FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[StarWars Battler *FULL*]

K

^^Good Points^^
The only part that I found mildly entertaining was the Kill Jar-Jar part, because he is the worst character every made, so I do want to kill him.

^^Needs Improving^^
About the dancing, it was really poorly animated and took too long to start. The fights don't really make sense. Mace and Yoda, I don't think, would ever fight each other since they are both jedi and have great respect for each other. The fights are from really far away, so they look really lame. I want to see fights close up, not from a mile away. Sound quality was pretty low, and you really raped the sound effects enough.

[Mario Game]

Ok, but has some obvious flaws

^^Good Points^^
The game isn't too bad. You used Mario sprites and animated jumping, which shows you've got some graphical talent. The controls are easy and I couldn't find any bugs.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's really easy to get to the end, unless you fall in the ditch that you can't get out of. If you are going to make the game's object to go as far as you can, you should atleast have some kind of score system or something. You just get a game over no matter what, which doesn't allow for replay value.

[To Kill a Goth]

A low score...

^^Good Points^^
This is surprisingly good compared to other games in its score range. The drawings were pretty good, and the fact that your voice overs were pretty on, and that you used shading puts you ahead of the bunch. The voice overs are humorous, and this has a few other funny parts. I'm surprised at the score.

^^Needs Improving^^
The gun and the death scene are pretty lame, which is the main point of this game, which is why i only gave it a three.

[old people killer trial]

Crap

^^Good Points^^
I guess the drawings were the best part in this game, yet they were horrible.

^^Needs Improving^^
There is no sound, your drawing of an "old person" really looks more like a young baby or something. The blood is poorly drawn, shooting old people is not fun, and I'm pretty certain that the last shot does not do anything. Better luck next time.

[ZOMBIES]

Layers

^^Good Points^^
You tried, I really think that you did try to make this good.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm sorry, but this didn't come across as scary as you had hoped it would. In fact, it is downright stupid. This guy becomes a zombie then gets shot by this guy and that is all that happens. The drawings were terrible, you should really learn to use layers or something, it's obvious that you don't. Your animations are lack luster, and this just didn't turn out too good.

[The Fart Library]

Weak

^^Good Points^^
This game is nice and consice, that is something that I always like to see in a game.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is just a bunch of clips of fart noises attached to buttons. I don't really see a point in this. You suggest making a song, but I as well as the majority of NG users aren't eight years old, so we may not enjoy doing this. You also mistook a burp for a fart.

[Cloud Game]

Not a bad start

^^Good Points^^
This game isn't half bad. I found this to be pretty entertaining, and at some points it was pretty challenging as well. The graphics are done pretty well, I liked the shading and gradients used. The game was simple, but fun to play, which is how I like games.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is really short, and not particularly hard to finish. There are only three levels, you should add some more. Also, some sound effects would be easy to add and it should be pretty obvious which sound effects to add.

[Robot Maker]

This could be decent

^^Good Points^^
I think it's pretty evident that you put some thought into this. There are a bunch of different options like color, pieces and background and the interface is simple and very interactive and has a lot of features. This game isn't too bad, but there are a few reasons this has the score that it does.

^^Needs Improving^^
While this game has a lot of options, no one wants to deal with playing a game with crap graphics. You really whored out gradients. I mean, look at your "Country" background, do you think you could make that a little better? I think it's very possible. Also somethings aren't layered right, like the neck goes over top of the head.

[Dress Ricky Martin]

It has its moments

^^Good Points^^
One thing that I liked about this game was the three different themed rooms and how the music was different for each themed room. This is a pretty original idea, and is much better than having a single cluttered stage with a single music choice.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like your drawings of Ricky, it's pretty much lakcing details, as are most of the clothes you have in here, which makes this game really below average and boring. Plus Ricky Martin isn't a character I would care to screw with.

[The Lowrider!]

Not very good

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I could see the point in this game and what you wanted out of it, but really this game is pretty lame.

^^Needs Improving^^
The first thing I noticed is that the loop in the scrolling background is horrible and not even close to being smooth. For some reason the trunk disappears when you do a trick. The tricks are pretty lame and I never got the "Driving in the air" thing you mentioned. This is pretty lame.