FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Perspectives: 2 Point]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
It's an interesting tutorial. You have some decent information in here and some decent drawings to show that you know what you are doing. I liked the music.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't like how you say to erase the lines. Much easier just to select them and delete. Also, I think this went on a bit longer than it should have.

[Catch The Chicken]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Game has potential. The graphics were good, premise wasn't bad either. Just needs a bit of improvement.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, I really did not like this too much. For one thing, the music was incredibly irritating. It sounds like someone trying to kill their guitar, and no sound effects to offset this. Anyway, game play was boring and way too easy. It really took no effort to complete each level and honestly I just got too bored to get past level 2.

[Sketchez The Game]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty good. I think if you applied the skills used to make this game into something more challenging, it would be good.

^^Needs Improving^^
First thing that annoyed me was the fact that the screen was so huge. It didn't even fit on my 17" monitor running at 1024x768, which I've never experienced before. The game itself is way too simple to be enjoyable. As I said, make a puzzle more complex and challenging.

[intro to ballroom v.6]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well, you are right. Not many dancing tutorials on NG nowadays. I'm not sure there isn't a reason for that anyway.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not a very good tutorial. The graphics were pretty lame, with lots of ugly gradients for filling. The tutorials didn't really seem that clear to me. I think it would be better if you had some type of animation rather than just freeze frame steps.

[PeP's Shooting Game]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A pretty solid shooting game here. The graphics were nice, lots of detail in all of your drawings. The opening scene is pretty cool as well. Game play was simple, but the detection was good, which made it pretty enjoyable.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game was really easy. Beat it on my first try with no problem, and only four levels doesn't make this game last too long.

[Family guy soundboardFix3]

(title in work)

I've seen each of these I believe. This one is really no better or anything different than the other three. The sounds weren't that good. They were all different volumes and are not good for prank calling at all. The image quality was terrible. I think some of the longer ones should have been separated.

[Open Space]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A simplistic and enjoyable game. The graphics remind me of an old vector based game I used to play very similar to this. Game play was smooth. I like how the screen shook slightly when you took damage. Challenging and fun to play.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm, maybe the enemies could have varied a bit from wave to wave. I did about five or so waves and it was basically the same thing over and over.

[Shitemon]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Really a shame that you didn't finish this. I think the satire was quite funny found in this movie. The graphics were pretty good, especially the animations. Looked like a promising movie had it been finished.

^^Needs Improving^^
Obviously the fact that this isn't finished. Other than that, I would have liked to go back to the shitemon choice menu instead of back to the beginning of the movie.

[XWL Stix Game1]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I thought this was pretty neat. It had quite a few different moves in here, most of which were pretty well animated and looked good when performed. I'm surprised this doesn't have a higher score, honestly.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use some better instructions. I was not sure how to activate most of the moves at first until I found you had to hold down a key to perform the moves.

[(under construction)]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
To be honest, it's more interesting than just putting a blank screen and telling people you put this down. The art was pretty good, and I liked the song as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Don't understand why you haven't just asked to have this removed instead of putting this here. Not sure if this was a recent change or not, but it will probably stay like this for quite a while.