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[Advanced Buttons Tutorial]

(title in work)

Eh, there are definitely a bunch of much better button tutorials out there. The content in this is a little sketchy. I think you need to go more into the AS part of this and explain it a bit more. If I were making my first button, I'm sure the AS here would be a bit puzzling.

Also, might want to go with a more interesting color scheme than black and white next time.

[Clips]

(title in work)

The concept is not bad. It's a fun little game to waste time, but like you said, you need to find some AI for people to play alone. Also, it would be great if I could have gone back to the menu from within the game. Other than that, you should probably work on making the graphics a bit more interesting.

[Doom Triple Pack]

(title in work)

I liked it overall. Considering how accurately you transferred this into flash i think it is pretty amazing. There are some obvious flaws though. The controls do not transfer so well into flash. This feels very awkward to control at times. Also too easy to get stuck on walls and corners.

[Volumoke]

(title in work)

It's not a bad idea. I think some more instructions could be useful for this. I was kind of playing this without great instructions and am not sure whether I was really doing anything correctly. Sensitivity seemed a bit off even when I adjusted things.

facemonger24 responds:

really? i tried to make the instructions as thorough as possible. did you play the tutorial level first? the button with a T on it?

[SameBall]

(title in work)

Quite good... I was expecting it to be another cloned game, but this was actually something I haven't played already. It was challenging even though it seems quite simple. The quick pace was nice. I really didn't like how the screen got blurry when you destroyed some balls, it kind of freaked me out D:

[Paddysgold]

(title in work)

I think the really redeeming part of this movie is the graphics. Very nice job on that aspect of this. Playing the game itself wasn't that fun. The game offered little challenge and the controls were kind of awkward. I think if you worked on the controls a bit more this would be much better.

[Snooker Balls Up]

(title in work)

Excellent game here. I really like the avoider genre, but usually there isn't much different from game to game. This one however added a new element, which was that the balls you needed to avoid interacted with each other. This definitely put a twist on the game and added some challenge. Nice job on this one, even though I was disappointed I didn't get to play snooker ;)

[Adventure of a ninja 2]

(title in work)

Hehe, well I guess the only thing I really enjoyed about this was how the ninja apparently could fly by hanging on to a broom. You need to bring this interesting humor to something better. The graphics were pretty poor in this, so work on that. Also, try not to make this so linear. There are no options of what to do in this, so it's really not a game. Just a movie where you control the speed.

Lare responds:

Thanks, I'll try to improve.

[Christmas Crunch]

(title in work)

A holiday themed puzzle game...just in time. You stuck with the theme very well...bright colors, music, ornaments. Game functioned well and was easy to get into and play for a while. No problems with it, but still nothing really new added to the other version of this game, other than the theme.