this are always pretty fun, innovative, and interesting to play. I didn't play through the whole thing, but it seems to be a pretty decent length and it's pretty fun. The graphics look nice and the decisions were sometimes hard to make, which made this challenging.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only major problem I have with this is that you should make the buttons a rectangle with an alpha of 0, and not just the text. It's really hard to push the text buttons quickly.

[Quake Trainer ver 1.5]

I don't like this

^^Good Points^^
I like Quake! But this didn't really remind me of Quake at all, nor did it train me for it.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, I can barely make out the enemies, who only spawn from three different places on the screen, which makes the game too repetitive and very boring. The blood looked like crap, and the scene stayed the same. I have no idea what McDonalds has to do with this either. Not a very good game.

[Sniper Terror - The Game]

Not a good game

^^Good Points^^
I liked how you had a scene before each mission to brief on the mission. and that is just about all.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your graphics are pretty terrible. Your drawings need lots of improving. Also, I don't like the music at all, as the previous reviewer said, there should be some kind of toggle. I also didn't like how there were almost no sound effects, and gunshots only sounded when you hit your target and not when you missed. There isn't a lot of interactivity besides shooting, which makes this very boring. This game is just poorly done.

[The Random Word Generator]

How pointless...

^^Good Points^^
I liked the graphical layout of this. It looks kind of weird, but atleast you just didn't use a crappy single colored background. It's obvious you put some time into this because of the background and the coding seems complicated. I liked how the font and colors are somewhat random, and the music was pretty cool as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
While this is somewhat entertaining, it's still pointless. Random letters that don't even form real words all of the time doesn't really make much sense to me.