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[Fractal Generator Toy]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was somewhat fun to play around with. The interface was pretty easy to understand even though it takes some time to get used to. The variables were fun to mess around with and there was a lot to do with this game.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could have perhaps added some different colors to mess around with, and maybe a few songs would be nice.

[Kira in a Bubble v0.1]

K

^^Good Points^^
The game isn't too bad. I can see the newer version you promise during this game to be pretty decent when it is finished.

^^Needs Improving^^
First, there is no such thing as a "cursor key" which confused me in the controls. The text all over is really small and incredibly hard to make out. The game itself is a little boring, not much to it, and the lack of sound doesn't help the game out at all either.

[Magic Jet 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was an excellent game, and I was pretty impressed by it. It definitely is an original idea, to have a side scrolling shooter, usually set in a space-age environment, actually set in an old fashioned Asian environment with sages and wisemen as characters. The storyline was interesting, it definitely made the game more interesting, and the game play was overall very smooth. Well thought out and challenging as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I wasn't sure what the controls were to start out, which was a little frustrating, and I didn't see an instruction page at any point either.

[Teh Uber Tut: Sprites]

K

^^Good Points^^
A decent musical choice. Seems like you at least know something about sprites.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is really a lacking tutorial. There are already sprite tutorials on NG, and you really didn't add anything besides the bare minimum of animating sprites. If you are going to make a tutorial in this day and age it has to have at least something special about it. This had a bland graphical layout, and had way too many words per slide. It is intimidating to see all of that text on one page, try splitting it up.

[Modern Marvels QG 11]

K

^^Good Points^^
The intro was good, but that wasn't made specifically for this edition, so it hardly even counts.

^^Needs Improving^^
Another lame quiz game made by you. The questions are really not even that interesting and they just seem to be random facts that no one is going to know. The graphics are very sloppy and are too plain. At least spicing up these graphically would help somewhat.

bkdude responds:

1: if i edited the intro each time i made a new quiz game, it would take me about 10 minutes longer to work on these, bringing me up to 35 minutes a game (hehehe) which a kid like me dosent have :-)

2: if you watched Modern Marvels you would know these facts :-)

i do respect your opinions though, since you are obviously more experience with Flash then i am. but i am only 13 and your 16. so meh i guess were even or whatever. Im still going to make atleast 3 or 4 of these a week since they all seem to pass with a 2.2+ and if people see these more often they are more likely to vote higher.

good day to you sir >:[

[Nut Drop.]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely the best game I've reviewed so far today. The graphics were nice, the backgrounds were drawn pretty well, and I liked the animations of the squirrel running. The game was pretty cool with all of the different upgrades and downgrades, and the game got progressively harder pretty quickly. A fun game overall.

^^Needs Improving^^
A few times my mouse fell off the screen and I lost a few lives, but I guess that was probably of my own fault.

[starGrab]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were refreshing in this movie. The mouse effects were pretty cool, and the stars moved randomly, which made the game a bit harder.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is just pretty bland to me. You just pick up the stars indefinitely until you hit a red one, which I purposely did after about 50 stars just out of boredom. You need to add something more to your next game to make it more playable.

[Bee Shooter]

K

^^Good Points^^
Decent music in this. Sound effects weren't bad either, and the game had some decent graphics throughout.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really not much to this game at all. The design of th game isn't good, with the tall screen, since it takes you so long to move up and down. A player can just completely ignore half of the screen without penalty. I also really hate it when I am killed by my enemy after I shoot it. There is the split second for the death scene, where the bee still comes at you, and I died a few times from that.

carborundum responds:

The game was only basic I was suprised to even get to 2.92 concidering Its did not take me long to make the game was just a tester For the final game the final game is very different but it was getting to work on learning basic shooting a collisions along with the ability to move If anyone wishs to per veiw the Game i am Making please send me a message and I can give you a link to my website which the tester is one updated every few updates made

[Metal Gear GuardQuiz]

K

^^Good Points^^
This quiz started out with a pretty funny little animation, which is a lot better than just going right into the quiz. But either way, the quiz was a pretty funny one to take. The questions were humorous, and the answers were even more so. I like how at the end, you are most qualified for giving the worst answers. Good parody of the game.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could have definitely used some more graphically. Perhaps some kind of backgrounds going on. You are good at drawing, just add some MC's related to the questions.

[Insult Generator 2000]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good insult generator. The insults were well structured and were pretty funny to start out with. Maybe I will use some of them in the future. I liked the Long insult section, since it actually broke down the nouns and adjectives, which was neat to see.

^^Needs Improving^^
It is unfortunate that you didn't put the verbs in that section of this, as that is what I was really interested in. Is molesting and raping the only two verbs? In any event I know there aren't many, so you could have had a few more verbs in there.