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[Leela Soundboard]

K

^^Good Points^^
One of your better soundboards that I've seen recently. I like how you organized this into sections, making it really easy to prank call someone with this one. The clips were pretty funny for a character that doesn't have too many funny lines in my opinion. Good graphics too. I think you put a better effort into this than some of your other boards.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I like everything to be concise, and you made really large buttons and wasted a lot of space. You could have easily fit everything on to one frame for this one.

Frenzy responds:

Ok, thanks.

And about the buttons, yeah, I thought I should have done smaller buttons after I'd made them, too.

Thanks again!

.frenZy.

[Run to the Portal 2!]

K

^^Good Points^^
This new frontpage mode is pretty enjoyable. I'm glad that you took my advice along with some others to include a mode like this. The win/lose screen is cool too since that is what really happens to most movies. Keeping classic in here was a good idea too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, frontpage mode has its bugs. You really shouldn't make it so you rise/fall, since falling makes it easier to scope out and get the scores you want, and when you are at the top, it is impossible to avoid bad scores.

[Fan Game 0.39]

K

^^Good Points^^
This game has a good concept. I like strategy type games, so this was right down my alley. This was quite unique and I could see this improving a lot.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is more frustrating than anything. I don't like how by putting your mouse over the ball it moves all around like crazy. Touching it shouldn't do anything in my opinion. The ball would also get stuck in the little squares, which was really annoying. Also some sound effects or music would do this good.

Review Request Club.

LuckyLollipopLad responds:

Touching the ball with the fan doesn't do anything special. It's just that the power of the fan varies in inverse proportion to the distance from it, so as you get close, it'll start moving away faster as the air blowing on it is closer and has more power.

You're totally right about the getting stuck. I really should try and source some cool sfx.

Thanks for the review!

Stay funky.

[Tangerine Panic]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hell, this game made me laugh more than most movies do! I thought it was pretty hilarious how the little guy kept saying stuff about the tangerines, and just the thought of that many tangerines is pretty hilarious. The game itself is very fun to play and gets very difficult very quick making it a quick game, but still very addicting. Great job on this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I can't really say much here. You could of course make some new graphics or something.

[Breakout GAME!!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, I guess the idea of having continents as levels isn't bad, but it would make sense to have the blocks make the shape of that continent.

^^Needs Improving^^
There are a lot of problems with this game. The sound first off is terrible. The music is about the most annoying noise I've ever heard. You definitely need to change that. Also, the life meter at the bottom will block the ball and make it bounce up. The ball itself...I have no control over which way it moves, which makes the game a lot more boring than the original. As you already know, there is a bug that won't let one go to the second level either.

[Outer Space Tutorial]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad tutorial. You obviously knew what you were doing, as the scene looked good, and you explained the gradients and stars well. I really like the black to white technique for the stars. This was well presented and very professional.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a little short, and I feel you could have added some more to this. You could have done planets or close up stars etc. Plus that scene wasn't all that exciting, perhaps some weird space anomalies!

[Pong <BooGames>]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it's pong and the game was functional.

^^Needs Improving^^
The first thing I noticed was that music doesn't end when you click on something. For example, if you go to the instructions then back to the menu, the music will keep playing from the original visit to the menu, plus once again. Then when you play the game, you still hear the menu music. The game also isn't original at all, and the color scheme is just horrible. Plus the fact that there is no win in one player mode.

boomoto responds:

like i said 2 player game thats what pong is, 1 player mode is practice, now for that sound thing your right, i might sound liek a noob but it was being really gay normally stopAllSounds; would do it but not here i have no idea why it didnt work i think i might be done with this for a bit for it was just for a 1 week grade 12 com tech project but yeah if anyone knows another way to stop sound send a letter to [e-mail] ty

[Run to the Portal!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hah, this game was really quite entertaining! The music was great since it was a paragon song that isn't completely overused. The game itself was coded very well. It was extremely challenging, even seemingly impossible to win, but that just made it that much fun. Very cool how it is based on NG portal too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think it would be better if you separated this into two parts. First a endless mode like you have, and then a timed mode. Like with the real portal, you could see the score after two hundred votes too see if you won, and also incorporate the blam after a certain amount of votes for a certain score deal. That would be a lot cooler.

[V Soundboard]

K

^^Good Points^^
Yes, this is a pretty unique review, I'm sure no one has made a soundboard for this movie, so good job on making it. I thought some of the sound clips were pretty interesting, and they could be used for a prank call. I also thought the graphics were well done in this.

^^Needs Improving^^
There wasn't a lot of clips in here. It would be a lot better if you had simple greetings/questions, and that would make it much better for a prank call and such.

Frenzy responds:

A unique review? o___O

Lol, anyway, thanks!

.frenZy.

[Gordon R's Kitchen Hell]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a decent game. I liked the graphics, you did a lot for the background, and the cooking sprite was cool too. I also liked how you put the sound clips from the show in this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sound clips were good, but you should have added a few more, since the ones you have get old pretty quick. I also think you could make the rounds a little shorter and try to add a few rounds. Both rounds were incredibly easy, so you need some added difficulty.