FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Creep]

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Hmm, a nice, short collab overall. I'm not really sure how you went about constructing this, but the graphical styles throughout did not change much at all, which is one of the things I like about collaborations. Regardless, it was well drawn and animated. The music was quite good, and went well with this. The ending was a bit of a disappointment, but unexpected nonetheless. Overall, a pretty good movie.

[A Grand Ship]

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A nice submission overall. The graphics were kind of textured almost so that they looked almost aged a bit. With that it fit the theme of this well. The voice overs were well done, I bought that they were pirate voices. The jokes were good too. You had some pop-culture jokes in here as well, which is something you don't see all that often. My only gripe is that the lip syncing is pretty well off at times throughout this.

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[[TT] CD09 -thdrky-]

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Really this seemed like more of a barrage of black stereotypes and jokes rather than an insult to thedrkness. That really took away from the purpose of this movie for me. Overall very boring, since there was no animation at all, and the art wasn't good to begin with. Definitely could have used some more animations and scene changes.

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YukariYakumo responds:

Yeah, I know. Since we started at 5PM Clock Day we really didn't have time to make anything better, but next time I'll make sure we start earlier.

[Stairs Can be Dangerous]

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I think what bothers me most about this is the fact that the physics are so unrealistic in this. The whole staircase not falling over with no supports just bothers me. In terms of the quality of the movie, this was pretty bad overall. Animations were quite elementary and the storyline was predictable if anything.

[Runaway Wolves]

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This had a lot wrong with it. Controlling the whole flow of most of the movie with buttons was a poor idea I think. For the ending it was fine, but a bit redundant for the rest of it. A replay button would have been nice so I could try some other endings. Graphically it was pretty lame. Could have used some shading and better animations.

[Bob and Donny]

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Well you definitely hit the nail in the head with the description of this. Graphics were poor, sound was also bad. You need a better microphone, or perhaps you could have used speakonia or something for the computer voice. Storyline wasn't particularly funny, more just present and weak.

[Hock]

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Hahaha. That was quite funny even though I'm not sure if that is exactly what you were going for. The sound effects I think were the best part. The pecking, the "You fool!" sound clip were both great additions. A very strange movie but also very comical and interesting to watch. I wish you had continued this one.

[F L i G H T]

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I just can't knock anything that someone puts so much time and effort into. Your passion for this project was clear and everything was well thought out. Throughout this movie we see many abstract things that really tickle the mind and make you think about what is going on not only in the movie but in our lives as well.

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someplaceelse responds:

Thank you so much. Your review really helped me. I'm glad you thought about my cartoon this way ^_^

[Otakuhell At Animefest 09]

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Ok, so I have no idea what Otakuhell is and this really doesn't tell me anything especially since it apparently happened 8 days ago, but regardless, this animation was very well done in my opinion. The best thing about this was that it was perfectly synced to the music. The cycles of the text movie clips were perfectly on with the beat of the music, and that is something most cannot achieve. Also, but music made me laugh, so overall surprisingly entertaining.

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[Mac, PC, and a Hedgehog]

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This had it's high points and low points. I enjoyed how you made Mac a cracked out dude, since I'm not a fan of Mac's. I don't really get this entirely though. Why would thing that does the tasks of MobianWare compete against computers? In any event, the graphics were a mixed bag. The lip syncing was pretty good, but the animations overall were pretty simple and not extremely well done. An interesting story, but I think it went on for a bit too long, especially with the looping 30 second jingle in the background.

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RecD responds:

yeah, I'm going to try to keep future animations fresher.